[Report This]Date: October 26 2022 2:58 AM Title: Enter Sarah's World
Enjoying this story a lot. It's interesting to explore just how hard it would be to make new friends at that size without scaring them off and the confidence issues that might arise.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I definitely had a lot of fun thinking about those implications
Date: January 19 2022 6:38 PM Title: Enter Sarah's World
Ok So I thought that this story was going ti just be genric fluff without tension. I love gentle but after the first few chapters It typically meanders into boring fluff with a mary sue giantess and no tensions between the GTS the tiny ir any other entity
Hwoever this ine shows promise, the introduction of Darnell brings alot of things.
1. It brought even modicum amount if tension because it shows that not wberyone loves Sarah.
2. It shows that Sarah isn't a mary sue always nice individual she can become frustrated and threaten people if she want to.
3. These anti Sarah people can become a plot thread for intresting story telling.
Author's Response: My goal with Sarah was the first introduce her as this sort of one note character, but as you get to know her more she becomes more complex, along with the concept of her very existence. I was gonna go more into her backstory in the next chapter, hopefully I'll find the time and motivation to write it soon
Date: October 11 2021 10:19 PM Title: Enter Sarah's World
Update pls
[Report This]Date: July 05 2021 3:48 AM Title: Enter Sarah's World
Interesting emotional stuff in the cabin.
Very detailed.
Darrel got the scare of his life thinking he was going to die and Mia has to comfort Sarah.