Penname: Rorschach [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

Unlike most of my stories, I will be implementing two things I don’t normally do; Micro and Unaware.

The main idea of this story is going to be where a married couple are spending time together at home. The wife is going to leave the room for awhile and accidentally shrink her husband to about ¼ of an inch in height. After this happens, our little hero is going to need to get his wife’s attention in order to be restored to normal height.


Categories: Body Exploration, Adventure, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16170 Read Count: 108893
[Report This] Published: January 28 2012 Updated: May 08 2012
Reviewer: Rorschach Signed
Date: January 28 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start. I've been a little dissapointed in the stories here lately because there's no character developement; this is a bit of a blunt way to do it, but effective. I'm definitely going to keep an eye on this one.

 

(I was a little confused when you said the Nurse was a divorced widower; then I remember the saying "One husband died, the other was an ass. Wrong one died.")

Summary:

Humanity has finally managed to travel to distant worlds through a Stargate-like means.  What they find on one planet is...well, what WE expected.

 

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Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8889 Read Count: 41260
[Report This] Published: October 09 2012 Updated: October 09 2012
Reviewer: Rorschach Signed
Date: October 09 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story seems pretty good so far (so far being I'm halfway through the first chapter), but just one thing I have to point out--95% is actually a pretty distant DNA match. Humans share 97-99% of their DNA with most animals, and plants are only a little further off.