Date: May 03 2022 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting setup. Of course the meat of these stories come from the relationship itself, so am looking forward to seeing more.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2022 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm still waiting for the second chapter of that story... the first chapter is so good! It sets the mood for the next chapters, and you did a so good job describing the characters not by direct words, but by their behaviors... and considering it is based on a real GTSWorld writer, it only makes me wonder how many situations this story have hidden in the coming chapters...
Author's Response:
Oh Milla, now you’re just putting pressure on me to finish the next chapter >.< Was that the plan all along?! But don’t worry, I’ve almost completed it and I’m just proof reading atm. It will soon be uploaded. Really hoping it will meet your expectations (I’m not a great writer).
I had no idea my narration was able to put that across! It was not intentional but I’m glad it turned out that way haha. This is the kind of feedback I need!
Well, I have a very simple male mind so please don’t expect much other than “urgh pretty me like” lol
Thank you again for showing an interest and I hope you enjoy the next chapter as much as you did this first one. It has a lot more “action” so if you don’t then I have failed big time!
Date: November 07 2020 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah , it's good don't let the protagonist die or be injured by her
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, gentle. This is a vore story and we both know how those tend to turn out when Larissa is involved so I wouldn't keep my hopes up lol