[Report This]Date: March 29 2022 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 15, Week 7: Teacher's Pets
Hello again! :)
I must say, this is quite a cliffhanger. I wonder what will happen to Noah, but I'm sure he will stay alive, since one of the future chapters' title suggests his involvement in some kind of competition (also, there's a ladder inisde the toilet for him to climb back up, which initially hadn't caught my attention and that's why I'm reposting this review).
As for the entirety of this chapter, I guess this counts as an interesting field trip, with Troy as a tour guide. I wonder if his role ends in this part of a story, or if we encounter him again.
Speaking of Troy, I'd like to ask something about legal issues in this universe, and this is a very specific question I'd be happy to get an answer for (unless this information will become very important for the story in later parts, to the point that it serves as a device to present a HUGE plot twist; if so, I will wait): if somebody is shrunk for their claims while in theory being imprisoned for, for example, two years, and they're lucky enough to meet someone who would be happy to get them grown back, do they have to wait these two years or can they be grown back right away? This picked my interest and I'd be very grateful for an answer.
I'm also looking forward to development of some romantic relationships. I think it's fairly obvious that Noah was asking in a roundabout way about Alexis, and, although less obvious, Ms. Johnson's answer sounded as if she was remembering her past experiences while talking and this tells us more about her as a character, so this conversation kind of kills two birds with one stone. At least, I think so.
Another matter is with Brayden and Candice of course. If someone from the main cast were to be removed from the equation, I think a scenario with these two characters would be the most fitting.
Thank you for another amazing chapter! Looking forward to reading the next one!
Author's Response:
Hehe, Noah is certainly in a rather precarious situation right now isn’t he. That is the rather unfortunate part of his character though… he’s difficult to harm. We’re still early enough in the story that he’ll probably find a way back to safety, but his luck may eventually run out. We’ll have to wait and see! As for supernatural stuff, the most supernatural I think we’ll go is the introduction of the shrinking tech haha. I’ve always enjoyed stories that try to keep things realistic even when it’s not exactly possible to be realistic :)
That is a very interesting question. I’ll have to put some thought into that since I’m guilty in saying that I’ve never actually considered that before. I can share my initial thoughts though… So I’ve more or less considered the act of shrinking a guilty person as being a binary thing. Either you’re sentenced to shrinking or you’re not. Which may sound cruel because that’s essentially a death sentence, and in a strong way it is. But we’re sort of building up this world in which a high population is less than desirable. So it’s actually a good thing in the eyes of those in charge that shrinking is binary because it’s keeping the population at bay. Which sort of leads into a much deeper plot of “what if the government forced the population to stay below a certain cap so that resources were plentiful for all and the natural world was allowed to recover”. That plot is ultimately buried deep below the surface, but how far will we go with that idea in this story? That I’m not sure of yet. But one way or another, I want to get “that” story down in words someday. This is almost like a practice story for that one. So to answer your question, my instinct tells me that once you’re shrunk, you’re shrunk. Your punishment has been served and it’s up to the world if you’re allowed to be regrown (and there are only so many who can do that). But regrowing is rare given the reputation that disposables have (they’re typically very bad people). Good question!
I completely agree that we need to work on developing some romantic relationships. It’s probably what I struggle with the most with writing because love is such a deeply complex thing. It’s actually incredibly difficult to create that natural bond between characters. I’ve read too many books that basically say, “and they fell in love”. But that’s not how love is supposed to be. It’s a deeply personal connection that two characters need to have. It needs to be shown, not forced and told. So through the next 40 or so chapters that’s something I want to try and explore between a few of the characters. But you’re definitely correct in picking out Ms. Johnson’s past in her speech. She’s definitely still got a lot going on that she’s working on figuring out.
Date: March 28 2022 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 15, Week 7: Teacher's Pets
Just wanted to say I love this story and your writing. So detailed. Love when it goes into butt/toilet territory! I feel like this sub-story is gonna see some cruelty for pleasure's sake on the part of Ms. Johnson and her friends, and I hope so! Antenna's out! haha
Author's Response:
Hey thanks very much! It’s always super exciting to see a new name take the time to share their thoughts. So thanks for that! My reviewers have certainly kept me on my toes thus far haha. There can never be too much detail it feels like. It has been really cool to see how people like you have been shaping the story and poking me to come up with new ideas through this review thread. This little section at Ms. Johnson’s house will be relatively quick and probably not the most exciting… but we’re going to be taking a trip to the city shortly and that’s where I’ve got pages upon pages of ideas to get down into words. This little part is sort of the bridge in between. We haven’t really seen much cruelty so far (the girls in the changeroom really only had a little bit of fun and Mrs. Hulme did her thing quickly) but I think that’ll change soon. The boys are about to be very thankful they’re not disposables. Also glad to hear that you’re a fan of the butt/toilet realm cause that’s always been where my mind wanders too. So we’ll certainly see a lot more of those two ideas.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2022 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 15, Week 7: Teacher's Pets
Oh my goodness! I’m getting locker room flashbacks from this chapter! And the fact that this is part 1 and has that cliffhanger… I already know this section of the story is going to be crazy good.
My favorite sequence of events is still that locker room series of chapters because so much was happening and so many dangerous, yet erotic things were happening!
And now I’m getting Deja vu vibes from this chapter! I mean, there’s likely more giantesses running around soon, we got the boys all shrunken and could be mistaken as disposables, and Mrs. Johnson is now the giantess instead of all those girls earlier.
Wow, if Mrs. Johnson’s friends are that group of milfs that I had in my head, then these next few chapters might be epic!
Imagine being a friend of Mrs. Johnson and she invited you to her house knowing that there were disposables everywhere. I bet every guest will be super horny when they show up. And the fact that these boys are just following Troy makes things even more interesting.
But before that, that car ride scene was great. Not really the ride itself, but the questions that the boys asked. I mean Calvin asked what I wanted to know all along. If I was in her class, that was a question that I’ve always wondered. Wow, he is bold. And Mrs. Johnson’s answer was great, because she didn’t dismiss it, she just gave a reasonable response while considering the idea. Now I appreciate that, especially since she took the time to explain how it felt and how it could lead to them having a car accident. Lol. Well played.
Ok, back to Troy. Was this the same guy that used as a reward during that soccer game? I forgot the girl’s name, but she was Alexis’s sister I think. Troy did mention his arm was affected by a certain incident that didn’t include Mrs. Johnson so I’m curious who it was.
Also, I also found it strange that Mrs. Johnson told them not to trust the disposables, but also to listen to Troy. And the fact that he got used probably means he is also a disposable. Would I trust this guy, probably not, but I also wouldn’t mind take a risk or two while I’m in Mrs. Johnson’s house. It might be a bit safer than that locker room. (Maybe).
One thing I loved was the stories that Troy said about Mrs. Johnson. So it’s true that she usually has someone in her panties all day? Wow, that is just amazing! And the fact that she just randomly snatches them is perfect. I would happily chill in her bedroom hoping to be taken with her for the day. Much better than being a snack in the kitchen.
Now we got Noah in the toilet. The toilet that everyone uses. That’s gotta suck. Fortunately, you did mention that there’s a ladder on the inside of the toilet so Noah could climb up. (But imagine if Mrs. Johnson decides to use it then. Or a friend of hers.) Man, there’s so many possibilities!
Speaking of Mrs. Johnson’s friends, I wonder how many of them will there be. Will there be one woman for each tiny guy? If yes, I hope the naughtiest one picks Gatlin. It’s so fun to see him be humiliated.
Anyway, I’m glad you are back and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I like your optimism haha. But our time at Ms. Johnson’s house will probably be relatively short cause we gotta head to the city soon. So these three parts will serve as more of a bridge in between the school and the city. The real excitement will be in the next chapter. This little sequence at Ms. Johnson’s house is kinda fun though cause it shines some light on Ms. Johnson’s life. There are a few rather fun moments though. And the end of Part 3 holds a pretty big twist that I think might even surprise the great TomSpeedy!
I loved that changeroom sequence too. It was always a huge motivator for this story. But I think we might be able to rival it with this coming city chapter. Can’t get too excited yet since I haven’t started writing it, but in my opinion, my ideas section for that chapter is pretty great :) I think the city chapter will be similar in vibes to the changeroom, but also a completely different animal.
The car ride lol. I was trying to come up with a scenario in which the boys (who are all pretty comfortable with each other) could have an opportunity to speak privately with Ms. Johnson. I love the car ride cause it really shows how much the boys are beginning to trust their teacher. You can’t just ask anyone if you can ride inside them. Even Noah, the shy and meek, is starting to come out of his shell a little and ask Ms. Johnson some questions. Ms. Johnson always seems to have a good answer to bold questions lol.
Yep, same Troy. He’s still alive! It was Allison who used him the last time he popped up. That was a fun little exchange and I tried to have Troy’s answer be more of a sly response to the arm question, hinting that perhaps Troy didn’t mind injuring his arm. Really just wanted to establish that Troy is still alive and actually seems to be doing pretty well.
Yeah I would say there’s a difference between following someone and trusting someone. I guess you could argue that you have to put some trust in someone to follow them, but the boys are really just following Troy because they were told to. They don’t have to do what he says. Ms. Johnson’s warning was more along the lines of, “carefully analyze what the disposables say before you react. Don’t just assume they’re looking out for you.”
Ah Ms. Johnson, filling her disposable’s minds with stories to share :) I’m sure there are plenty of tales stashed away inside Troy’s mind. He’s been there for quite a while now.
Luckily for Noah, the shrunken don’t pee very much (volume wise) so it’s really not even noticeable. And we’ll find out at the start of the next chapter that it would’ve been flushed fairly recently. But yep… the toilet that everyone uses. The toilet Ms. Johnson uses. The toilet that all her giant friends use too. Would be a shame if someone were to come along and sit down… Ms. Johnson’s friends are gonna be arriving shortly!