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Summary:

A year into his house arrest, Scott Stevens is placed in shrunken criminal rehab, with the possibility of becoming his mother Judy’s permanent shoe slave. Faced with serious girlfriend troubles, a never-ending parade of greedy bare feet, and an increasingly powerful little sister, he’ll need all the help he can get.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63541 Read Count: 310011
[Report This] Published: December 30 2016 Updated: November 15 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 01 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Son for Rental

This chapter and the previous make me wish Judy had a twin sister that works as a teacher...

Author's Response: A long time me ago I'd actually planned to give Judy a sister. But ultimately, one controlling matriarch in Scott's life is probably more than enough.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: May 16 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Professional Guinea Pig

On the plus side, he's probably earned some points with Judy; too bad he will eventually have to explain that this "generic" shoe makes such a big difference, I have a feeling his mommy will buy a custom made clear shoe, or she will have him test many pairs of them...

 

"Me too, me too!" (Maggie, very soon)



Author's Response:

Hehe. As much as Judy has her fun at Scott's expense, she also would ultimately prefer the shoe that allows him to stay inside for longer without injury

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Date: March 25 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Mother's Bedmate

To quote another of my favorite authors, "I'm proud of you, you're learning!"

This chapter opens many many possibilities... oh, I forgot to write it before, but I hope you realize that sooner or later you'll have to write more about those studies ;)

Author's Response:

I would like to eventually write more stories set in this universe that touch on backstory things like those studies

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Date: May 12 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Give Me a Hand

And right after giving her a hand, he will have to tell Maggie everything about him meeting Olivia Blackwell. Unless she learns about it from Olivia's next instructional video of course...

Author's Response:

Maggie will definitely have some curiosities here

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Date: December 31 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid

if I were not so partial to dominant ladies with a tiny in their stockings, I'd say this is the best first chapter in the series; regardless, it's a wonderful way to close the year!



Author's Response:

Aw shucks. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: January 31 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Sisters Over Feet

I've been a huge fan of screwing with the terms of punishment since good ol' "Suspended in 2133"(*), so I love this chapter just for that.

Surprising to see CGI for training - acting for educational videos would be a great demonstration that rehab is working, they're robbing tinies of a precious chance to prove they've changed for the better :)


(*) And I still maintain that the reason we didn't get to hear how long it's going to be for Scott is that he was daydreaming while the judge told him, but I'll admit he must have found out by now.

Author's Response:

The rules of punishment do have some similarity with that story. That's a good point you raise about using real tinies, but the producers may have alternate goals, like wanting users to view the tinies as just that liiittle bit less human

At this point in the series, Scott will have the possibility of release in one year from this point, but it's up to the results of his next review.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: February 04 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Hot Coffee

Great to see Nancy is back! (even if, Nancy is back, a long time without Maggie... too good to be true, it must be a trap)

About Nancy, I really really hope Ms Stevens remembers her agreement with Scott.

In the meantime, I'll wait to see what's so special about this woman that Judy would actually let him out of the house with her(!)

PS: "beyond which that which" - I'm partially confident it's a typo, but I'm also too tired to be certain :)

Author's Response:

Nancy's always glad to be back. Judy does remember the agreement with Scott, but that doesn't necessarily mean she doesn't define some of the terms differently than he does. And we'll hear a little more about this woman in coming chapters. Nice catch on the typo.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: February 05 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Hot Coffee

Darn typo - I meant great to see *Carolyn* back, poor Scott; I can't stand Nancy (mostly because of how Judy handled their previous meeting tbf)

Author's Response:

Ha! I can understand that. Most people probably aren't as glad to see Nancy back, including Scott.

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Date: February 15 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Come to Nancy

I was under the impression the agreement was not to let Nancy touch him or something like that, but it's one of the few parts of the story I'm NOT rereading, so I'm probably wrong. Still, that he stayed calm after "Did that bother you?" is amazing, he could have at least asked that she keeps Nancy away from him period rather than building a blacklist of things she won't do AFTER she's done them at least once - or if it doesn't work, use a whitelist: agree that Nancy is allowed x,y,z and nothing else.

Still shocked.

Author's Response:

The agreement is more that Nancy won't do what she did to him at the end of TO6 again; she's still cleared to play with him. Scott just decides to pick his battles

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Date: February 27 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Ella Arrives

It just occurred to me that, since the first episode is officially non-canon, we need more Ella - we hardly know her!

(PS: I almost freaked out last time because I misread those 13 months as 13 months since their last meeting, not their last time *alone* :)

Author's Response:

Hehe. Ella will make more appearances in this story than her previous cameos. And yeah, the 13 months is since TO5 when he first went into house arrest

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Date: March 02 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Old In and Out

So she likes him tiny; mommy's timeout 1 wasn't *that* non-canon after all :)

After that "with..." I was wondering how much she knows about his current conditions, but I guess she will learn (almost) everything from Judy's book - I'm honestly curious to see her back when she's read it.

PS
Maybe I missed it, but (assuming nothing changes) how much does he have left now?

Author's Response:

The first Timeout is tricky because while it's non-canon because of the actual events not lining up with the rest of the stories in the series, there are certain character or tonal details that are the same, such as Ella maybe not minding having Scott be so small. Ella does know a lot about Scott's current conditions, which is why she's hesitant to leave. And he has at least a year left.

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Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Any Friend of Maggie's

Maggie can be trusted keeping him in her cleats while playing soccer without him even going to the hospital, not sure what he's worried about... oh, wait, that's the pmrd :)

Author's Response:

Hehe. Scott has to learn to trust in the power of plot convenience ;)

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Date: March 25 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Smell of Sin

"she hadn’t worn him in her shoe for a year" - even knowing it it's weird to read (adds "improves sibling relationships" to list of advantages of shrinking detention)

And also, "It had certainly taken him and Ella a few tries to figure it out" must be saved for posterity, someone someday needs to write about people scratching their heads until they figure it out :)

Author's Response:

Hehe. I'm sure there's some comedy gold waiting to be had in that potential figuring-it-out scenario

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Date: March 25 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Two Offers

I'm not sure if Maggie's proposal to help is for real (diplomacy backfire!) or she increased the quality of her trolling, but either is fine :)

I was about to write she should tell Ella and prank him about it on April the 1st if it weren't for Ella being away, but after he proposed to help Judy, I'm stuck thinking "what if Maggie finds out?"...

Oh, and it appears that Judy doesn't know about Ella; now that granting permission to see her is meaningless I wonder what she will come up with...

Author's Response:

One never can tell with Maggie. And you're right it's probably best that Scott keeps his offer to Judy secret

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Date: February 19 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Hot and Cold

Wtf - thirteen months?! That explains a lot... but I guess Judy can get away counting time with the family as visits.

Author's Response:

Basically, yeah. Ella can come into the house, and she can go places with Scott as long as a family member comes along. But still not quite the same for Scott.

Good Riddance by Emma Gear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Some people like to just make a broad statement about their New Year's goals. Others write a short story about a mini giantess violently murdering a man. I'm in the latter category.
Categories: Feet, Giantess, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3406 Read Count: 7348
[Report This] Published: January 05 2017 Updated: January 05 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 06 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"One shaky wheeze was all he before when it"...

My new year's goal is to find gts stories I like & point out silly things like this, just like in the previous years ;)

Good story btw!

Little Liar by Ackbar Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

In a world where telling a lie results in shrinking, an inch-tall Daniel has a few uncomfortable lessons to learn about truth and trust beneath the feet of his best friend Olivia.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Truth or Shrink
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10901 Read Count: 45219
[Report This] Published: January 09 2017 Updated: February 01 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 10 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wut, you mean "Truth or shrink" has a second half that you wrote? and you're back?

... must be Christmas...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Nobody ever expected her to win, but now that she has the new President is gonna live up to her word and Make America Big Again


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29402 Read Count: 263250
[Report This] Published: February 18 2017 Updated: April 07 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 21 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Loose Ends

"Scandal" or explain :)

More seriously, did he get his 3rd strike *before* the rape? because if so, America needs to do something about all those 3rd-strikers - now!!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 25 2017 Title: Chapter 11: A Modest Proposal

Tnx for the bonus (I didn't know the original was so short, I've just stopped reading it to write this comment)

Otoh there are two problems with the Male Use Act:
1. it will probably leave many women without a single man to, ehm, help them
2. why should the government tell american women what to do with their men?

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 28 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Full Treatment

"whatever they could fine" (because I'm drawn that way)

More seriously, unless they find a way to manufacture them in less than 9 months each I predict that "three in one" isn't going to last.

PS
Don't forget the 1st gentleman

PPS
Don't forget Charles&Emily

PPPS
Don't forget about those poor giantess lovers who will read this story 30 years from now and will wonder wtf... nvm, just wanted to say this story is going great, congratulations to both of you!