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Summary: Dwayne is watching Sarah, the little girl next door, as her mother has to take care of some business. As he watches her, she suddenly grows bigger and older before his eyes. Dwayne will have to figure out what is going on for this shy girl. He soon discovers that there is more to her than meets the eye, as well as the whole town. Additional tags not mentioned: Age progression, Succubus transformation, magical powers. Now containing artwork. My Little Neighbor is a Succubus

The interactive is located at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2069009-Endless-Beauty
Categories: Instant Size Change, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 298437 Read Count: 159503
[Report This] Published: January 25 2022 Updated: November 21 2023
Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01 2023 Title: Chapter 35: Heroes, Succubus, and The Beach: Ch2. Overall Chapter 35

Another great chapter Keep it up.



Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoy this story.

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Date: March 09 2023 Title: Chapter 36: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach. Ch 3: Overall Chapter 36

I like how they're just kicking hanging out with each other.

And then the evil landlord comes in raising the rent on the bakery. lol This sounds like fun.



Author's Response: It is at times very casual as they just hangout between more of the size difference between the human characters and the succubus characters. Creates more depth to each person. The evil landlord will come back later. He will need someone to come and correct his behavior.

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Date: March 30 2023 Title: Chapter 38: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach: Ch 5

Great job. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it.

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Date: April 05 2023 Title: Chapter 39: Heroes, Succubus, and The Beach ch 6

Sounds like they're having fun. 

keep it up I enjoy reading these. oh and I like the photo that goes along with the cover.



Author's Response: Thank you very much. I do too. It gives emphasis on Sarah's transformation

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Date: April 13 2023 Title: Chapter 40: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach Ch:7

There's a twist I wasn't expecting. Doing a good job keep it up.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am glad that you were surprised by the twist.

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Date: April 15 2023 Title: Chapter 40: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach Ch:7

There's a twist I wasn't expecting. Doing a good job keep it up.



Author's Response: I think there were some duplications

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Date: April 18 2023 Title: Chapter 40: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach Ch:7

There's a twist I wasn't expecting. Doing a good job keep it up.



Author's Response: I think there was some duplications on the reviews

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Date: April 25 2023 Title: Chapter 41: Heroes, Succubus, and The Beach ch 8

Another great chapter. Look forward to the next.



Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is out.

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Date: May 03 2023 Title: Chapter 42: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach ch. 9

Not bad. I'm not a big fan of shrinking but you did this quite well. Can't wait to see what comes next.



Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more shrinking but nothing permanent. Shrinking in the universe by succubus is not permanent. The universe abhors mass transfer so it is temporary, lasting about an hour.

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Date: May 11 2023 Title: Chapter 43: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach ch 10.

Keep going. The back story is a nice filler.

Tell next time. Have a good day.



Author's Response: Glad you like that. I need moment that spur the story on. Gives depth to it.

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Date: May 14 2023 Title: Chapter 43: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach ch 10.

Keep going. The back story is a nice filler.

Tell next time. Have a good day.



Author's Response: Thank you very much

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Date: June 01 2023 Title: Chapter 44: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach: Ch 11

Interesting very interesting.



Author's Response: Glad you find it interesting. Hopefully you find more twists to come interesting

Summary:

Audrey lived in a minor Reserve all her life. She's never seen a MAJOR and doesn't want to leave her home... and yet she craves to see the world beyond its borders. When she's selected to become a Border guard, with a partner she hadn't expected, her life is changed forever.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Butt, Breasts, Gentle, Muscle, New World Order, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9172 Read Count: 7554
[Report This] Published: February 15 2022 Updated: January 07 2024
Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 07 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice it's been awhile. I like these stories.Keep it up

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Date: January 07 2024 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Keep going. Can't wait for more.

Summary:

In the future, women are large, really large, of an average height of around 14 feet tall, and some way taller. In this time, men are supposed to always be with a woman as his couple, and if he´s not with
her, then he needs to find a woman to be with. Men will have one week, after that,
the state will assign him a couple.

There´s desperate woman who want to have a man for her own,
to do with him as they please.

This is the story of Matt, a man who tries to find a woman to
be with after breaking up with his last girlfriend. He´s got seven days, the question is, who will he date? and, will he find someone or is he going to get assigned to a woman?


Categories: Middle Age (50+), BBW, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Giant, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49)
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93764 Read Count: 100877
[Report This] Published: March 11 2022 Updated: December 09 2023
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Date: June 04 2023 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

the relationship offer with Hannah sounds very enticing.



Author's Response:

It does, right? 

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Date: December 09 2023 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

So the women were a little taller than I like. I'm over around the 10 to 12 ft level.

But that was my only complaint. everything else about the story was awesome and great I hope you write another one like like this end of this quality I really enjoyed it thank you for your effort.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I went a bit BIG on sizes here. But it was an idea I had at the time, when I started writting it. I had quite some ideas, and this one involved giantesses, very big ones so... that´s the main reason for the sizes.

I´m really glad you liked this story. It was fun to write, and to explore a new world.

Also, I´m actually working on a different story about NWO. In case you´d like to check it, it´s called "Not So Average World", and a few chapters have already been uploaded here. (Also, the biggest sizes are around the ones you previously mentioned ;D)

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 04 2023 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

the relationship offer with Hannah sounds very enticing.

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Date: May 17 2023 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It seems like a nice date. Now can they connect emotionally. not big on the whole employee thing. but him having a job I could definitely see.


let's see what happens next time. 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 09 2023 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Another great chapter. Keep it up.I like the chapter's that are happy and fun the most. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I like this kind of chapters too, so warm and kind. But sometimes we need a little twist ;)

Hope you like the new chapter :D

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Date: May 15 2023 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It seems like a nice date. Now can they connect emotionally. not big on the whole employee thing. but him having a job I could definitely see.


let's see what happens next time.