[Report This]Date: November 10 2020 2:36 PM Title: Entry 10: November 9th
Well now things are getting even more interesting, what with the introduction of a new futa. I'm sensing some potential conflict, but anything could happen so that's not entirely certain. But you've now got me curious for the future. I do wonder what the size difference between the two will end up being, now that Trevor is shrinking while Max grows. Also the foot action was nicely done. Nothing really too crazy, but if you're not a foot fetishist then I can't fault you for only including small doses. In fact if you're not into feet at all then I'm flattered you included any kind of content. Things like that don't go unnoticed or unappreciated by an audience.
One last thing I wanted to mention, and I promise this will be the last suggestion I make, I really don't want it to seem like I'm telling you how to write your own story. But I noticed you've got your main characters set up in quite a tight corner. It's clear that you'd like to explore and experiment with them, but you have to limit yourself because Max can't cum for the rest of the month. If at any point you want to do any kind of sexual exploration (not saying you have to, but just in case you want to) you could always make use of Max and Trevor's weird dreams and do a dream segment chapter. It would give you free range to do anything you want, without jeporedizing Max's NNN commitment.
Anyway keep up what you're doing. I liked your last two Growing Closer stories and I'm sure as hell loving this one, so don't do anything you don't want to do yourself. It'll be much better that way.