This is an adventure story. Not all giantess and a little PG. It tells the story of a strange virus taking over the world. See what happens when the human race changes rapidly.
I just read through all 41 chapters in two days, very enjoyable to read. I like how all the giants are getting their own "ability" that sets them apart from the rest. It's turning a bit into a fantasy story with the powers but I like it, keep up the good work. =)
How many chapters do you think it'll be btw?
Thanks!! I know it's not the typical story for this site but it's been fun writing it. I have two staries I've been going back and forth between on this site. My other story is a little fairy tale called The Black Forest. I not really sure when I'll end it, there are a lot of giants with a lot of stories. I really don't feel an ending yet but I am really happy that you enjoy this. Keep an eye out for more the next chapter and Thanks again!
An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life. When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.
Wonder how long it'll take before he fully realizes he likes her.
Very sweet chapter.
Given the snail's pace I'm writing this thing, he'll probably figure it out by at least 2020. Thanks for reviewing!
Nick Avery -- tall, handsome, and well-liked-- is paired with a short, unpopular know-it-all named Michelle for a chemistry project. The experiment goes awry; Nick begins to shrink as Michelle grows taller and more beautiful. But he soon learns that Michelle had actually planned this all along, and he now must come to terms with his new position at the bottom rung of the social ladder. Only Michelle can help him now, but she is determined to make the most of her newfound power over her once-mighty lab partner.
Loving it so far.
I cant wait to see what Nick's social status will be like when he goes back to school, and the meeting with his girlfriend.
Thanks, DarcKage. I promise, he'll be returning to school soon, in chapter 4. Stay tuned!
A mean-spirited and emotionally abusive school teacher finds herself shrinking due to a classroom gas leak and suddenly at the mercy of her vengeful students.
[Removed]Liking this so far, but it's a shame you decided to end Dollhouse so soon. You could've gotten a lot more out of it.
Were you bored with it, or was it because of some of the reviewers who were way too sensitive about it?
I wasn't bored with it, I just never intended it to be more than a few chapters long; I got the impression it wasn't particularly well-liked, though, anyway by readers
Loving the story, but I cant stand how stupid Ron is when it comes to his actions, lol.
When Ron is dumb, he is VERY dumb indeed.
So she basically went from gentle giantess to murdering giantess for some reason.
I know she was set up to be extremely naive, but this is a bit too much.
You're right, it was one of the more bolder directions I've taken. I hope you continue to enjoy the story despite, Darc. I'd hate to lose readers, because I know theres still more for them to enjoy to come
A young successful man got the shrinking virus, a disease his father got before he did. How will he cope up with the fact he gets weaker ? And how will act his family and friends ?
I thought Jade was the main villain in the story for a long time, but she now seems like she's kind of helping Steven find a way out of all this. I could be wrong, but it almost feels like she wants him to succeed.
Well how to say it. Jade is a really mixed character, she doesn't understand her own feelings and only see the world and anything she does as a competition she has to win. Her relationship with steven is not really what you think, it's rather a love-rivalry relation. Jade is the kind of girl who always got what she wanted ( boys or objects) and has always been jealous of her step brother. If you like this character, the coming chapter basically speaks about her feelings and why she acts this way. (She likes to show who's the boss and feel superior but isn't that evil deep inside.)
I'm so glad you're adding new chapters, I was looking forward to reading more.
I hope Jade will hold true and help him out. But...why?
Thanks for your comment, yeah I was kind of busy , maybe in a few time if I keep the motivation to do it the next one will be uploaded fast.
A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking. Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …
I didnt expect him to submit this early in.
I really wonder how small you'll have him get until he stops. (if he ever stops)
Yeah, maybe if I were to rewrite the story I would have made him put up a stronger fight for longer than he did. I still like how it turned out this way too, though.
Another great chapter.
Though, I was expecting him to be extremely furious for being left at the parking lot like that, but it got a bit downplayed as he let himself get bossed around for some reason.
Yeah, my thinking was that he was really thirsty -- like, dangerously thirsty -- and all he could think about was how to get a glass of water at the time. But I can see how it might not have played out as well as I thought it would in my head, or seemed as realistic. But I still have bad memories of living in Florida and being drenched in sweat during long walks home, so maybe it feels worse to me, lol.
I like how you're using the basketball sessions to really show how she's getting more and more difficult to beat because of his drop in size.
I guess he soon wont stand a chance against her anymore at all after a few more inches.
Thanks! Yeah, I was surprised how much I enjoyed writing the basketball scenes. It really showcases the physical progression of things. Glad you liked it.
In a world where size determines what kind of person you are, what happens when an innocent person ends up the wrong size?
Great first story, I loved it.
Though surely you'll make an alternate ending where he ended with Kristen...right? ;-;
ACTUALLY I am considering doing alternate endings. If I do that won't be for a while though. So for now this is whatcha got
Good chapter.
Considering the title of the story, does that mean Kari and Kristen wont be as important anymore from here on?
They'll be back. Jaz is the first girl to get a ton of screentime but ideally I want them all to. Won't say much beyond that.
I wonder why she only wants micro-sized people. Good or bad person? O:
I'd love to see Rob with....wait for it....Kristen.
I know, shocker. O:
The possibility is certainly there. Who knows?
Off to Kristen? ;D
Hope I'm not making it too apparent I'm looking forward to her most out of the three. ;<
She's been a little underused thus far. She needs her time in the spotlight ^^
I know it's a common occurence in that world, but seeing as how the fact that you're a criminal or bad person of sorts when you shrink (usually), his friends seem to take it pretty casually that he shrunk down to 2 millimeters. Especially his girlfriend.
Great chapter though, looking forward to the next one.
Glad you're adding chapters again, I've missed this story.
I didnt expect Kari to show up so soon again, not before Kristen at least. Looking forward to the next one. ;o
Truth be told I may have swapped out Kristen and Kari's plot points a little lol. Originally the next few were on Kristen but it seemed more natural to go with Kari. Of course the stuff I planned with Kristen is still gonna happen. Things are just a little rearranged
Kristen's a huge tease, using her power over him to not play fair and win. I love her already.
Ha. She is pretty great. Glad you like her
In a world where shrunken clones called YouPets are sold as servants and toys, a young woman takes the phrase “identity crisis” to the extreme by purchasing a copy of the one person whose desires and fears she knows more deeply than anyone else: herself.
Aw, I was really rooting for mini-Jennifer, hoping she could somehow get through to the real one and make her see the error of her ways. I guess it wasnt meant to be. It's funny how I saw her as the good guy in all this, yet she would've done the same if she were the real Jennifer, which she...kind of still was. This one really messes with the head.
Great short story dude, I look forward to the next one.
Thanks for reviewing. My intention all along was to make the YouPet a very questionable good guy, seeing as she would be doing exactly what Jennifer is doing if she was her size, so I'm glad to hear it worked to an extent. Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
