Summary: A father forbids his son from dating a girl named larisa, but when she finds out she deals with things in her own way.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 6212 Read Count: 23558
Giantess World
Penname: Zalrus IX [Contact] Real name: Yes, please. Oh, that's sex, isn't it. Oh well, got to stay the course.
Member Since: December 22 2006
Membership status: Member
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[Report This] Published: January 17 2007 Updated: January 20 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed 
Date: January 18 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One
Author's Response:
Date: January 18 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One
You have gone very far with your grammer Auskafan (interesting name by the way do tell me why). This is some of the best grammer I've seen you use in this story, very high quality, very high.
Anyways, good story, very good and I hope this turns out to be a happy ending when this is all over, mabye with a duex ex machina (the literary device not the writer) form yours truly or not anyway good.
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Author's Response:
thanks, I like to thank i improve a little with each story, so by the process of writing 84 stories your bound to pick up a few things. So thanks alot for the compliment on the grammar. Its something i have been working at over the years.
I called it the chamber because there are some scenes when larisa is torturing the main character by keeping in her shoe, and i thought it would be like a chamber, and then she keeps him in a sock and so on. So since he was in these places i thought what would they be like to him, and it would seem like a chamber. So there you have it.
I hope you continue to enjoy the story.Summary:
Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 223390
On June 7, 2008, the Forest Lake High School of San Pequeno, CA disappeared without a trace. A four-year investigation proved inconclusive. Of the estimated three hundred students and faculty present that day, none were found.
This is their story.
Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 223390
[Report This] Published: January 19 2007 Updated: June 24 2009
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: July 28 2007 Title: Chapter 7: 10:00
Author's Response: I've got some ideas for how they'll fight back, Zal. You'll see soon enough, but probably not until a chapter or two from now.
Date: July 28 2007 Title: Chapter 7: 10:00
I also have a question. I wonder if the men will be able to play a big part apart form being stratigests. Like what you did in A Man of His Time, where the ben were armed with toxic darts. Will there be anything like that. Good stroy though apart from that conundrum.
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Author's Response: I've got some ideas for how they'll fight back, Zal. You'll see soon enough, but probably not until a chapter or two from now.
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: April 30 2007 Title: Chapter 5: 9:00
Author's Response:
Date: April 30 2007 Title: Chapter 5: 9:00
very good. I've noticed this story had more plotlines as Pirates of the carrebian: dead man's chest, so I hope you tie up those loose ends in the process of giving us what we want.
so hope that next chapter is a-near
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Author's Response:
Oh, I have all those plotlines planned out. Made a flow chart and everything.
I can't tell you when the next chapter will be here, because I don't know myself. But I'm working on it...
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 28 2007 Title: Chapter 3: 8:00
Author's Response:
Date: January 28 2007 Title: Chapter 3: 8:00
Teh plot thickens! I'll admit that I was a bit skeptical of this narrator, as I felt he would be another Holden C-type (And I HATED catcher in the rye, because of that , um, PHONEY!), but good, very good. I've alwys been interested in the idea of diffrent sizes, adds a bit of varity. Well I hope this gets updated soon!
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P.S. I hope someone reads my fanfiction on fanfiction.com so people can tell me if it would be wise to put on this web site (Same penname)
Author's Response:
Catcher in the Rye annoyed me as well. I assure you that Carl isn't Holden. They're both misanthropes, but beyond that the similarity ends. This may become clearer over time.
As far as your fanfic goes, if it's GTS oriented, just post it. This place will accept almost anything that's relevant.
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 25 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 7:30
Author's Response: Both A Man of His Time and The Forest Lake Incident are written intentionally in the present tense. For MOHT, it was because I liked the immediacy of present tense, and the "you-are-there" feel it gave to the action. For Forest Lake, it's because it's from a first-person viewpoint, and it is quite possible that certain narrators will not survive the story's duration.
Date: January 25 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 7:30
Oh, yeah, another thing. Why do you write the majority of your stories in present tense? I mean it seems almost natural to switch into past, and it elleviates the mistake of changing tenses, and thus less crow-eating-soul-ings. Esplain!
Respond and update soon
Zalrus IX
Author's Response: Both A Man of His Time and The Forest Lake Incident are written intentionally in the present tense. For MOHT, it was because I liked the immediacy of present tense, and the "you-are-there" feel it gave to the action. For Forest Lake, it's because it's from a first-person viewpoint, and it is quite possible that certain narrators will not survive the story's duration.
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 20 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 7:30
Author's Response:
Date: January 20 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 7:30
Cery good. I was wondering what you were doing all this time. However, you switched tenses in the second paragraph (as I said before if you switch tenses a crow will eat your soul). Also theperson change was a bit confusing, but oh well, good stuff nevertheless, good stuff
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Author's Response:
Yeah, it's probably bad to switch tenses. I try to avoid it, but it looks like I slipped up.
The change in narrators was meant to be disconcerting. There's going to be another in the next chapter, then it should settle into a fairly regular pattern.
Keep reading!
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: February 12 2007 Title: Chapter 4: 8:30
Author's Response: The update will probably take a while, Zal. I'm on vacation at the end of this week and won't have access to a computer I can write on. I promise that I'll try to get it done as soon as I can, tough.
Date: February 12 2007 Title: Chapter 4: 8:30
Very good. I like it.Good Grammer, good story, good charecters, and a cliffhanger at the end (sort of) Who could ask for more? keep up the good work and update soon!
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: The update will probably take a while, Zal. I'm on vacation at the end of this week and won't have access to a computer I can write on. I promise that I'll try to get it done as soon as I can, tough.
Summary: Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26648 Read Count: 182127
Categories: Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26648 Read Count: 182127
[Report This] Published: January 22 2007 Updated: July 05 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 24 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In Cindy’s Care
Author's Response: I appreciate your input and will do better with my writing in the future. Thanks
Date: January 24 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In Cindy’s Care
I'm sorry. Ijust can't stand it. USE QUOTATIONS. We are writing Stories. Stories contain Dialogue Which require Qotations. Just do what you are doing now, but add quotations, otherwise people will not want to read any further. Good story
P.S. please respond to reviews. because if you do, more people will want to. Just look at Nfalc, and SW and others.
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: I appreciate your input and will do better with my writing in the future. Thanks
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 26 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Confused, Used, and Abused
Author's Response: I do listen. thanks for the insight.
Date: January 26 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Confused, Used, and Abused
Yes! You can be taught! Very very very good improvement, just remember to end the quotations as well, and very good twist. I hope things work out in the end, but I think it will.
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Author's Response: I do listen. thanks for the insight.
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 29 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Working at the Beauty Parlor
Author's Response: noted....thanks
Date: January 29 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Working at the Beauty Parlor
Another thing about grammer. AVOID USING ALL CAPS. IF YOU USE ALL CAPS, PEOPLE WILL THINK YOU ARE UNPROFESSIONAL AND THINGS, AS YOU CAN SEE< IT"S VERY BAD. yeah, so, avoid that. Thank you and good story. I likie where this is going. Roxanne looks like a hero, very.
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Author's Response: noted....thanks
Summary:
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5535 Read Count: 82984
A shrunken man who longs for a girl who lives alone in her apartment has some thoughts of trying to seek her attention in any way for her to help him, but at the same time he fears her at the possibilities she can act on him....
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5535 Read Count: 82984
[Report This] Published: January 25 2007 Updated: January 29 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: January 30 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Sanity
Date: January 30 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Sanity
This is odd. First, it seems that she needs somebody to love, very coincidental I might add, but at the end she's evil. While I have noproblem I feel this very unreal. I know you might say that this whole genre isn't real, but it isn't real literarily, if you know what I mean. Unless she's mentaly unstable, there is no way htat could happen. But I like it, and good grammer, except you're is very very very very very diffrent from your. KNOW TEH DIFFRENCE.
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Summary: A woman and her dog suffer the effects of a meteor, and so does the the local population.
Categories: Vore, Giantess, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1667 Read Count: 94920
Categories: Vore, Giantess, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1667 Read Count: 94920
[Report This] Published: February 23 2007 Updated: March 11 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: March 05 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Schools out
Date: March 05 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Schools out
Hey, okay story, just remamber to INDNT YOUR PARAGRAPHS. It's hard for the reader to read otherwise. You don't want that. INDENT.
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Zalrus IX
Summary: A little story about getting even and helping a friend...
Categories: Butt, Insertion, Vore, Crush, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11586 Read Count: 47734
Categories: Butt, Insertion, Vore, Crush, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11586 Read Count: 47734
[Report This] Published: March 14 2007 Updated: April 16 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: March 14 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I really don't know where that came from :-) Corrected now! thanks for the heads up!
Date: March 14 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
is there a subliminal message? I keep hearing 17... 17...17...17...17...17...17...17...rule..world...
ex17plain
Zalrus I17X
Author's Response: I really don't know where that came from :-) Corrected now! thanks for the heads up!
Summary:
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1724 Read Count: 31546
A normal day at Brian's house goes awry when he finds himself shrinking. His one and only hope is his stepsister, Jen. But would she be so nice to him??
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1724 Read Count: 31546
[Report This] Published: April 20 2007 Updated: April 20 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: April 20 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Jen's Room
Author's Response: ty for the feedback Zalrus, i know people have mentioned a website where it can work out how big things will look at a certain i just can't find it again >.< I appreciate the feedback and will try to work it out better
Date: April 20 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Jen's Room
It's a good story, but there is a diffrentation of sixze. At first you say he is dall-sized, and then Jen mistakes him for a bug and she has fingers the size of 18-wheelers. You can't change the hight just whenever you want. this is confusing.
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: ty for the feedback Zalrus, i know people have mentioned a website where it can work out how big things will look at a certain i just can't find it again >.< I appreciate the feedback and will try to work it out better
Summary:
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 161 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271518 Read Count: 1718847
Neverquest was supposed to be a game, a virtual reality world, an MMORPG where Women rule. But after a virus enters the system, the characters begin to question their own reality as it slowly changes around them...
This is the FIRST book in the Adelais series.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 161 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271518 Read Count: 1718847
[Report This] Published: April 20 2007 Updated: May 21 2012
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: June 01 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Date: June 01 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
This is very similar to J.R.R Tolkien's line of books....
explain! (Very Very Very good story though)
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Zalrus IX
Summary:
Categories: Unaware, Instant Size Change, Crush, Teenager (13-19), Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 611 Read Count: 10162
A FETISH AT SCHOOL GOES WRONG WHEN YOU GET SHRUNK AND NOBODY KNOWS EXCEPT YOUR EVIL TEACHER.
Categories: Unaware, Instant Size Change, Crush, Teenager (13-19), Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 611 Read Count: 10162
[Report This] Published: October 05 2007 Updated: October 05 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: October 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: MRS BLOOM
Date: October 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: MRS BLOOM
Although the all caps turned me off, the indentations are good. keep with that. just slow down. develop. We are not player haters, so keep our advice.
Zalrus9
Summary: Two college-aged friends, male and female, investigate a mysterious invitation to a place called 'GTS University', under the promise of allowing women to grow into the sky. What starts out as completely innocent becomes far more involved. The girl gets to grow big, as promised, but the male...
Categories: Adventure, Breast Enlargement, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15976 Read Count: 148633
Categories: Adventure, Breast Enlargement, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15976 Read Count: 148633
[Report This] Published: November 08 2007 Updated: February 23 2010
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: November 08 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: November 08 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting, but I hope that the vore will not be glorified, or that other things are used to make evrybody happy. I personaly only like cannibalism when it is inronicly done. But really great story regardless. Hope it gets updated soon.
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Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: November 21 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: November 21 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I really like this realism. I am constanly tired of the peoplke being very p[owerless when a giantess shows up. I'm glad you are too.
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Summary:
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, New World Order, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3060 Read Count: 10009
The newest and hottest game show around. It's premise? A shrunken person, forced to fight for survival against a bigger world, and find the end game marker or die trying.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, New World Order, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3060 Read Count: 10009
[Report This] Published: November 21 2007 Updated: November 21 2007
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: November 22 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Season Two Intro
Date: November 22 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Season Two Intro
I am intrigued. However, is ther going to bve a lone maveric to undermine the show and find out its secret and have it shut down? Or is it going to be a message for another generation, like battle royale was? Or is it just those fetish stories with little plot and only splat, as they say?
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Summary: Dave thinks he's found the perfect summer job, interning for an affable but slightly mad inventor named Eddie. But Eddie's wife Carolyn appropriates her husband's shrinking machine, and Dave soon finds himself at her mercy...
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133393 Read Count: 355141
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133393 Read Count: 355141
[Report This] Published: February 06 2008 Updated: February 02 2010
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: July 29 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Date: July 29 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Very nicely done, good sir. This story seems to me to be a breath of fresh air from what I have seen in the most recent weeks at this site, and I very much hope that you continue this with more rapidity than before. I am very exited to hear what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, Zal. I kind of hope I can do the rapidity thing as well =) I've got other stories I want to write, but I'm bound and determined to get this one finished up first.