Robert must learn how to survive at one inch tall when a chemistry experiment goes horribly wrong.
Nice, More would be good.
An aspiring salesman, eager to make a good impression at the company retreat, takes a wrong turn.
Your doing a great Job, I wouldn't mind you taking time to develop Alice's character more. If I were writting the story I would make Davids shrinking slow and subtle changes from the looks of thinks he isn't having any trouble staying where he is. This is looking to be one of my favorite stories so far keep it up.
Jake is the youngest member of an all girl family, two devious older sisters and an overly protective mother. If he thought his home life was rough before, how bad will things get when he shrinks thanks to a freak accident and is at the mercy of all three of them, each with their own feelings towards him, and with their own method of coping with his new situation.
Great story so far, I already don't like skyler but the rest I enjoy will you make him very slowly get bigger that would be a change something I haven't seen on here before.