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A Board Game Not for the Family by thegreatrizzo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Phillip's parents go on vacation leaving him with his younger sister. Her friend comes over with a mysterious board game. Phillip may no longer being in charge.

 

He is losing control as the girls grow into the most beautiful women

 

First story. I appreciate it if you all had any suggestions.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Scat, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123783 Read Count: 409758
[Report This] Published: October 09 2020 Updated: September 23 2022
Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Game that should not be played

WOW!! WOW!! TEN THOUSAND TIMES WOW!!

This ius the best story I've read so far in this site, I even created an account just to tell you that!

Also, hoorays for the vore scene in that last chapter! A 70foot tall woman with no living humans inside her stomach sounds like a waste. Still, all other Guinevere scenes were great, don't get me wrong! I was just wanting to have some good vore, and she was perfect (and perfectly sized) for that!

I don't know if you already have the last chapter written and I don't know if my suggestions would decrease its qualitty (as you proved to be a very gifted writer), but if you're still wanting to have suggestions, how about, after the game ends and everything starts going back to normal, Phillip shrinks more as a temporary side effect of his own little sister shrinking a lot to be normnal again? But Phillip should be around some inches tall, not microscopic btw. And his sister, still wanting to have and show some power over him, would insiert him in her anal cavity and keep him there inside for a while, maybe a night. The day after, still small but already free for Lili's rectum, he would try to run from  her, just to e caught again and, this time, eaten by her. You could write a cool scene describing Phillip's situation inside Lili's stomach, then he would start growing slowly, forcing her stomach to push him out, making Lili throw him up, and then he would finish growing and everything would be back to normal. If they would remember everything, or only these last moments I ask you to write (if possible / desired), or if they would remember nothing, going with their lives as if nothing special had happened, it's up to you.

Again, thank you for such  SUPERB story! I'd give you 100's of stars if I could!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the reviews. I'm glad that you enjoyed the vore scene. I needed to show that something is going with Guinevere's mind that is causing her to be more assertive with her size. For the final chapter, I have it all planned out so there is little I am doing from straying from that path. I am working on an alternate ending, so those ideas might come up.

Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Game is afoot

Sorry, I forgot to say that, in the scenes I sugested in my last commentary, Lili should be back to the age/size she had before she started changing. While Phillip, as I said, should be temporarily just a few inches tall, perfect for being inserted inside Lili's rectum and eaten by her, as I asked you to write in the last chapter.

Again, thank you SO MUCH for such GREAT story! And please, have more five stars for you with this comment, you deserve it!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I will consider these ideas.

Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Game that should not be played

Still waitin for the continuation of this magnificentily great story...



Author's Response: The wait is over. the final chapter is here

The Y-Strain by Vexed, johnsmith10992 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Scott is just your average high school guy. Life is pretty normal with his stepmom and stepsister, albeit a little quarrelsome. He just about manages to rule the roost, but the power dynamic begins to change as he and the men around him contract a virus that makes them smaller.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79708 Read Count: 205358
[Report This] Published: January 28 2021 Updated: March 09 2023
Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning

This is going to be one of my favorite stories! I'm just loving all the sexy energy it flows every time I read it! The girls are hot and I love when they're going a little 'bratty'!

Delicious Double Date by nobodysuspicious Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Dante and James are thrilled to go on a double date with the lovely Carissa and the feisty Michelle. Both are hoping to get some action after they get home from their movie, but Michelle's idea of 'action' is very different from theirs.

This story was commissioned by Dino Soup.

Lots of sexytime, insertion, and dirty talk in this one, I hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I always love the opportunity to deal with some really unhinged preds :)    


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6998 Read Count: 4944
[Report This] Published: June 05 2021 Updated: June 05 2021
Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a a really good, cool story! I'd LOVE to be Carissa's toy too, if she ever gets bored of Dante someday. The almost-vore scene was superb, loved it! Also, I'm not an ass-man but liked the anal scene too. You write very well, you did an excellent job with this story and surely deserves the 5 stars!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words! This was my first time working with a (relatively) benevolent pred so I'm so pleased it worked for you. 

Three Girls, One Cunt by PoisonPen Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bendis is drunk and horny.  When she discovers three shrunken girls in a nightclub bathroom, the results are predictable.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6575 Read Count: 5538
[Report This] Published: July 14 2021 Updated: July 14 2021
Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!! This story is HOTTER THAN HOT!

Benids can use me as her toy too if she wants!! I won't complain!

Dividing Brother by thegreatrizzo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

I do not own this story or the art. I am translating the story and art from kenpGTS and Marushamo. All credit to them for this story and art.

 

A younger sister wants to become big like her big brother but doesn't have the patience to wait and grow, she wants it now. The sister might have found a way to get bigger though with some sharing with her brother.

 

Links at end of chapter for artwork that goes with story

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5729 Read Count: 30254
[Report This] Published: July 20 2021 Updated: August 10 2021
Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

To see this story you need to log out. It's a weird bug on the site that's affecting some stories I had read. Some authors reuploaded the stories to correct it but others didn't.

Btw, promissing story. While waiting for you to continue 'A board game not for the family', I read this one, expecting a great story like the latter.



Author's Response:

Hopefully that fixed that bug. That would be a problem. Thank you for the review. I have been keeping this in my back pocket for a little bit. I am going to be very busy for a couple weeks so I have something to fill in that time. So somethings are going to be delayed. I am working on finishing the stories so I can start on new projects.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.