Reviewer: SuperDuperSecret101 Signed 



Date: December 23 2024
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Someone’s at the Back Door
I'm curious to see where Paul's strategy takes him down this path, because it feels like his last real throw of the dice to have any meaningful chance at returning to his old life or some semblance of the relationship with Mary.
The first mention of a way out is unsurprising but I'm surprised how enthusiastic he's attempting to be, I feel like if he really wanted Mary to have a moment of realisation would likely be him intentionally withdrawing.
Being a 'willing' pet, this is just my internal thoughts as I've been reading through but if he decided instead to do as he's told but is not passionate or enthusiastic about any of it, just on autopilot would make it in the longterm incredibly awkward for his owners would be bet at his best hope - essentially allowing Paul to rob all the fun out of the arrangement from Pam in the process.
Like, maybe if he was a natural shrinkie he could've eventually embraced this life - its the fact he knows there is a way out and him trying to give a loving gift to the woman he loved and then having his trust violated, just have him outright say 'yeah, I cannot trust you ever again' but still playing the pet role I feel could cause the moment for Mary to buckle and causing tension with Pam who is desperate to try and get that spark back from Paul to make this fun again.
Essentially an engineered collapse that pits all three against each other.
Maybe Mary and Paul could somehow come to an understanding if he ends up perma stuck but its not going to work with Pam alongside, well at least with her at present size.
Again what I've enjoyed about this story is I really do struggle to see what kind of ending its leading too, it really could go either way and that tension has really made this an engaging read for me, especially as someone who loves trying to 'work out' the human/pet dynamic.
Apologises for my rambling thoughts, looking forward to see were you take this adventure.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if you think Paul thinks he can be restored to his original size. At this point Paul does not know that is possible.
I've considered Paul trying to suck the fun out of it for Pam, but she would certainly escalate her humiliation of Paul and would probably resort to painful exploits as well (this may happen).
If Mary decides to restore Paul, she has her work cut out for her if she wants to keep a loving relationship with him, Paul will certainly feel betrayed (if I go that route, I have my work cut out for me as well :) )
At this point, Paul considered his options, and, trying to make the best of things felt like his best shot for now, but (at this time) he knows he can't live that way forever, he is hoping to slowly try to change things or find another solution.
Your thoughts are no more rambling than my own :)
Thanks for the input.