[Report This]Date: November 08 2020 4:22 AM Title: Entry 8: November 7th
More people should be leaving comments on this because it's only getting better. I dont mind you making the chapters longer at all. I love character development, and this was one of your best chapters yet. When I read stories, even giantess ones, I look for stories that have actual characters to them. This story has that, and you've only just added more to it. In fact you gave me the one thing I was gong to ask you about. Max's relationship to Trevor. I always want to know what the relationship is between the main giantess and the main tiny. It's my favorite thing to read about (aside from the fetish material). And I love them as a couple. I especially loved Max's protectiveness of Trevor. It's sweet and adorable to read about. The idea that this enormous, powerful woman, cares about a man smaller than her.
Something that would make a good idea (feel free to ignore this, I won't be insulted. I want you as the author to only write this the way you want to, I don't want to tell you how to do your job), if Trevor does get smaller, or even if he doesn't, he might show a little vulnerability and maybe be afraid that Max will lose interest in a guy like him as she slowly grows bigger, stronger, and all around more powerful. Meanwhile Max, who has been smaller and looking up to Trevor for most of their friendship, is probably blown away by the idea that Trevor is worried she'd leave him?
I didn't mean to ramble, but your characters have got my mind racing with possibilities. But again please, if you don't want suggestiong then I won't be insulted if you ignore this. If you want to use the idea then go for it. Write the story how you want it to and I'll read it to the end.
Author's Response:
I don't wan't to give any spoilers but I will say that judging from your comments you're probably going to really like tomorow's entry ;)