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Saving Nancy by Luidgi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Nancy studies at St-Lawrence's private school for girls and right at the beginning of the school year, she managed to become the whole school's footslave, and she likes it. As a therapy, the school's principal decided that shrinking Nancy would change the game and save her from those weird and uncommon desires. 

Enough said.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3397 Read Count: 77960
[Report This] Published: May 19 2015 Updated: June 13 2016
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 14 2016 Title: Saving Nancy

Since everyone is going out of their way to save her, I guess this counts as a happy ending for her.

I hope that Michelle, Ashley & Amanda will get out of the blacklist - they tried their best after all :)

PS
Let's not forget about poor Carolyn! She *needs* a sequel!

Author's Response:

You're right I was planning to make an epilogue  witht he title "What happened to Carolyn." It's coming. No worries!

Thanks for your review. 

 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 02 2016 Title: Saving Nancy

When someone woke her up and it turned out to be Michelle, well, that was a surprise

- even if they had planned ahead.

 

Poor Carolyn...

 

I should probably write that it's going to be interesting to compare to her previous experience

on the soccer field, but the truth is... I can't wait for next morning :D

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2015 Title: Saving Nancy

Thumbs up for the end of this chapter, it's something that most writers avoid like the plague...

 

And it was nice to find out that the part I enjoyed the most is also Nancy's favorite :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 17 2015 Title: Saving Nancy

"her both X" => "both her X", see eg http://forum.wordreference.com/threads/both-her-legs-vs-her-both-legs.2997682/

Seriously, it's just an excuse to ask you not to abandon this story - had I not been rere...rereading it I would have never noticed :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 28 2015 Title: Saving Nancy

Great to see you back! After a month, I didn't know if I should get worried or you just had school exams or similar...

I'd guess Rosie should make sure that Nancy doesn't stop liking feet, but I'm not sure she has long-term plans, she might just squeeze as much fun as she can, while she can. Or maybe try to make the principal extend her ISS...

Oh, "holding a Nancy’s soccer bag" ;p

Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for the review. 

 

I have corrected the mistake. 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 04 2015 Title: Saving Nancy

carnaj2 wrote most of what I wanted to write better than I can - tnx dude!

 

I semi-disagree on male feet - the general rule is, since many people (me included) don't like them, state it from the beginnging: if there's a lot, add a tag (like a few of my favorite authors, eg gtswburg), if it happens once, add a warning (timeout 6).

In this case simply reading the story counts as a warning, so I'll forgive you ;p

 

That being said, it's worth repeating that it's YOUR story and you're free to add anything to it - I wrote a lot about it in comment to another story, Bill's Big Break, which I discovered rjust now seems to have been deleted :(

https://web.archive.org/web/20130921215159/http://giantessworld.net/reviews.php?type=ST&item=3447 apparently only saved the beginning of the conversation, too bad! (but on the bright side, we might recover some story that was deleted)

 

I also strongly disagree on punctuation - being a programmer, I agree with eg Ryan on

http://www.dailywritingtips.com/period-goes-inside-quotation-marks/: English rules are clearly wrong... ;p

 

Oh, and while Mrs Smith never said it was the whole blacklist, I'm glad to notice that a certain coach wasn't mentioned...



Author's Response:

Well I don't like male feet either. yuck. they are like the anti-fetish. BUT, I thought adding a very light part with Jake would bring Nancy lower and degrade her. And that was the purpose of that small episode. 

 

Next chaper coming, and it's a long one. 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: November 22 2015 Title: Saving Nancy

I was 100% sure coach Rosie would be more than happy to stay with shrunken Nancy,

probably plot to have her punishment extended...

Oh well, let's hope that Michelle remembers she has to spend a whole day with Nancy :)



Author's Response:

She has, right? Update coming soon. 

Best Summer Never by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

An underachieving teen, doomed to repeat his grade, spends the summer shrunken in his teacher’s shoe to learn exactly why his studies are so important.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4030 Read Count: 57352
[Report This] Published: June 30 2015 Updated: July 08 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: June 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is there any exam at the end of the year (or beginning of the new year)? Because honestly, the second thing I thought was, he'd get about three weeks more than 63 weeks here.

First thing, of course, being that I love this kind of stories.

Zeroth, that you&others seem to be writing faster than I have time to read, but I can't complain about that :)

Author's Response:

My thought was, he's probably just in this program for June and July. So I guess he can count himself lucky.

I have been writing pretty quickly lately. As always, I appreciate hearing your thoughts.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 04 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sizac explains soccer games and much much more about the timeout series... except of course it doesn't explain girls playing soccer ;)

The story being three chapters short I guess crushes all hopes of this-or-that-happening (extended punishment, finding out why he's in there, ...), but Kevin at least will be happy to hear the news.

Author's Response:

Sizac actually hasn't been introduced yet in the Time-Out stories, so Scott's not under its protective effects, though there may yet be another explanation for why he can be worn during a soccer game.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 05 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

@HectorVanDyne you're right, I conflated "can survive" and "takes no damage". Must be the summer heat... :)

Author's Response:

Right. Sizac allows the person to be completely unharmed and even spared pain, whereas Scott comes out of Maggie's shoes with bruises.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 08 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He didn't get anyone else to discover his drawings, he got rid of his addition, Courtney acts almost kind to him... he couldn't have been luckier!

Author's Response:

Things could certainly be a lot worse for him. Thanks for reviewing!

Special Assignment by GFBJ99 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

An average cubicle worker gets a surprise in the sudden attention of his domineering boss… and the new duties she has prepared for him.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10559 Read Count: 30311
[Report This] Published: July 01 2015 Updated: July 13 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 14 2015 Title: Special Assignment

In case anyone missed it, "fleck" is a beautiful short story that was posted a few days ago :)

Other than that - awesome! I hope you'll consider describing some other, ehm, "promotions" given by Athena Sinclair; I'm sure she wants to make up for what she did (not taking a video that is :)

Author's Response:

Hopefully, I get around to doing another story in this canon. I may write something different as a break first. Thanks for the review.

Fleck by STC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

I wrote something for someone who touched me in a very special way.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1432 Read Count: 7935
[Report This] Published: July 09 2015 Updated: July 09 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: July 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not usually a fan of such extreme size difference, but for some reason I absolutely love this story - congrats!

Bigger and Better by STC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A young woman gets everything she wants at the expense of others, but that suits her just fine.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3305 Read Count: 13143
[Report This] Published: July 25 2015 Updated: July 25 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is SO well written, I can't believe there are so few comments!

Trial and Error by Inwiththebooks Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

The rather narcissistic shut-in prince of a rather dimunative race is sent out into the world with the goal of finding the right suitor to marry. A rather simple goal... if every single one of his 'matches' weren't bigger than he. Not all are proper benevolent ladies either. With an informed retainer that is never around when he needs him as his only companion the prince sets out on a journey of self discovery, peril, and the occasional steamy encounter.


Categories: Incest, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51596 Read Count: 189312
[Report This] Published: August 04 2015 Updated: December 30 2020
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 22 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2

You won the bet, here's your 0.00$ I owe you.

 

But really, it's great to see you're back to working on this story, I thought you had decided it wasn't cruel enough by your standards and abandoned it.



Author's Response:

Not that it wasn't cruel enough, more just hadn't had the time or inspiration for it. Still, happy folks still like this!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 22 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.3

Does anyone feel like attempting to interpret the prophecy?

Truth or Shrink by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 137]
Summary:

A day in the life of a compulsive liar who just happens to exist in a world where failing to tell the truth results in shrinking, leaving him at the mercy of his family, friends, and teachers.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Truth or Shrink
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27818 Read Count: 314064
[Report This] Published: August 27 2015 Updated: December 22 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: You Can Handle the Truth

I should have taken notes while I was reading, now I'm not sure what I should comment about... hey, nobody mentioned mamabliss in the chapters with the "throne" thing, so I suggest you all go and read "double time" at http://www.maximumgts.com/ and its prequel, "ass time".

There, I wrote something. Awesome story!

Author's Response:

Good to hear from ya. Thanks for reading!

Maid and Servant by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

When housemaid Zara turns the tables on her employer, she presses her advantage for everything she can get. Some things are more valuable than money.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4380 Read Count: 15767
[Report This] Published: February 26 2016 Updated: February 26 2016
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: February 26 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

PPS
It's great to see you're still with us!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I usually end up enjoying, say, 10% of your stories, due to violence etc etc

Still it's worth reading all of them until I'm certain that it's something I really don't want to read, exactly because you write some gems as (the first two chapters of?) this story.

PS
Just out of curiosity, is there anything special about february 26, or did you just think "omg, it's been a whole year!"?

Queensville: Nightmare Fuel by Asterisk Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Every night a young man has horrific nightmares of his own mother killing him, but what happens when she finds out?

 

This story is a commission set in Molotav's Queensville universe. For more like this I recommend going to his Deviantart account.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Butt, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Queensville
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5183 Read Count: 10025
[Report This] Published: March 29 2016 Updated: March 29 2016
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Let me search for something to speak about... oh, yeah, the ending was a bit abrupt.

Because really, I can't help but think that the reason this story stayed without a comment for so many hours is that people were just speechless!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.