Date: December 08 2020 9:13 AM Title: Devotion - Into The Void
You have continued to deliver hot and erotic content.
Loved more threesome content in this chapter. The description of Caleb's time at Chase's balls, and Steph's enthusiasm and low-key dominance was great!
Also the fact that he wound up under the bed while they enjoyed their post sex sleep, with her slippers and still covered in cum.
I'm so excited for more, keep it up :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, these types of stories are what i like the most but don't see alot of them with alot of detail.
Figured i would write my own and try to make every screnario count in detail alone.
Much more to come!
Date: December 08 2020 8:45 AM Title: Devotion - Into The Void
I know how hard it is to avoid going too fast in a slow shrinking type of story. So again, much praise to you for managing to do that so well. The fact that you didn't have Caleb report any size loss in this chapter goes to show your subtlety.
Have you ever wrote other stories, or is this one your first? I'd love to read more from you :)
Author's Response:
YES! it has been so hard to hold out really.
Now i kind of have a grip on the story to where i can keep the pacing correct.
The bulk of the chapters will hit once caleb is below 1ft, i gotta put my writing hat on once we get there ha.