As someone who loves both creative writing and the giantess fantasy, I hugely enjoy contributing to this community. My works vary wildly from the pleasantly gentle to the fetishistically cruel, and I hope to explore everywhere in between as well. The most prevalent subgenres in my stories are feet, mouthplay, and taboos, those being my favorites, but I try to add variation to keep them entertaining.
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Timmy 13 years old is shrunk by his 35 year old blonde mother and forced to be her slave
not bad, but you give your characters zero time to develop, and they feel more like cliche cut-outs than characters. i realize stories like these vs. actual literature have way more leniency room, but it's nice to at least have some reason for these characters to be acting like this before they go crazy on one another. the pics are very nice, though.
Your best friend's mom has a nice day planned for the two of you.
Please rate and review.
Very appealing set-up up, and it's well written to boot. Your dialogue gets a tiny bit sketchy in a couple spots that pulled me out of the fiction just a bit, but it's only slight. Well done.
A female warrior finds herself accidentally caught up in a Gulliveresque series of adventures.
looks good. i too am wary of the giant man tag, but for now i like what i see a lot. gulliver's travels, while i enjoyed it as a novel, had so much wasted potential if you know what i mean. if only swift had been a macrophiliac... ;) keep it up.
Yeah, I feel the same way about the novel, but I suppose people back then didn't have all these weird fetishes that are so common today.
I take it Brobdingag's population just went up by one? Great stuff here, very interested to see what's coming next. I continue to find your dialogue-writing skills a cut above the norm, which does wonders for the story's ability to pull me in and feel convinced by the fiction. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you, the encouragement is appreciated!
very nice, i'm enjoying this a great deal. i'm also getting curious as to where your girl is going for her 3rd voyage when the canon options are basically kookytown or planet of the horses.
LOL, yeah, it won't be either those, luckily. It will be based on an existing fictional place, but mostly reinvented by myself.
A young woman does all in her power to convert two former classmates.
fun concept and the language flows very well, good work
I've moved my stories and their continuations over to the Kindle Store. The Website won't allow me to delete the story, so I'm sorry for having to remove it like this.
thought i'd be one of the first to extend a friendly word. even though there's no giantess content yet, you seem to be the type of writer who doesn't forego description of the scene, the absence of which honestly kills some stories for me, so kudos. looking forward to seeing how you bring that element in once your main character's foes become decidedly larger compared to him.
Christ, you're the author of Family Reunion. I have to say, I'm a huge fan of yours and hope that I can write a story that you too will enjoy. Thank you for the kind words. It's going to be at least 10 chapters. I'm halfway done on the second chapter. So it should be uploaded in the next day I would imagine. Sorry for lack of content, I need to build it up...
Thornton.
A girl born four inches tall has a nice life at her college. She has a helpful roommate, good teachers, and nice enough classmates. But when the new girl Lenora gets transferred in, things get interesting for Amanda.
Thanks for the shout-out. I like most of what you've got here. Honestly, I'm not much of one for stories that leap directly for the throat on the sex scenes, which is certainly what you did, but you write them well enough that I didn't find myself minding it so much. Your story/sex scene switch-off style among the chapters seems a bit risky, as this can potentially limit what you can pull off narratively, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and see where you can take it. I like the awkwardness you seem to be generating between Lenora and your tiny protagonist, which I assume is going to have some kind of pay-off whenever the two of them end up in some steamy fetishistic scene. Again, I urge you to not feel the need to pile on layer after liquid layer of lesbian sex; you can very easily create tantalizing scenarios without having these constantly. Keep it up!
A story about a world where giantesses are an accepted part of society. Giantesses may legally swallow people. The story follows two friends; a normal sized man and a giantess.
I'm glad to see this one back after such a long hiatus. I love the idea; it's a fun melding of the Western archetype and gts fetishism. Personally, I'm a fan of just having your main characters stay as friends rather than romantic leads, as that would give the story a little more uniqueness, but that's just me.
Partners, bounty hunters, friends. That's how they will stay... at least for now. I have no romantic designs for them. Glad you are enjoying the story. I'll write more once I figure out what comes next.
So a group of soldiers are on a mission to capture a HVT but things go wrong when they find a cave that leads to a strange new world. Now follow this group of soldiers threw the good times and bad times in this hart warming story of Christmas I’m joking but it has a lot of action and swearing and bad political jokes so grab the pop corn and beer.
Also it’s rated R wait didn’t write that big enough R
don't want to be harsh either, but i'm going to have to agree and say that this almost seems like a joke. are you aware of conventional english grammar and whatnot? there's a tool on the site to help you out if you're not. keep trying.
The story of a woman and her tiniest admirer. Or slave. Or...boyfriend?
good work. i always enjoy well-written foodplay (is that a word? who cares, i'm making it one) scenes, which this happens to be one of. very fun.
Thanks! I will say that some of your foodplay scenes are my favorite that I've read, even for being non-micro or voyeur, and that I may have adjusted my approach a bit because of some of your work. Now, if I could get YOU to do a micro or voyeur story, I could die a happy man. Lol. Your reviews are always anticipated and welcome!
glad to help; my personal fav foodplay (i guess this is a word now, isn't it?) of yours was the ice cream scene from family bondings, so i daresay there wasn't a whole lot of adjustment called for on your part. i actually did write a semi-lengthy voyeur/unaware story a while back, but have never posted it. i might at some point, though
good work, i was glad to be greeted with a quality story on the most recent list after my extended absence around the site. i enjoy reading how you play with sentence types, lengths, and phrasings. it's a little english-geeky of me, probably, to enjoy those things, but the variety really does benefit the story. keep it up.
Hearing those kinds of words in a forum like this is certainly out of the ordinary, but I dunno if I would call you a geek, lol. But thank you anyway, hearing from you is always great. I wish I could say that there was some formula that I use, but I honestly just write the same way that I think, which means I probably don't make much sense when I speak, haha. Can't wait to see you writing more often again.
Zack is shrunken down the day of his soon to be wife,Sarah's 25th birthday,unfortunally for Zack,she dosen't know he's there!
not to put salt in the wound or anything, but you don't seem to have listened at all to the valid points that have been made in these other reviews. someone telling you what to put in your story and how to tell it is one thing and shouldn't be listened to, but in this case there are certain standards that make work worth reading when upheld, and when it's this messy, i'm sorry to say, it's not particularly worth reading. keep at it.
The adventures of two giantess sisters, and their normal-sized brother. A sequel to The Princess of Vandan.
I'm continuing to really enjoy your work in this tale. As usual, character development and fluidity come first for you, though the giantess bits are obviously very enticing as well. I also look forward to seeing some of your other works continue. *cough* 3rd Fairytale Romance story *cough*
Thanks for the great review! I have thought of doing another Fairytale story, but I can't seem to get an idea that I really like. (And I've been through a lot of ideas, lol!) Maybe I'll think of something this year, now that I know people like you want to see more, haha!
Very much enjoying this. I especially like the playfully antagonistic relationship between Valdan and Sylvie, it's fun and domineering without resorting to overt sadistic themes; it allows the story to stay with the "gentle" theme while still exploring other types of relationships. Quite good, keep it up.
Thank you very much, glad you are enjoying it.
A beautiful lady washes ashore on an island of tiny people. Antics ensue. Can she prevent war between the peoples of the secular North and the superstitious South? And is she not the first "giant" to have walked these lands?
Good work. Admittedly, i didn't have time to read each and every word, but of what i did see was well-done and enjoyable to read. Don't let the negative reviews from people who don't understand how the rating system is supposed to work get you down; keep on doing what you enjoy, because plenty of other people happen to enjoy it too.
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed what you saw. I have to admit, I've skimmed my way through a few stories here so I don't blame you. I know my stuff's more involved and wordy than the average fetish story. As long as you liked it, that's what matters.
A very interesting read, I must say. You definitely have a knack for convincing settings, with everything down to the vocabulary in perfect place. I admire your ability to write such story-driven giantess tales as you do rather than merely focusing on the fetish material as it is in so many of the stories on this site.
A girl finds herself under her mother and friend's feet constantly, in a world where people wear other people in their shoes.
A nice addition. I do have a nitpick of sorts to make here, but understand that it's because I enjoy this enough to check for updates when I get on the site, and I feel invested in the narrative enough to care where it's headed. Personally, I feel like the story is strongest when told from Alisa's perspective rather than from her friend's or mother's. Your descriptions are well-done in both perspectives of course, but stylistically, I found it much easier to get into Alisa's head than the giantess characters'. This may be getting too deep for a fetish story, but the way you've framed what is, in essence, a science fiction story, Alisa is the closest connection a reader can have to normal, realistic logic (regarding the unfairness of her life, etc) while the giant characters who wear her in their shoes represent the foreign, antagonistic force that we are exposed to through the only existing voice of reason: Alisa.
So, long-story-long, I'm putting in my vote that you focus on the scenes depicting Alisa's POV in future chapters. I hope that made sense, and perhaps it was unnecessary when the main purpose of these kinds of stories is pure fantasy, but I personally have a ball pondering the psychological aspects of the whole concept, particularly in above-average stories like this one where a unique premise gives an opportunity for original scenarios, of which you have already delivered. Whatever you decide to do, keep it up sir.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the thoughtful addition, and I do think you're right. I think it's a similar situation to your own series... I found "Big Sister Diaries" to be have the same "foreign" feeling you mention, and I honestly had the same thoughts about this chapter when re-reading it in line with the other chapters. I actually had about 1000 words that were at the end of this chapter having this continue from Alisa's perspective, but it was getting a bit long and might work better in the next chapter. Maybe I was mistaken to do so. In the next chapter, we will we definitely be back in Alisa's head again.
Kristin hates his school, hates his teamates, but is forced to defend them all at this up and coming Lacrosse finals. After the win, he finds out something intreting...oh, and that his team cheated.
not really my type of story, so i won't leave a rating, but objectively i'm just going to note that your spelling/grammar are in such a state of disarray that any reading this might be tempted to belittle it for shoddy workmanship. i would highly suggest combing through for errors if you want to be taken seriously, bud.
