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Make America Big Again by Asterisk, Inwiththebooks Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Nobody ever expected her to win, but now that she has the new President is gonna live up to her word and Make America Big Again


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29402 Read Count: 263234
[Report This] Published: February 18 2017 Updated: April 07 2017
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Date: March 03 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Civil Disobedience

My 1st impression was that this chapter felt kind of rushed, but maybe it's only because the two previous chapters were going slower, or maybe it's only me, or just an impression :)

Anyway the issue of 4th strike is important - the fate of arrested tinies is still unknown, and sooner or later president Diane is going to realize that 3rd strikers can still commit crimes...

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Date: March 08 2017 Title: Chapter 6: This Week Today

I'd expect her to make the kick at least look accidental for some reason, but other than that...

Favorite chapter so far!

Also, Dianne's argument about crime decrease convinced me; she has my vote.

... how many strikes does it take to lose your right to vote?

Author's Response:

lol. Men voting. That's cute

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Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Foreign Relations

Had those protesters been good people like the first gentleman being stepped on wouldn't have squashed them - president Dianne is convincing me more and more!

Aaaand we need some explanation/flashback on how he can spend the day in there without getting hurt too badly.

Otoh, knowing that he supports his wife 24/7 (or at least during her working hours), I can't help but wonder if he was there during some events in the past chapters :)

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Date: March 14 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Couples Therapy

I'm secretely hooping some chapters will follow a judge/policewoman (sympathetic or not) at work...

PS
If Dr. Donnelly is able to focus on her job, does her husband really deserve a reward? Or is it a case of "practice makes perfect"?

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Date: March 17 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Meeting Between Friends

Seeing Ms Horkin's clumsiness with men makes me appreciate the president even more - being able to walk on her husband all day without serious injuries is way more difficult than it sounds!

Finally let me mention "If a Man Answers" (1962 movie), in hope it gives you ideas :)

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Date: March 21 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Meeting Between Friends

(Kinda wish I could edit my comment) 100% of males are less than two feet tall, ie they have had two strikes. President Dianne should make some declaration about it, wish the future generation of men to fare better, and start thinking of what happens to the last man in America to get the 3rd strike...

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Date: March 21 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Loose Ends

"Scandal" or explain :)

More seriously, did he get his 3rd strike *before* the rape? because if so, America needs to do something about all those 3rd-strikers - now!!

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Date: March 25 2017 Title: Chapter 11: A Modest Proposal

Tnx for the bonus (I didn't know the original was so short, I've just stopped reading it to write this comment)

Otoh there are two problems with the Male Use Act:
1. it will probably leave many women without a single man to, ehm, help them
2. why should the government tell american women what to do with their men?

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Date: March 28 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Full Treatment

"whatever they could fine" (because I'm drawn that way)

More seriously, unless they find a way to manufacture them in less than 9 months each I predict that "three in one" isn't going to last.

PS
Don't forget the 1st gentleman

PPS
Don't forget Charles&Emily

PPPS
Don't forget about those poor giantess lovers who will read this story 30 years from now and will wonder wtf... nvm, just wanted to say this story is going great, congratulations to both of you!

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Date: March 31 2017 Title: Chapter 13: A Mother's Work is Never Done

"hex Ex-Husband" proves once and for all that all rumors about men being disrespected under the new president are false - about time!

Sad to hear that the story is near the end - Asterisk, Inwiththebooks: thank you.

"couple extra bounds" :)

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Date: April 07 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Make The World Big Again

"Completed: No" and "second husband" are both promises to write more in my book ;)

Whatever, that this story got FEATURED probably tells you more than any comment, so, ehm, see you next time.

Brief Encounters by SoleWriter Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

A collection of short stories that will usually have some sort of holiday theme or other significant event. If you enjoy my other works, these will be no different.


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Breasts, Feet, Gentle, Butt, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69076 Read Count: 143477
[Report This] Published: February 20 2017 Updated: February 20 2024
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 06 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Therapy

The story is great, but this last addition looks familiar... ;p

Author's Response: Thank you! But I'm curious, what other story has the same premise?

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 07 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Therapy

The other story is "Brief Encounters", by SoleWriter


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You posted chapter 4 twice :D

Alpha Adams by Stella Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Diana is late for school for the third time this semester.

Being an Omega in her school, it means she has a particular punishment that day with her Alpha teacher.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, New World Order, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5335 Read Count: 14604
[Report This] Published: March 21 2017 Updated: March 21 2017
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Date: October 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nobody joked about "beta reader" vs "Beta reader"? wtf happened?

Anyway this story was pretty good, or simply great considering it's your first.
Is there anything we can do to persuade you to write a second story?

Author's Response:

LOL I didn't even catch onto that, so good eye.

And thank you very much! No need for persuasion, I started a second story but life's been so crazy for me this past year, I haven't found any time to sit down and finish! I know this reply is late, but hopefully when I get the chance to upload it, the interest will still be there.

Executive Privilege by TalkingHead Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

The CEO of a large tech company gets off on using her impressive stature to intimidate people.  When she attains the ability to make her wildest fantasies come true, she tests it out on a timid young intern.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6449 Read Count: 10946
[Report This] Published: April 07 2017 Updated: April 07 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: April 08 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Executive Privilege

The story is good, and I hope you'll write more (or a sequel?)!
BUT old farts like me can't help but point out that it has the same title as another classic
(starring Hillary Clinton of all people :)



Author's Response:

Dagnabbit!  I figured that might happen!  Ah well.

Thanks for reading!

The Prom Incident by Vintovka Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

As a short man, having a tall girlfriend can be interesting.  When she can shrink you, you might need to reconsider just how much that height difference bothered you.

 

Edit: When I had this idea it was going to be a one-off with the protagonist getting crushed right after he shrinks, I never expected this to grow to a novel-length story!  Thanks to everyone for the support as I continue writing this.


Categories: Feet, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Muscle, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92513 Read Count: 294766
[Report This] Published: May 15 2017 Updated: November 27 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 08 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Bad Neighbors

"What we want is a tiny for ourselves" - nah, they definitely want to take turns handling mr boyfriend :D



Author's Response:

How did you get my outline D:

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Date: July 25 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

I love women wearing tinies in their stockings, and while it didn't last as long as I wished, it's a decent excuse to login and congratulate you for this story.

Mrs Black's Feet by Toesify Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A story of an unfortunate student at the feet of his principal. Should I continue??
Categories: Feet, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2450 Read Count: 9753
[Report This] Published: July 12 2017 Updated: July 12 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 13 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely do continue!

Our Little Secret by SoleWriter Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Kyle's life is seemingly perfect: a beautiful wife, a successful career, and good health. But when a mysterious illness causes him to shrink, life becomes a little less perfect. Can he overcome the illness or will he be forever changed?


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22393 Read Count: 138042
[Report This] Published: July 27 2017 Updated: October 18 2021
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 04 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: A Lesser Man

Somehow I failed to notice this story until now, so I read five chapters in one gulp. TOTALLY WORTH IT!

Author's Response: Well better late than never 😉 Glad you like it!

Paul in Wonderland by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Paul's love of all things Alice in Wonderland sends him down the rabbit hole when his entire family discovers his fetish and decides to do something about it.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9182 Read Count: 52499
[Report This] Published: August 23 2017 Updated: August 29 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: August 24 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a huge fan of Queensville (cough cough), any new picture or story is good news;

I trust a story from you is going to be great news, as usual :)

Iirc(*) it's also the first time I notice you take commissions - now that's something I'll have to remember.

 

 

(*) I'll admit it took me a few seconds to understand that "oh, no, not again", but in my defense I've always heard it in my language...



Author's Response:

Cough cough indeed. If you're a fan of QueensVILLE, you'll hopefully dig this story.

I've technically been open to commissions for a while but have never really attempted to advertise it until now.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.