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Summary:

     After Tim mistakenly drinks a mysterious, secret potion his mother brought back from a research trip to the Amazon, he winds up shrinking to a mere 1-inch tall; now, while his mother frantically works to formulate a cure for her tiny son, Tim is stuck at home in the care of his aunt, who starts taking advantage of her nephew’s “little” condition.


1/29/2024 — Based on the feedback I’ve received, I’ve decided to go ahead and write an epilogue to this story. I’m not sure exactly when it will be finished and posted, but I’ll be working on it as well as a few other small projects as I prepare to write my next novel. I just wanted to thank everyone for all their support and honest feedback. This story was just supposed to be practice for my novels, but it’s certainly taken on a life of its own.


Hooray for 175K reads! 🥳


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 151215 Read Count: 190877
[Report This] Published: February 06 2023 Updated: January 23 2024
Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: March 08 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Tuesday Afternoon

Ah, exciting stuff, can't wait to see where this goes, new characters mean new opportunities. Are you planning on lasting as long as Babysitter Troubles?



Author's Response:

Well, I wasn’t planning on this story going for as long, or having as many chapters as Babysitter Trouble, but as it’s currently going, each day is going to be split up into at least two parts. In fact, Tuesday and Wednesday both ended up having so much content that I’ve actually split them into 3 chapters each. I guess, even when I’m trying to be concise, I end up writing too much. Lol!

Without spoiling anything, I will confirm that the characters I introduced will show up in a later chapter, but that’s all I’m willing to say at the moment.

In any case, thanks for reading, and for the quick review. 

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: March 21 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

It's nice to see a Laundry machine in GTS material. You really don't see a lot of it. By the way, will you be doing what-ifs like in your Babysitting story?



Author's Response:

Yes, as I mentioned in the story notes, the laundry machine is a shrinking trope I don’t see a lot in GTS stories, and so think that might be something people can explore more of. I always liked the idea of a tiny getting lost in his wife’s/girlfriend’s panties and mixed in with the laundry, struggling for freedom amidst a mound of clothes. It’s one of a few scenarios that I want to explore and expand upon.

I haven’t really considered doing any what-if scenarios with this story like in my other stories, but more and more, I am thinking that later on in the week, when more characters come into the mix, there’s certainly sone possibilities for branching storylines, so I’ve also not totally ruled it out. Certainly food for thought.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: April 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

Nice to see a calm before the storm, if it were. Just curious, but would you ever add Tim getting eaten and ending up in some girl's stomach but alive. or would being eaten be more of a death sentence?  



Author's Response:

Yeah, at first, this last chapter in the previous one more together, but I decided to split them up and give the leaders a little break from all the action.

So, I know this is fiction, but I usually want to display a sense of realism to my stories; while most likely an inch tall person being stepped or sat on would surely squish them, being eaten would most definitely be a death sentence in my book, which is why most of my “vore” scenarios are more mouth play and close calls. That being said, I do like the idea of having a tiny being swallowed as a way to end a story, but it has to be the right story.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: May 30 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

Now we get to the part of your stories I love the most, Unaware gals. I really hope Tim knows what he is doing, or he may regret it. Will the Aunt be the main focal point in the unaware parts, or will the other girls take center stage? 



Author's Response: Well, Julia will certainly be a portion of the unaware parts, especially in the next couple of chapters, but I’m also going to be adding at least one of the neighbor gals into the mix.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: June 29 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

Man what a cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response: Well, I didn’t realize how long the morning chapter was becoming until I was almost finished, so I decided to split it. I’ve been working tirelessly on the next chapter because I really want to get the situation and scenarios correct, which required a lot of planning, blocking, and acting out the characters’ movements. I certainly hope everyone appreciates the effort, and I’m hoping the next chapter is finished by the end of the coming weekend.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: July 10 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

Maybe a way Tim could get out of his 'cage' is to make it look like he has escaped and when the giantess comes to find him he clings to her to get out



Author's Response:

Yeah, that’s kinda what I was thinking; the issue is exactly how to do it. In that case, it probably should be Julia again, but that might get a little repetitive. I was also thinking Tim makes it appear that he’s still in his cage, like sleeping under a blanket, then escapes in the same fashion as you described, in that case it could be either Julia or Natalie.

Anyway, thanks for the suggestion.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: October 16 2023 Title: Chapter 20: Friday Evening Pt.3

Another great chapter, thought i will not lie I was hope for some unaware mouth action involving Tim and Casserole



Author's Response: I know, but I couldn’t find a better way to do the unaware vore without Tim’s mother either discovering him, or swallowing him.

Summary:

In a world where numerous anthropomorphic races of variable size try their best to live together, the lives of Ryan, a 26-year-old mousemin programmer, and Ayla, a 24-year-old drakonid girl, unexpectedly cross, as after getting indebted to the mob, the poor mouse boy finds himself trapped in the 114 ft tall drakonid’s shoe. Having narrowly avoided losing his life under her colossal foot, and believed dead by his killers, the 3 and ¾ inches tall guy tries desperately to survive whatever journey his unaware captor has brought him on, while the dragon girl is completely oblivious to his presence.


Will Ryan be able to escape his prison?
 Will he meet his end under Ayla’s claws?
Will she be able to help him?
Will his shark find out that he’s alive?


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Furry, Gentle, Insertion, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29185 Read Count: 10024
[Report This] Published: June 29 2023 Updated: January 06 2024
Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: October 24 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Gym

This is a really good story, i quite enjoyed it. It nice to see Ryan getting medical help but I hope that's not that last Ayla has seen of him, if she is even aware of him next time. 

I hope you don't mind me asking but what kind of Giantess content are you planing on adding to the story, and I hope its more unaware stuff though not with feet this time.



Author's Response:

Hello, thanks for your review!

Don't worry, they will see each other again, they are the main characters after all. Besides, she seems to already care about him, and he needs to deal with the mob in some way.

About the content, I will mostly follow the tags, so breasts, insertion and feet, maybe add in some more if they become relevant (like, I would love to put some stockings/legwear play)  and it will be aware for the most part (i find it a bit easier to write), although Who knows. Maybe he will fall into her bra at some point...

Summary: A Resident Evil 5 giantess story commission for dodo on Discord!

An alternate ending to the game set during the scene of Excella's transformation in a giant tenticle monster.

Or rather, what WAS supposed to be her transformation.

Instead, she ends up growing to 100 feet tall, taking out Wesker as she does. It's now up to Chris and Sheva to defeat her and put an end to the Uroboros nightmare! But it won't be easy.....
Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Vore, Butt, Destruction, Adult 30-39, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1139 Read Count: 872
[Report This] Published: August 29 2023 Updated: August 29 2023
Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed
Date: August 29 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Wait, that's not how that scene went!

It's an interesting story, not exactly my type of content, but it's quite good.