Penname: Kyrios [Contact] Real name: Sigfried Phoenix
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Frilly Fronka's Candy Calamity by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A tour of a famous candy company goes wrong when college student Zhen is the only member of the group to avoid a shrinking incident. Having no clue as to what happened, she picks a most inopportune time to indulge in her sweet cravings...

WARNING: This story contains vomiting and vomit descriptions at the end. The text itself has a warning, and it's *very* obvious when it's gonna show up. Even if that's not your thing, you could probably still enjoy the story up till then. Who knows!

With that out of the way, this story is mostly centered around unaware, shrinking, vore, and endo. There's other size-content as well, too, as well as plenty of burps. Based on a silly idea, this story was written and edited in a just under a week. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

Special thanks to those who gave good advice for the story.

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6752 Read Count: 4583
[Report This] Published: July 13 2020 Updated: July 13 2020
Reviewer: Kyrios Signed
Date: July 14 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is easily one of the best stories with a vore focus I've read here in awhile. The pred sounds attractive but in a realistic way and she displays a cute sense of gluttony. I enjoy the endo bits and the horror of being in a stomach's environment. The burps and how it impacts the poor trapped souls are incredibly hot. The vomit scene isn't really my thing but the sheer terror of it is endlessly arousing. 

I know it was just a one shot but I really wouldn't mind if you wrote something with this character again. 



Author's Response:

Hello Kyrio. Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'm really happy that, despite not enjoying the vomit-stuff in-and-of-itself, you managed to find appeal somehow. I was worried that bit would scare people away, and I did my best to warn readers when it was coming.

 

I'm glad you seemed to enjoy the story. I always like to hear what people like/dislike and all that. As for writing something with the Zhen character again... we'll see what the future holds! I made her up just for this story, and I haven't done a sequel to any of my existing stories yet. She'd probably be tricky to write something new for, given her backstory here.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.