Date: November 13 2020 11:43 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
Loving it so far.
The comparison to bean bag chairs makes me want to see a scene where Trevor sits on Max's balls.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2020 9:10 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
Great addition! It's awesome to get to see a bit more of this world's futa community, hopefully we'll get to see these characters again and more :)
I did want to point out though, I think your weight calculations are a bit off. Max was listed as 450+ pounds a few days ago, and now she's 350? I figure you're already aware, but a doubling in height would mean an eight-fold increase in weight, or even more if she's getting buffer or better endowed.
The best way to do it would probably be (base/prior weight)*(percentage increase in height)^3, and tag on a dozen or so extra pounds for the additional appendage growth :P
Author's Response:
Ah, thanks for pointing that out. I have all of this in one big document an sometimes I accendentally referance the wrong chapters when looking for her current stats. I'll fix that right away.
Date: November 13 2020 5:30 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
Haha. I love that you added the growth part. Would love to see one with Jenna!
If Max's dick gets any bigger, it'll have to apply for citizenship. Surprised she's lasting so long. Will there be any rage on her part? Or Jenna's? That's a lot of testosterone going through them. I find it hard to believe that Carly is much of an outlier.
Would love to see Trevor's parents interact with a growing Jenna as well. Gonna be hard to be the man of the house when your daughter has a dick measured in feet.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2020 5:04 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
A nice little bit of world building. I like it. It's nice to see the better side of the futa community. It's easy to have one encounter, like Carly or that drunk asshat, paint one particular side as trashy, and only have the protagonists be the exception. But, at least from the futas side, we get to see the better half of the community. I very much liked both women, and I wouldn't mind at all seeing them interacting with our two friends again. That's just the gentle giantess lover in me speaking. I've always loved friendly and jovious interactions between those with immense power and those without. And if they get a feature with some sexy action? Well both scenarios are up to you in the first place. All in all it was an enjoyable piece of world building, and the beginning was a nice bit of tease. It's obvious most of your readers here are waiting for the big climaxe (haha), and it's those little reminders that let us know 'hey, eventually Max is gonna burst'. I look forward to when that happens. I actually hope you continue this a little bit passed NNN. Only because there's so much potential for material once Max no longer has to worry about holding her orgasms back. I'd like to see what she does once that weight's off her shoulders.