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Are you still alive? by Luidgi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Annie is a shrinker.

She ran away from home to live her own life in New York city. She meets Marilyn, the woman who's got the appartment above hers. 

Read The Insole Girl for reference. I would like to thank Exiguus. This is a fan fiction of what you created.

Enough said.

 

 

 

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Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Lesbians, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3031 Read Count: 43452
[Report This] Published: October 11 2017 Updated: April 17 2018
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 02 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

DON'T YOU DARE! I will *not* write reviews until you pinky-swear you'll go on with the story... :D

Author's Response:

That's hardly a review ;) But I get your point. So...I know you don't like mom/sister scenarios, any other ideas?

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 06 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

Hopefully you don't mean "ideas" as in "how do we get from here to December?", because I have no idea!(*)

For some reason when I read she's a jurist I got attached to the idea she uses it somehow, as in their relation ends up defined by a contract or something - paying the rent to live in her shoe, hired to be her foot carer, married and indulging her kink for domination - anything of the sort.

About Annie's family, it all depends on their intentions and their attitude, which you still didn't show.

But if you meant "random fetish idea for some next chapter", ehm... I honestly don't know, too many options, but I'll try a few:
1. they go out somewhere, normal size, then Marylin feels like having her shrunken (eg she was explaining things to someone incredulous); Annie can object, but you get more points if Marylin gets to show that Annie loves it, just like she does.

2. They are somewhere, Annie inshoe; Marylin needs her for whatever, takes her out (or just takes her foot out), gets what she needs, then back in the shoe.

3. some footwear related thing, either something as unusual as her dancing shoes, or maybe shopping - she helps choosing from the inside, and if Marylin accepts her suggestion Annie has to pay.


PS
About mom/sis scenarios: yep, I don't like it, and I appreciate you remember it, but this is YOUR story, write what you like! I'm grown up, I can skip sections I dislike if it's too much...



(*) Marylin files&wins a lawsuit against Annie's mom - technically an answer, super difficult to write :D

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 06 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

Oh, and the obvious: she tries something not foot related, either she doesn't like it or she decides that she's fond of how Annie loves being under her feet or she keeps it as punishment.

(not so obvious in your stories, but that's fine :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 10 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

I honestly thought they'd be more careful about permanent damage, but I'll admit my reasons were fairly weak (not doing it to her BEFORE she escaped).

 

A bit hard to swallow, but it makes sense - and most importantly, you're back! I was starting to worry...

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 13 2018 Title: Are you still alive?

Just a little thing...
If the story is over (and I hope it't not!), please make it official, because it still says "complete: no".

Otherwise I can't wait!

Author's Response:

It's not over, I just didn't have time to write more, and started a new story.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: April 18 2018 Title: Are you still alive?

random.org says "alive", so alive it is, but I'm sure she'd be happy either way - safe sane and consensual, right? (safe for Marilyn that is)

 

More than anything it's great to see the story is still alive!

Time-Out: What If? by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Join Scott Stevens, his dysfunctional family, and a shrinking device in these alternate reality what-if short stories.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9701 Read Count: 75627
[Report This] Published: October 14 2017 Updated: January 10 2018
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 15 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

I know I'm repeating myself, but I'll say it anyway: Christmas came early this year.



Author's Response:

Though it's the worst holiday for Scott

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 25 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Down the Hatch (Part 2)

Somehow I forgot that "part 1&2 out of three", I guess I'm used to Judy acting like she has all the time in the world... I won't complain, especially since I used to complain about the opposite, but it's still a bit weird to think that this story has a chance to be finished before the canon version resumes :D



Author's Response:

There will be other mini stories within this one story, also with multiple parts.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 29 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Down the Hatch (Part 3)

"You'll see" somehow fits her so well....

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: December 04 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Maggie's Turn (Part 2)

... and this is why Maggie has so many fans.



Author's Response:

Depressingly, luckily true

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Maggie's Turn (Part 2)

@HectorVanDyne Judy would be so proud :D



Author's Response:

She certainly would

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: December 27 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Mother of All Problems (Part 2)

Scott is normal size and can say "what the hell?" without Judy hearing him... hope it was worth the long wait :D



Author's Response:

Most likely not worth it

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 11 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Mother of All Problems (Part 3)

Well, I guess this is the closest to an happy ending in Scott's world - he's probably the only one relieved that the story ends here ;)

Author's Response:

Scott's victories are generally just measured by how little he lost.

Wendy & Jane by ThatOneFootGirl Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Jane, a kind woman living a quiet life with her daughter Melissa goes to greet the new neighbor, an Amazon named Wendy. As the two bond and their relationship grows, many amazing and fun things will be in store.


Categories: Muscle, Breasts, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5170 Read Count: 13992
[Report This] Published: October 24 2017 Updated: November 01 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 01 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The Surprise

Great surprise! And the story looks very promising :)

Terror against Tenderness 2 by NSFW_alt1234 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Pod, now living with Natasha, has his life turned upside down when Natasha's less than understanding friend stays with them for a few days. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9624 Read Count: 19415
[Report This] Published: November 19 2017 Updated: November 21 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 20 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is one of a selecte few gentle stories that I really really like,

and teaching a tiny to read is one of the things I missed from of the other few.

 

Still the ESL in me still wonders how one could make sense of English spelling by putting the letters together... :p

Jennifer's losers by Luidgi Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Susan and me become friends as we live shrunken to 1/8 of an inch inside Jennifer's left work shoe along with all the other losers.

A story about extreme objectification, humiliation and Female foot andshoe fetish. Read knowingly.

 

Enough said.


Categories: Violent, Footwear, Crush, Entrapment, Adventure, Feet, Humiliation, Odor, Legwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6698 Read Count: 17895
[Report This] Published: November 26 2017 Updated: November 29 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Living in a shoe

Please don't take it the wrong way, but the 1st thing that came to my mind was - omg what happened to "are you still alive?"?

You didn't abandon it, right? right? right? :D

Author's Response:

I did not, the next chapter is written, but I need to work on it, I think it's thin.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 28 2017 Title: Jennifer's losers

Got it - take your time :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 30 2017 Title: Jennifer's losers

Now THAT was unexpected!

Another Day at the Office by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

An office worker's wandering eyes earn him a day shrunken and imprisoned in the shoes of his oppressive boss and her spiteful young intern.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7306 Read Count: 97474
[Report This] Published: January 12 2018 Updated: February 03 2018
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Based on the plot, it should be fun (blessed be anonymous commissions)!

Author's Response:

Here's hoping

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 14 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I didn't realize until now, but iirc it's been a long time since someone was given a deadline for their timeout inside the story (like mt4 and unlike "best summer never", for he already knows how long it's going to be).

I may have to reread some stories to be sure when it happened last...

Author's Response:

Judy just tends not to tell Scott how long he's going to be punished. Generally, most somewhat normal people will let the subject know.

Technically though this story does not take place in that universe.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.