Date: December 28 2020 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Hey! just wanna say I'm still excited to see more from you!
hope things are going well, merry christmas, and don't feel the need to rush
just wanted to let you know we're still loving your stories <3
Date: December 05 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Just dropping ideas, not a review this time
I keep imagining some milf accidentally finding the drive and not knowing what's on it,,
Maybe jenny accidentally loses it and her friend finds it and decides to hang onto it until she sees jenny again? could lead to a lot of physical fun with the drive since she decides to carry it wherever she goes in case she sees jen!
Jenny brings it to a gym and accidentally leaves it in a locker room bench, the friend finds it...
the friend has it in her back pocket,, or maybe her gym bag,,
it really gets a rough treatment under that friend's care,,,,
and the friend is unaware that it has millions of people on it, as it's pressed into sweat-soaked panties or jean-clad ass
ooo or even the friend could have it in a front pocket as she has some fun! the drive bouncing around as she reaches in her unbuttoned jeans and fingers herself
there could even be a dramatic close call for a bad ending (or a real bad ending if you wanna wrap up the story at some point!) where the mother almost leaves it in her pocket as she's about to put the jeans in a washing machine!
feel free to mix and mash these ideas!
Date: December 05 2020 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Been pretty obsessively checking your profile once a day for about a year waiting for your uploads. In regards to the current story I'd definitely like to see her put that flash drive up her ass and go jogging.
Date: December 05 2020 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Good stuff. I wonder if this is setup for someone else finding the laptop)drive for a bit
Date: November 15 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Great idea, excited to read
Date: November 13 2020 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Original idea!
Im keen to see where this is going.
Date: November 13 2020 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Thanks for the response.
I think it's okay to cut to the reality-controlling mind-warping eternal idle torture parts, since thats what makes these stories great, but I think spending a bit more time on describing what is happening, how it looks, how the people involved feel etc. goes a long way toward making it feel more concrete and engaging than "then A happened then B happened then...". Feel free to hit me up for ideas or proofreading etc.
Date: November 13 2020 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
I love your stories! I'd be intrested to see more physical intreaction with the thumb drive in one of these stories, (maybe she carries it outside the house, keeping it in her purse or panties? I think her being careless with it would make things intresting!) but anyway I'm excited to see more!
Date: November 12 2020 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Love all your stories. Hope to see this one get continuation.
Author's Response:
Yeah I'm sorry to you guys for not continuing a lot of these. The truth is I've been learning as I go, and as I've made stories I've done a bad job pacing myself. Instead of taking things slow and building up something substantial, I've gone right to person playing with reality, which is no good
I hope to pace this story better ^^
[Report This]Date: November 12 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Love it so far! Maybe she playfully bullied the little reality treating it kind of like a game?
Date: November 12 2020 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
So cool! A news story from you, you are one of my favorite author there. Hope it will continue^^