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This is the third part of the Model City Saga!

Author's Chapter Notes:

The saga is back!  Hope you enjoy!

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It had been about two weeks since the chaotic events had occurred in the home of Carrie and Victor.  About two weeks since everyone had been shrunken and nearly devoured by their daughter’s crazed friend. Two weeks since they had been rescued by Marie, and taught a lesson about responsibility now that they knew they were in the presence of the shrink ray.

In the past two weeks, there had been some changes in the household. For one, Eddie was now back away at college, finishing up his senior year. He had also broken off his relationship with Heather, leaving her heartbroken. Though she was still very sexually attractive to him, Eddie just couldn’t get past the fact that she had shrunken and swallowed him, nearly leaving him for dead inside of his stomach. Marie’s parents, had also really soured on Heather, even going as far to ask Marie not to invite her over anymore. Carrie and Victor were very fond of Erin though, thinking Erin’s relationship with Marie was very sweet.

Life seemed to be going pretty normal for Marie. She and Erin had begun to film videos, write speeches and prepare presentations which they would eventually show to investors. Marie was now driven by the goal to create a series of miniature towns and resorts using her shrinking technology. She had began filling out paperwork with the patent office and was determined to get this done.

Erin, meanwhile, seemed to just be along for the ride. Though not as motivated as her friend, she just enjoyed hanging out with Marie, volunteering to be shrunken around her stunning friend at every chance she had.

Relationship-wise, Marie and Dan were still stronger than ever.  Unlike Heather and Eddie’s relationship failing the second they were exposed to shrinking technology, Dan and Marie were both loving it. Being shrunken and forced to worship his girlfriend’s massive feet seemed to awaken something deep inside Dan, and he had been willing to shrink and explore Marie’s body regularly.

While everything seemed to be going well for Marie, she was starting to realize that there may be consequences to exposing her family to her shrinking technology.  Especially when it was right there in their home.

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Taking a much needed break from writing their latest pitch and creating spreadsheet after spreadsheet, analyzing the math to determine how much they’d need in funding, Marie and Erin walked into Marie’s parent’s backyard, each in a bathing suit with a towel in hand. Laying their towels down in the grass, both women planted their butts on the towels and drifted off into a state of relaxation.

As Marie continued to lay their in her purple, two-piece swimsuit, enjoying the peace and quiet, Erin continued trying to steal subtle glances of her beautiful friend, eyes hidden behind a pair of sunglasses, admiring the view.

In reality, Marie knew exactly what Erin was doing. She made no comment, she really didn’t mind Erin’s infatuation with her as long as she didn’t try to shrink and violate her again. She was a bit flattered by it really. The two continued to lay there an sunbathe, without a care in the world.

While Marie and Erin continued to chat and relax outside, Carrie was doing some cleaning inside. It didn’t take long since the house was much cleaner than in the previous few weeks, and she tossed it up to Eddie being back away at college and Marie really only coming by to work on her project and staying in her room.

Putting some of the cleaning supplies back in the hallway closet, Carrie stopped and saw the door was open in Marie’s room.  Entering her daughter’s room, Carrie immediately turned her attention to the model city sprawled out across the table in Marie’s room.  “Hmmmm,” Carrie said with an exhale, getting down on her knees so she was near eye level with the model city.  All the thoughts came rushing back to her, first the terror of being shrunken in said city and eventually swallowed by her daughter’s crazed, ex-best friend, Heather. But besides that, she also remembered how fascinating it was, and how much she had wanted in the past to be the giant interacting with a bunch of shrunken people.  “If only….” She mumbled, picking up what she didn’t realize was an actual shrunken and stolen vehicle, rubbing it between her fingers before accidentally crushing it.  “Shit, my bad,” she mumbled, quickly rubbing her fingers together causing the car to disintegrate. “Better stop, don’t want to piss off Marie.  Again,” she laughed.

Glancing out the window in Marie’s room, Carrie smiled seeing Marie and Erin laying on towels in their backyard. She had really taken to Erin recently, thinking she was very sweet and a great influence on her daughter. She would much rather have Erin around than that psychopath Heather.

“You know, that looks fun,” Carrie muttered, walking back into her bedroom and changing into a cute, two-piece swimsuit of her own.   She loved this red swimsuit with an elegant floral print on it. “Looking good,” she laughed, squeezing her own C-cup breasts and giving her ass a slap in the mirror.

She grabbed a towel of her own and strolled past Marie’s room, peeking her head back inside. Her attention turned from the model city to the actual shrink ray. Marie had insisted on calling it a matter reducer, which made Carrie Laugh. It was a shrink ray after all.

“I think I remember how to use this,” Carrie mumbled, taking a look at the settings.  “If I just…” she started to say, pressing a few buttons, causing that silent blue beam to fire and strike Marie’s nightstand, causing it to dwindle down past the carpet fibers.

“Oh shit, gotta be careful,” Carrie laughed. She looked at the settings and noticed that the timer was set for one hour.  The settings also read “1/8 INCH”, which Carrie shrugged at, it seemed pretty self-explanatory. Then Carrie glanced out the window at both Marie and Erin sunbathing in the backyard, and a smile crept over her face.

Taking aim at the unaware woman outside, Carrie was giddy with excitement, thinking she had just brainstormed one of the greatest practical jokes in history. Making sure Erin was in the crosshairs of the device, she fired. A blue beam was emitted from the machine, but seemed to disappear as it shot out the window, lost in the natural light from outside.

Erin felt and knew nothing. She was totally oblivious to what had just happened. She continued to talk to Marie, who was just laying on her back listening. Then the talking stopped.

Turning her head, Marie sat up in confusion realizing that Erin had vanished. “Erin?  Where’d you go?” Marie shouted out, looking around at where her friend just was. She then looked down, and spotted an eighth of an inch creature, resembling an insect, on Erin’s sunbathing towel.

“Holy shit,” she whispered, lowering her face down towards what she realized was her friend. Her face broke into a smile as she studied her tiny, panicked friend. “WHAT HAPPENED, ERIN?” she laughed, failing to realize that she was also in the crosshairs of her mom. “I DIDN’T THINK WE WERE SHRINKING NOW!”

“Marie I don’t know what happened!” Erin screamed, freaking out right now. “I just shrunk, I didn’t do this on purpose!”

Marie laughed, shaking her head. She was really starting to love teasing her new best friend, particularly when she was tiny. “LET ME GUESS, YOU PROBABLY WANTED TO SHRINK YOURSELF TO GET A GOOD LOOK AT MY BODY, RIGHT?” she teased.

“I’m serious Marie!” the tiny woman squeaked. “I don’t know…”

“WELL, IF THAT’S WHAT YOU WANT,” Marie smirked. Keeping an eye on her tiny friend, Marie started to stand up, all the way to her full height. She smiled down at Erin, towering over her like an absolute goddess. She even lifted her foot into the air, hovering it over Erin’s puny form.

“ALRIGHT YOU LITTLE BUG,” she said, clearly having too much fun. “WHY DON’T YOU BEG ME NOT TO STEP ON YOU!”

“Marie…come on….” Erin said, a conflicted mess of emotions at the moment. While extremely intimidated by her friend’s giant foot, she couldn’t help but be a bit turned on by it as well. She really did love when Marie trapped her between her giant toes.

“I DON’T HEAR ANY BEGG….” Marie started to say, before being cut off mid-sentence. In a split second she went from towering over her tiny friend, threatening to crush her, to the same size, an eighth of an inch being, disoriented on her sunbathing towel.

“Ugh, what the fuck?” Marie said looking around, the reality of the situation starting to set in. She looked around back and forth, glancing at Erin and then back up to her parents’ house. Her mom was now out of Carrie’s window and out of view.

“Marie did you accidentally activate the matter reducer or something?” Erin asked nervously, rushing over to contact her friend.

“This wasn’t me!” shouted Marie in panic, leaping up to her feet.  “Did YOU set a delayed timer on it?”

Erin rolled her eyes at her friend’s accusation. “Nope, wasn’t me,” she said.

“Well, if it wasn’t you someone had to!” Marie shouted as the two friends started to bicker back and forth.

Their minor argument was interrupted when they heard a buzzing noise which sounded like it was getting closer. The shrunken duo froze and began looking around. Both women were very intelligent and had the dangers of their current situation starting to sink in. They were realizing that they were outside of relative safety of the model city, out of the house even. They were out in nature, which meant they were a lot lower on the food-chain than they were used to be.

This soon became evident. The buzzing sound was not distant anymore. Both Marie and Erin were dreading the worst, anticipating some massive predatory insect with pincers and stingers to descend down upon them. The shrunken duo looked up and screamed. They then paused in confusion.

Landing on Erin’s towel near the two shrunken women, was a bright red and black ladybug. The creature was roughly twice the size of the tiny pair, approximately a quarter of an inch long. It seemed to turn its’ head back and forth between the two, as if it was trying to determine whether they were a potential food source.

Marie was very aware that ladybugs could be predatory, and was hoping they were big enough to avoid becoming food.

“Marie, ladybugs usually eat aphids, right?” Erin said nervously.

Turning her head, Marie saw Erin starting to back away, as calmly as she possibly could. “Yeah, I think so,” she replied.

“And we’re bigger than them, right?”

There was an awkward pause as the beetle stared to cautiously approach. “Yeah I think we’re too big for that,” she nervously mumbled. 

At that instant, the ladybug started to take flight. The insect’s wings started to beat back and forth at an incredibly speed as it started to hover in the air.

“Shit, run!” Erin screamed, turning her back to the creature and starting to sprint in the mother direction. This seemed to work against her, as it just caught the insect’s attention. The hungry predator started to pursue her, while Marie could just watch in terror.

Just as the ladybug was closing in on the tiny woman, a massive shadow seemed to come out of nowhere. Marie turned, only to see an absolutely gigantic barefoot hovering in the air, descending down towards the towel.

With a thud, the titanic foot slammed down onto the towel, the impact knocking both Erin and Marie off of their feet, falling to the ground.

Slightly disoriented, Erin turned her head and looked at the massive wall of flesh that was the foot before her. Whoever’s foot this was had likely just saved Erin’s life from that ladybug. Craning her head up towards the sky, Erin’s jaw dropped examining the body of this beautiful, giant woman towering above her.

The red swimsuit accentuated the great ass and breasts of Carrie, Marie’s mother. She stood there with her hands on her hips, glaring down towards the towel, grinding her foot against the towel and turning the bug into a pulp.

“Gross, I hate bugs,” she muttered aloud, lifting her foot and admiring her handiwork. While she was doing this, she was also scanning the towel from behind her sunglasses, looking for the tiny bodies of Marie and Carrie. It took a moment, but she was able to locate the movements of both of the shrunken woman. It took all her self-control not to burst out laughing and blow her cover.

Locating one of the shrunken women on the towel, Marie lifted a giant foot once more. She couldn’t tell if this was Marie or Erin, but it didn’t matter. She was just having some fun.

“Mom no!” Marie screamed watching her mom lift up that giant, deadly appendage. She frantically started to run in the other direction, but the towel proved to give horrible traction and she only moved slowly. She turned and saw the giant foot descending rapidly towards her.  Tears starting to stream down her face, Marie closed her eyes and covered her head, as if she were a school student preparing for a tornado drill.

There was an earth-shaking *THUD* as the ground shook around Marie. She stayed motionless for what felt like an eternity. Then she began to smell that pungent aroma that she had smelled a few too many times before while she was shrunken. It was an aroma that nauseated her, one that she recognized. It was her mother’s feet.

Opening her eyes, Marie looked around. It seemed if she was totally surrounded by peach-colored walls. Looking up, she soon realized that she was standing right in between her mother’s two largest toes.

“Holy shit,” Marie muttered, before walking over to the skin and starting to furiously pound on it. “Mom I’m down here!  Help, I’m not a fucking bug!” she screamed.

Carrie just laughed. She knew exactly what she was doing. She had also spotted the other tiny woman on the towel now slightly behind her. ‘Perfect position’ she thought to herself.  “GUESS I”LL SIT DOWN FOR A BIT,” the giant woman said out loud.

The giantess than below to lower her massive ass down towards the towel, right where Erin’s tiny body was!  The shadow of the descending mountain was all Erin could see, and the panicked woman broke into a sprint, desperate not to be obliterated like the ladybug that was just pursuing her.

Despite her unaware charade, Carrie knew exactly where she was and what she was doing.  Or at least she told herself that. Her giant cheeks came into contact with the soft fabric of the towel, and she instantly looked down, exhaling in relief that she could still see the “insect” that was Erin.

“AHHHH,” she said in faux relaxation, stretching her arms back behind her to relax. Closing her eyes, Carrie broke out into a smile. If she focused hard enough, she was certain she could feel the struggles of the two shrunken women, pounding away on her body and attempting to get her attention.

Scrunching her toes, she could feel Marie desperately pounding away with her fists against Carrie’s giant sole. At the same time, she could’ve sworn she felt Erin’s tiny body maneuvering against the outside of her swimsuit, with only a thin layer of fabric separating Erin from Carrie’s monstrous vagina.

Getting a bit intrigued at the feelings of power and excitement this was causing, Carrie decided it was time to continue her act.  Sitting up, she looked down at her feet with an annoyed glare. “WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?” she mumbled, reaching down and plucking up Marie’s tiny body.

“Mom help!  It’s me, Marie!” the tiny woman shrieked as she was brought forward before the enormous brown eyes of her mother. She tried to wave and signal the giant woman that she was human, but her mom was holding her too tightly for that to succeed.

“STUPID BUG,” she said aloud, hoping to really scare Marie.  “I SHOULD JUST PUT YOU OUT OF YOUR MISTERY,’” she teased, pressing her thumb against her finger harder now, making it impossible for Marie to move at all.  

The tiny woman screamed once more, expecting her body to burst like a grape at any second now.  Instead, she found herself being lowered onto the towel next to her mother’s thigh.  As Marie looked upward, she saw her mom’s lips pucker into an “O” shape.  Then a wind that may as well have been a Category 5 hurricane blew out of her mother’s mouth, sending Marie screaming and flying backwards onto the other towel, head over heels.

“THAT’S ONE!” Carrie laughed, before turning her attention back down to her crotch. “NOW WHERE IS THAT SECOND BUG AT?”

With a menacingly look on her face, Carrie’s eyes zeroed in on the miniscule form that appeared to be running back and forth right before her giant crotch. “HMMMM, WHAT DO WE HAVE HERE,” she said, effortlessly scooping Erin’s tiny body up and bringing her to her face for further examination. Unlike Marie, Erin was to shocked to do anything.  Sure, she had been shrunken plenty of times before, but she never realized what a beautiful MILF Carrie actually was.

“YOU’RE SO MUCH CUTER THAN THE LAST BUG,” Carrie teased, shooting a glance at the other towel where she assumed Marie was. She gave Marie a giant wink, but her diminished daughter was far too out of it to pay any attention.

“I BET YOU WANT A BIG KISS, DON’T YOU,” Carrie said, licking her lips before seductively biting her lower lip right in front of Erin.

“Yes!  Yes please!” the tiny woman screamed, barely able to control herself. Despite her fear, this was like a crazy dream come true, and she could not pass up this opportunity that she was being given.

Being well aware that Erin was bisexual, Carrie brought her daughter’s new BFF towards her massive lips, before planting a giant yet gentle kiss on the eighth-of-an-inch shrinkees’ body.  She moaned softly as she did this, pulling Erin back and flashing a smile, revealing her perfect, white teeth.

“MAYBE YOU NEED TO SEE MORE OF MY BODY, LITTLE BUG,” Carrie said, winking once more. She lowered her hand down towards her giant breasts, barely contained in the red swimsuit. She pressed Erin’s body against her nipple, which was getting harder and harder behind the fabric.

Gently rotating her finger in circles, she couldn’t help but laugh at how pathetic Erin looked right now. ‘Still, she looks kinda cute like that,’ Carrie thought to herself.

While Carrie was having fun pretending to be a goddess, Erin was in absolute heaven. Her nightmare had turned into a wonderland, and every second she spent during this sensual experience on Carrie’s body was spawning new fantasies in her mind. “Great, now I’ll be in love with Marie and her mom,” Erin chuckled to herself, while her face again pressed into Carrie’s nipple. It took a minute for her to decide if she was joking or not.

As Carrie pulled Erin back from her chest, she just shook her head in a playful manner. “YOU SURE ARE A NAUGHTY LITTLE BUG AREN’T YOU?”  There was a pause before she started to started to lower her hand back down past her stomach.  “MAYBE I NEED TO PUNISH YOU!”

Erin’s eyes widened as she realized where she was going. “Oh please, yes!” she whispered to herself, her heart now pounding in her chest.

Pulling the fabric of her swimsuit forward with her free hand, Carrie was now dangling Erin’s puny body directly above her vagina. “I COULD JUST DROP YOU IN THERE.  WHO KNOWS, I MIGHT NEVER SEE YOU AGAIN….”

Unable to look away, Erin’s body was raging with hormones. It was the largest vagina she had ever seen. Sure, Heather’s had seemed bigger at the time, but that’s only because she was shrunken smaller. The smell was hitting her hard. It wasn’t a stretch to say that Carrie was also turned, which in turn, only excited Erin more.

“Oh god…please…please drop me in there!” she moaned out loud. “I fucking want it so bad!”

There was a pause before Carrie let out a loud audible.  “HEY!”

With sudden speed, Erin was pulled back from the pussy she so badly wanted to enter, and brought back before Carrie’s enormous brown eyes, studying her tiny form. 

“OH MY GOD!” the giantess said with fake shock.  “ERIN?  IS THAT YOU?  WHY ARE YOU SO SMALL?!

She stared at her daughter’s tiny friend but could not hear a word she was saying. Rather, she was now focused on the other towel, until she found what she was looking for.

“WAIT THAT MEANS,” she said, plucking the other eighth-of-an-inch “creature” off the towel.  “MARIE??”

Standing up, Carrie pretended to be concerned as she rushed inside, both Erin and Marie trapped in the enclosed fist of her right hand.  While they were captive in the darkness, Marie could hear Erin breathing heavily, a sound which she knew all too well meant that Erin was sexually excited.

After being deposited on the coffee table, Carrie lowered her face once again observing the two women. “I NEED TO KNOW EXACTLY WHAT HAPP….” she started to say, before being unable to keep up the act anymore. She just broke out laughing and shook her head, while Erin and Marie just stared up at her, wondering what in the hell was going on.

“I CAN’T…..I…YOU TOOK JUST LOOK SO CUTE LIKE THIS!” Carrie laughed, putting her giant bare feet up on the table and near flattening her own daughter.

After a quick apology for that, Carrie went on to spill everything, revealing that she was the one that shrunk the two of them, and just thought it would be funny.  She loved the visual of Marie being irate, particularly at such a helpless size.  “OH RELAX, IT WAS ONLY SET FOR LIKE AN HOUR.  YOU’LL GROW BACK IN NO TIME.”  That seemed to calm Marie’s nerves just a bit.

“BY THE WAY SWEETIE, REMEMBER WHEN YOU SHRUNK ALL OF US DOWN FOR TEN HOURS AND MADE US ALL RUB YOUR SWEATY, SMELLY FEET?  I BET ERIN REMEMBERS!”

Marie glanced at Erin who just shrugged and nodded. She then turned her attention back up to her mother.

“WELL, GET MASSAGING,” she laughed, placing both of her size sixteen feet on the coffee table before the shrinkees.  “YOU TOO ERIN, I KNOW YOU’LL ENJOY IT!”

With an exhale, Erin did not need to be told twice. “Yes ma’am!” she shouted, though there was no chance Carrie could hear her.  She walked directly up to Carrie’s right foot, which was now tilted on it’s side, and began rubbing her body against Carrie’s sole. She was in absolute ecstasy right now.

“MY, I’M GONNA HAVE TO GIVE YOU A REWARD SOMETIME WHEN YOU’RE BACK TO NORMAL,” Carrie teased, loving how submissive her daughter’s best friend was being with her.  “AFTERALL, YOU DID COME SO CLOSE TO GETTING IN MY PUSSY!”

“Oh, what the hell?!” Marie shouted, still not having moved. “Erin!  I can’t believe I actually have to say these words, but please don’t fuck my mom!”

Erin just turned to her friend and smiled. “We’ll see!” she giggled before going back to kissing the immense sole.

“HEY MISSY, I DON’T SEE YOU DOING MUCH WORSHIPPING!” Carrie snapped at Marie.

Turning to face her giant mom, Marie continued to be defiant. She just shrugged and crossed her arms, refusing to budge. Surely her mom would come to her senses soon. 

“UGH, FINE,” Carrie said, reaching down and plucking Marie up between two fingers. “YOU’VE ALWAYS BEEN DIFFICULT. I GUESS YOU ARE NEVER TOO OLD FOR A TIME OUT.”

“Wait, time out?” Marie said in a panic, trying to squirm her way to freedom. “Mom what’re you doing?!”

Delicately placing Marie between her two biggest toes on her left foot, squeezing her enough to hold her in place. Marie gagged at the combination of sweat and odor. “This is so fucking gross!” she screamed. Her jaw then dropped when she saw what her mom had in her hand.

It was a dirty, white sock. 

“No…” she said, realizing what was about to happen.  “No mom, wait!” she shrieked as the foul sock began to overtake the foot. “I’ll be good, I’ll be good!”

“AHHHHH, THAT’S BETTER,” Carrie said, sinking back into the couch with both feet still up on the coffee table. She adjusted her un-socked foot and gently scooped Erin up between her toes.

“WHY CAN’T MARIE BE MORE APPRECIATIVE, LIKE YOU?  MY FAVORITE LITTLE TOY,” Carrie whispered. Erin nearly fainted hearing those words. She was falling hard for this woman.

Carrie flexed her toes on both of her feet.  One tiny woman giggled at this and continued rubbing.  The other screamed in horror and begged her to stop.

To be continued…..

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