[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 4:09 PM Title: Entry 16: November 15th
Just wanted to say that I absolutely love what you have created here with your current story. I adore the dynamic between the 3 main characters, especially Max and Jenna "arguing" over Trevor and resulting in his double seat was extremely cute.
I just hope that we won't see more of characters like Carly, her 2nd part felt somewhat weird with the overall feeling of the story.
The dream sequences are until now pretty nice as a break and I guess we will soon have a dream with Trevor inside of the bean bags.
BTW does Trevor participate in NNN?
Suggestion: (possibly not Dream)
How about having Trevor tag along while Max is training, she could keep him in her cleavage while she runs on a treadmill or trains with weights.
Max doing push ups while Trevor lies under her (unorthodox Titfuck) and he slowly shrinks further and further or she grows.
Anyway,
Thank you for your work and please keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input! I actually kinda agree about Carly. The serious writer in me felt that was the ultimate progression of her arc but yeah, it was akward to write and I was really nervous about the reception. As for Trevor and NNN, he was participating but the dreams he's been having lost it for him ;) if you're asking becasue you want him to take part in some action with other charachters I can say he probably will do so at some point.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 4:08 PM Title: Entry 16: November 15th
I'm honored that you used one of my ideas, and you executed it perfectly. Bot of my other ideas are free for you to use, but I'm also excited to see what yourself and others come up with. I'm looking forward to being surprised. I'm also glad that Max has gotten out of her shrinking funk. Now that she's officially the biggest human in the world, I wonder how long she'll choose to keep going. Still the whole month? Or will she stop before she gets too much bigger than Trevor?
I'm also hoping something hot happens with Jenna at some point. I know we have that confrontation with their father coming up, but so far she's had relatively little kink action going on with her. Maybe have her star in one of the dreams? It's up to you, honestly.
it was a great chapter all around. Can't wait for the next one tonight
Author's Response:
You ask all kinds of questions that I have to stop myself from answering, I don't want to give too much away. I will say that I have a plan for Max's growth through the rest of the month. Whether she stops or keeps growing I'll leave up in the air for now. There's defo gonna be an interaction with Jenna and her Father soon too. I do intend to get her more actively involed and now that Max's crisis is over hopefully that can be done.
Date: November 16 2020 3:25 PM Title: Entry 16: November 15th
Max is officially the biggest human on the planet with the world's largest dick. Surprised she has't torn through her clothes yet.
Jenna visiting her father should happen semi soon before she gets too big to fit in the house. Then again, her squeezing through that door and putting some cracks in the ceiling and such would make her father far less adversarial about the whole giantess thing.
Loving this so far.
Dream Sequence Idea:
Trevor is watching Max and Jenna work out. They're both only around the 6ft mark, but he watches them swell bigger and bigger as their muscles grow. Clothes tearing off of them; their cocks stretching further and further out. Their growth making them start jacking themselves off because at 9ft tall, they're just too horny.
And when he wakes up, its because he felt the heat coming off of Max and now he's watching her grow again as well as Jenna because they fell asleep on the couch while watching a movie. Poor couch never stood a chance. Trevor can be on Max's shoulder or something to avoid the torrent of precum making him shrink even further.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions! Depending on how many more I get in the future there's a good chance that everything that's been suggested so far will be included. I hope you continue to enjoy!