A shipwreck with hundreds of survivors on a deserted island. Three of the survivors find themselves much bigger than everyone else. How will it play out? Gilligan's Island or Lord of the Flies? Read on and see.
Absolutely fantastic story. The cast of characters and attention to world building is amazing.
Callie has been having a rough go of it as of late, but little does she know that someone close by has it even harder than she does.
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Wow, what a fantastic start! I especially enjoyed the depth of these characters.
I appreciate Duncan's resourcefulness and caution. I imagine if I were in his situation I'd react similarly--however I doubt I'd survive the fight with Bigsby! I feel he has a longing for human connection, but has difficulties trusting--I sincerely hope that Callie turns out to be someone he can trust.
Speaking of Callie, I especially love her character. She's a great gentle giantess. Well-meaning, but sometimes says or does the wrong things.
Meanwhile, Kristie is just as I imagined her based on your foreshadowing. I'm sure this was just the tip of the iceberg for the trauma she inflicted on Duncan.
I love the diverse set of characters so far, looking forward to the next chapter!
Hey sizeaddled!
I think you should give yourself some more credit. I'm sure you would have found a way to take on Bigsby!
You're dead on about Duncan. He had some trust issues even before shrinking, so those have obviously gotten worse since falling below three inches tall. It's really hard to not trust Callie, though, as much as he tries not to. We'll see next chapter (whenever I get around to finishing it) whether or not a some people from his old life are trustworthy (and if his previous judgment of those relationships was accurate or not).
I'm really glad Callie has been so well received so far! I like your description of her.
I tried to put a lot of thought into foreshadowing various things in the first couple of chapters, so it's great to hear that you already had an idea of who Kristie is based on the brief mention of her in chapter one. He was able to escape from Kristie not too long after the events of that dream sequence, but her impact on his psyche is pretty significant.
And hopefully I can keep up that diverse set of characters next chapter (which I'm hoping to get out relatively soon). I really don't want my characters to overlap and cover the same ground.
Thanks for taking the time to review my little story! Maybe you'll beat me and get the next chapter of Delta Phun out first!
This is the story of a rather unsuspecting and average gal, a loving wife and mother of three, telling the world about how she came to be the worlds tallest woman.
Watch as her story is televised and broadcast live from her own front yard, as she had recently become to large to fit inside, and listen as she regales all who are tuning in about some of the best times and some of the worst times she’s had since becoming as big as she is now.
I really love the unique format of this story, great work!
When a new drug with the ability to temporarily shrink people floods the market, society begins to unravel. With the clock ticking against them, a team of state and non-state actors must navigate the ensuing chaos to stop the drug pandemic at its source before it allows humanity to wipe itself off the globe. As the team struggles in this Herculean and Sisyphean task, one thing becomes clear: with great power comes great temptation - and this inadvertently puts one's morality to a test.
• Its been a while since I last posted, and my English has improved greatly. But please do give me some constructive feedback if you think there is some room for improvement! :)
• While this story will focus mostly on giant women interacting with tinies, it will still have some giant male scenes. But these are only for the purposes of the story, and I will warn you guys in advance about it in the chapter notes. Additionally, I know that some of the 'selected categories' / tags are not for everyone. So in the notes of each chapter, I will mention which tags the chapter will feature. So you can skip the chapters that you are not comfortable with.
• If anybody wants to make a comic book out of this or wants to write a spinoff version of this, please email me: "amianonymous714@gmail.com". I've wanted my writings to become a comic for a very long time :). So it goes without saying that I will let you use my writings for free - just let me know if you are going to do it :).
• And of course, if you like my story, leave a comment - I'd really appreciate it!
Great start! I'm looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds.
Thank you so much!