Penname: Gastric Aztec [Contact] Real name: Sammy
Member Since: March 22 2022
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Shrinking and F/m non-fatal vore

I’ve been writing teen giantess vore stories since I was a teenager. Now I plan  on turning some of my stories into comic books.

I like to write stories about underage characters who interact with shrunken people, but done in a way so it could be made into mainstream TV shows and films. None of my stories featuring underage characters contain sexual or inappropriate content.

Most websites don’t allow underage characters, so my venue is here, where I can be free to share my stories.


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Reviews by Gastric Aztec
Summary: Strange happenings are going on in a mall and people are mysteriously shrinking. Follow there escapades as they try to find there way back to normal in this classic tale!
Categories: Humiliation, Crush, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35231 Read Count: 51405
[Report This] Published: September 27 2006 Updated: September 27 2006
Reviewer: Gastric Aztec Signed
Date: June 28 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read a good chunk of ”A Bad Day For Shopping” It made me wonder how someone could step on someone who was 6 inches tall and not notice. Most people would look at their feet if they stepped on a pebble or a cigarette butt or something, but the women in this story are oblivious to shrunken men almost the size of Ken dolls getting crushed under their shoes.

As constructive criticism for Branford, I would point out that if people were getting miniaturized left and right, a logical conclusion for normal sized people trying to capture the shrunken people might be concern that they, too, might end up miniaturized.

Summary: Another example of "mix-and-match" mythology (a la the legendary Ray Harryhausen).
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Female Self-Gigantism Through The Ages
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15373 Read Count: 157210
[Report This] Published: November 13 2011 Updated: August 10 2012
Reviewer: Gastric Aztec Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the language you’re using in chapter one so far, it seems authentic and really brings me into the story!

Summary:

Ellie's weekend trip to London was already screwed up enough and that was before they decided to stop at a model village.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Footwear, Feet, Giant, Violent, Vore, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24237 Read Count: 60800
[Report This] Published: January 08 2021 Updated: February 26 2021
Reviewer: Gastric Aztec Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I’m a good idea man, but your writing skills are top level. The way your introduce your characters is like a pro writer. I could learn from your writing technique!

The way the female character reacted when she found out about the model village was realistic, cute, and funny, but not funny in a bad way; I look forward to reading more!

Summary:

A giantess with the power to change her size came to live in a human city saitman she lived  as a homeless girl where she was adopted by a family where she told them about her mission to save the good part of the humans before the invasion on their city


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Not so friendly giantess
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 626 Read Count: 2144
[Report This] Published: July 21 2021 Updated: July 21 2021
Reviewer: Gastric Aztec Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Going to saitman

I think you have an interesting premise, but the structure of some of the grammar seems like it was written by someone for whom English is a second language. I don’t say this to be mean, but you need to go through this and weed out the mistakes.

Summary:

I have gotten quite a few story requests and praises about the style of my writing in my inbox lately and have decided to share some of the techniques I use when writing both longer chapter epics and short story one-shots. Some other writers such as Poison pens and Jacksmith (one of my favourites) have already touched on this, but I would like to share my own spins, tips, and tricks on how to write a great story. 

Believe it or not English was not my best subject at school, it was actually chemistry and biology 😂

I have created a set of subsections that will make this a lot easier and clearer to follow

If you ever want any advice feel free to shoot me an email or DM me on discord.

Important note: I might update with further tips in the future 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3875 Read Count: 1695
[Report This] Published: February 01 2023 Updated: February 01 2023
Reviewer: Gastric Aztec Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19 2023 Title: Chapter 1: LittleBigPlanet’s Writing Guide

Great resource you’ve created here, can I recommend a book called Save the Cat? It helps you outline your story before writing and really makes a difference!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I will definitely check it out 🙂