Date: November 15 2020 3:56 PM Title: Entry 15: November 14th
I love that Jenna is gonna try to get really huge before going to see her Dad, but I sure hope Trevor tags along for the meeting. I want to see how his parents react to her possibly 8ft Futa Daughter. Also might be a good scene to show some giantess rage on her. Or her boner rips through her pants. Or both.
I'd also love to see Max have a huge growth spurt as she's waiting for a little while. Maybe even while she's awake and Jenna and Trevor get to watch.
The thing I loved most about this entry is that Max and Jenna are having playful giantess arguments about who gets to hold Trevor while Trevor is just like "do I want giant tits on the left, or giant tits on the right? Why not both?"
I envy Trevor's position very much. Not the being barely over 3ft tall, but two giantesses pressing their boobs against him.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2020 4:35 AM Title: Entry 15: November 14th
Dream sequence, I love it! Now I said I wasn't going to make any more suggestions, but since you asked for input, I hope you don't mind, lol. One scenario I've always loved is the classic giantess-in-the-city type vibe. Maybe add in the military, but keep the giantess playful. Like Max is just doing whatever she wants, maybe she's crushing some cars, maybe she's just looking into a building to say hi, it could be whatever you feel like. But the entire time she's doing it the military is trying to stop her, and she barely notices their best efforts. She's just going along and having a pleasent day, maybe waving to the helicopters that are firing at her, and doesn't even feel them. I'd also like to see her flood a building, or maybe even a city, with her cum. That would be hot.
Another idea? Have her or Jenna be a giantess queen sitting naked on a throne, with dozens of tiny people around tending to her body. Some could be licking her feet, others could be massaging her nipples, and finally a good portion are servicing her cock, and she's giving orders about which person should be doing what for her body.
One final idea that I've had, which I've wanted to see done with an Amazon specifically is this: have the military try and keep Trevor apart from Max. Max, meanwhile is still just an amazon, and she's looking for Trevor because she needs him to help her get off. And she's just casually walking through whatever is thrown at her. Bullets don't hurt her, reinforced steel doors are like paper to her, no amount of men can hold her back. She's just unstoppable, and it's all so easy for her. Finally she get's to Trevor and sets him to work.
Use all of them or none of them. Whatever appeals to you for writing, it's cool with me. Keep it up, dude.
Author's Response:
There's definitly some good stuff in there! I'm not gonna say what if any comments I plan to use or why, just to keep things interesting and to avoid stepping on any toes. But as always, thanks for the feedback and suggestions! We've still got half the month to get through they really help to keep me motivated.