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Reviewer: MeGo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2023 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Welcome to Class

Will you ever continue this story? can I find the rest of the story somewhere else like Patreon or something?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2020 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 Using and Controlling

Loving the back to back uploads!

hmm. So Jessica is really getting all the perks now. I mean, she already has a temporary VIP pass to that lounge and she gets to witness what an A student could get. She literally is lucky. 

Phil is still being hesitant. Jade keeps his arc interesting by adding excitement to it. Otherwise, not much from Phil lately. 

Poor Jeremy. Looks like he got scammed by Cameron. Part of me feels bad for him, but another part of me doesn't. Lol. 

Wow, this Cameron character is interesting. One, she has a tiny town with 54 students, but secondly, she could hack other student's points. The town part is kinda cool, but I think the part that intrigued me the most is her hacking ability. Now that is special.

I mean, so many possibilities could happen here. Cameron could spot a student lusting after a teacher, then once the student shrinks, Cameron could tell that teacher about that student who fantasized about her and the teacher could buy that student from the vending machine. 

This hacking idea is making my head spin, and that's pretty cool. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2020 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 Trades and Updates

Yes! You are back again! Lol. I miss this story! 

Cool to see Jessica finally get a tiny. I have no idea what she will do with him, but I think she might try something naughty. She seems more embracing of this system than Phil, so I think she will use a tiny sooner than him. 

That Tamara scene is great. I like the idea of a special lounge for superior students that rule the school. And here, they got other students serving them. It's the place to be if you want to have a good time, (unless you are a tiny). Lol

However, the best part of this chapter, or actually this whole story for me, is easily the Ms Evelyn scenes. And in this chapter, I love how in depth the teacher arc could be. The fact that teachers could team up and fail students to shrink them is a crazy, but awesome tactic. I'm just imagining some poor innocent guy who just joined this school as a freshman and he is taking a class with some sexy horny teacher who likes to dominate her students. She flirts with him after class suggesting what she might do with him if he shrinks. The guy gets scared so he switches classes with a different teacher, but soon all his teachers fail him so he gets shrunk and traded back to original teacher who gets to use him as a sex toy and keep him forever. Man, that would be amazing!

I wonder how Tom got into Ms Evelyn's possession. Now a little side story about that could be pretty exciting. 

Wow, I just love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes! I am back again! I took a break just due to life getting in the way, but I am back!

Jessica's story is ramping up, I have a clear and solid story for her, involving her getting used and molding into the world around her. Helped by her friends in her dorm room. 

I enjoy Tamara as she is just rich and she knows it. And I wanted to display this but also other students and how they would all use the power they had. 

I thought you would enjoy Ms Evelyns scene, its one I enjoyed alot when writting. While she is not in the chapter after this, I have ideas planned out for her and she will re-appear, with more story, next time.

And I shall have to include a mini story of Toms story before he was shrunk one day I suppose. 

Glad your still enjoying it and enjoyed this chapter and I hope you enjoy the latest released one also!

Thanks again for another fantastic review!

Reviewer: waluigixxx Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2020 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals

Loved the part with the tinies inside the sock. More feet/socks/shoes action would be great!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, I shall have some more feet/socks/shoes content in the future

Thanks for the review and for reading, hope you enjoy the future chapters!

Reviewer: waluigixxx Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03 2020 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 Meeting New People

This is such a good story! Really creative and exciting. I'd love to see more feet content, hopefully not from just the chubby girl though since I'm not really into that kinda thing. Please continue this story and thank you a lot.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2020 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 Idols and Teases

Yes! This story is back! Let's go!

Hmm, so Jessica went from the "new kid" to the "popular kid" within minutes. That's crazy. I think she's in a good spot as she tries to fit in with her "friends". 

I really like how slow you are taking Phil's character. His reluctance and shyness is soemthing I like in male characters. In contrast, his roomate Jade is a burst of energy. My goodness, she is a confident girl. Also, I love her flirtaceous jabs at Phil, especially when she implied showering together I assume. 

Ms. Evelyn is amazing as always. I absolutely love her "I don't give a shit" attitude this chapter. I mean, she just used this new guy as if it was nothing. She was even comfortable telling him about how Simon usually pleases her. To me, that tells me that she has experience and knows how to use it. Love how she made him lick her pussy knowing he wouldn't object. Also, she's a teacher, so it's best not to disobey her. ;)

After this chapter, I think I have an idea that suits this story. People pleasuring others for S points. I mean, it's implied, I don't think there's a dynamic yet of 2 normal-sized people being intimate with one pleasuring the other. When Ms Evelyn mentioned Simon, that tells me that Simon pleasures her regularly. I wonder, does she pay him in S points or each session? I'm kinda curious. 

Also, you mentioned how students could get points, but what about teachers? Is it unlimited? Is it a perk for being a teacher? Do they get points for each class taught? Or is it similar to the students system. 

Jeremy's arc is interesting. The whole points malfunction concept is cool. However, I feel like 3 days is plenty of time to get his card fixed. I doubt the head office will be like "sorry, ur fucked" to him and would certainly help him out. 

Also, that cliffhanger made me laugh. Lmao! It felt so random! I mean, a shadowy figure? Is this a horror movie now? That was great. Reminds me of Halloween now. 

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2020 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 Meeting New People

I liked the concept of being a girl's tongue stud/decoration. What an experience that would be. Great descriptions so far of various scenarios! 

Reviewer: bogcjg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2020 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 Welcome to Class

i love the story so far hope you keep it going.

Reviewer: MeGo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2020 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals

The best story I have read recently 😃, but please add more footwear and feet stuff and some disgusting tasks for tiny slsves

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2020 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals

Dude, your work is AMAZING so far! 

I've just been reading "The Lives of Those We Use" as well! You really capture that paradoxically wonderful-yet-horrifying fantasy of people whose lives are stripped away irreparably to simply be used as tiny playthings for others... 

I have a suggestion/request fot Phil and what he does with his tiny girl... I was thinking that maybe he could... Experiment with foot play? (And maybe later, a mixed size romance could bloom? Little more of a stretch, I know)

I'm a big fan of M/f footplay, but there's never enough of it! Some good sources of inspiration for that are RamsusXIII's story "Small Packages" on this site, BubblyJuice's "A Night of Shrunken Intimacy" on deviantart, and even this story here: https://www.coiledfist.org/article.php?story=angel_avonlady01 (except I don't like the violent ending ><) 

Anyways, even if you end up not going in that direction, I'm still a big fan of your work already, and I cannot WAIT to see where you go from here! 

Keep up the great work! ;) 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4 Games and Deals

Wow, lots of stuff happened!

First off, I'm glad you separated each section that relates to each character. Easier to identify them. 

This Tamara person is interesting. It's like Kayla but more careless of her tinies. I mean Kayla has tinies serving her and she keeps them. But Tamara is buying tinies left and right and using them. Also cool that she uses points to bargain with people. Billy may have borrowed points from her, but we know he will shrink inevitably. 

Jessica reminds me of Kelly from your other story. The girl that is not used to tinies, but is trying them out and slowly enjoying them. Her "Ass club roomates" seem to be somewhat popular. I mean, Ali freaked out when she found out. Lol.

Man, Phil is oblivious to this whole world. His roomate Jade is clearing farting on her tiny girl and this guy doesn't get it. I can't wait to see his reaction once he finds out. That's going to be funny. Also, I think it's interesting to see him taking a liking to his tiny. He likes her and I think he is starting to care for her. That's kinda sweet. Not sure it's going to last though. 

Back with Jessica, that shrink game was crazy and creative. I think it's a great way to show Jessica that people don't play by the rules. 

Which is something that the Ben kid was talking about his sister who didn't have street smarts. He wants to protect his sister by shrinking which kinda sounds dumb. I mean, if it works, why not, but I'm pretty sure these siblings could find other ways to succeed in this school. Lol. They saod they were smart, but if this is their best solution, I'm not so sure if they are as smart as they claim. Fortunately for Tamara, she gets a free toy.

Now we get Ms Evelyn. Holy crap, she is amazing! First, she wakes up with a guy licking her pussy all night! Wow, hopefully she gets Tom to do that one day since he is shrunken. Also, thank you again for adding a Tom to this story. I even like his introduction to this story. Dude gets dropped straight into her panties forced to pleasure her pussy all day. Damn, that's hot. Would love to see him pleasure her at night too. Might be hard to do with all the tinies she has. Ms Evelyn has Jill as well so it all seems tricky. Interesting to see her multiple tinies at once. I just love how horny she is! And the fact that she is 35 is the cherry on top. Amazing! 

Great set of chapters and I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Benja999 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Welcome to Class

Awesome concept.. I think its really well thought through!

 

Please keep updating the story. I can't wait to read whats possible with the tinies.

I'm especially excited about the scat tag coming to use. I also like the idea of the tiny 

Inside the tonguepiercing.... are you planning on some giant male action? I would enjoy that!

 

Thank for the awesome story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Glad your enjoying the story!

That tag is still yet to be fully used, but its coming. There is a small content in the latest chapter however. 

And yes! I love the idea of a tongue tiny and I am glad you enjoyed it!

And I am debating it. I know its not everyones cup of tea, but if I get enough reviewers who seem to be ok with it, I am happy to experiment with it. However glad to know your on board!

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the latest chapters!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2 Meeting New People

Wow! Loving the longer chapters. It's cool to see so many perspectives from a variety of characters. 

With Kayla, she's a star student with plenty of tinies. Literally has a tiny serving each part of her. That's crazy!

Then we have Jessica. She now has a tiny and is testing out her new ass slave. 

Likewise, Phil has a new tiny. Between you and me, this is something new compared to all of your stories. A guy with a shrunken girl. Normally, I'd avoid such content, but knowing that you seem to be exploring this idea, I'm also open to it. It also makes me wonder, if I was at this school, what if I had a tiny for myself? Usually I would think about me being the tiny, so it's interesting to flip it. Also, Phil is a great character to take things slow with. He's cool. 

Then we have Ms Oak. She seems cool too. I like how teachers are comfortable discussing their tinies at this school. Adds an extra element of fear to the students. Man, imagine if she showed her butt plug to them. Lol. 

Also, thank you for explaining that star system this chapter. It makes sense now and I could see how it works. I remember in chapter one, that the girls in the "ass slaves" group wanted some 4 star people. So those tinies will cost a lot. Man, it would suck to be acing these classes but you forgot to spend points to avoids getting shrunken, so you end up shrunken. Then with your high price, you hope no one buys you, but if you do, your life is over all for one mistake. That's crazy. 

I saw in your response that you mentioned that another teacher similar to Ms. Eve will show up. Hmm, now I don't mean to be greedy, but will there be a Tom as her slave? Part of me feels guilty for having too many "Toms" in your stories, haha.

Anyway, a great second chapter and I can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks for another great reply!

And because this was a possible test story, I wanted the first chapter to be long to gauge readers on the world and characters. However I found longer chapters work well for the layout I have written. So expect every chapter to have around 1500-2500 words or more. But also that there may be breaks due to the length (not always next day, but I will try).

And Kayla is one of the top students. You will see more students like this, they have enough points to basically treat them however they want. She sees hers as lucky charms so they serve her relentlessly. 

And yes! Jessica is slowly joining the Ass Slaves with her own, her arc will explore her basically diving in the deep in with this life.

Phil is an intresting case. I like the idea of a male having a female tiny and have various ideas on how to write about it, but I am unsure how people will react as (iirc) it will be the only M/f content I have written. And like you, its not normally my cup of tea, but the ideas are there. So I will take it slow with him, and see where it and the audience lead it to be. Since Phil is slow on the intake, his experience will be slow and so any content in that catergory is quite far off (for now, unless demand brings it forward)

Ms Oak was my way of showing how (some) of the teachers behave and act around tinies but also explain the star system. I have several drafts where the 'example' tiny was the Butt Plug one, but decided against it since it was the first day for everyone and it felt too fast, too soon.

And yes! Glad you understand it. I felt having everyone be the same price and status when shrunk was too plain and having a system means you have avenues to explore different stories and themes. Its an intresting dynamic I thought of in my original idea and I am glad it came out well in the explanation (which is why i left it for the second chapter to avoid to much information in the first and overwhelming the reader)

And 100% there will and don't feel guilty, your constant reviews give me critical and important insight to all my stories. Its the least I can do is insert a Tom into them. I cannot always gaurantee they wil have a big storyline or impact. But I am always happy to have a Tom in my stories with elements that you enjoy happen to him!

Thanks again for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter (when I finish it) and future chapters.


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 Welcome to Class

Whoa! Another story?! Man, you've been pumping these out fast!

For me, I like all of your stories since they all fall into the same ballpark that I enjoy. Of course, there's certain stuff I like more than others, but for the main themes, I tend to enjoy them regardless of the specifics. 

I'm still hoping that Ms. Eve story continues. Still want to see Tom shrink in that story.

As for this story, I like the premise! I think the student ranking system is a little confusing though. What's the difference between 0 stars and 4 star students? 0 students are cheaper, but I don't know why. 

Another thing for this story is that if there is a sexy teacher that likes to use a shrunken guy as a sex toy, I will be into that like crazy! ;)

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

And yeah haha, I hit a slump with Lives we Use, I have a half written chapter but keep re-writing it. Then this idea hit me and I had to write it down, which is why its so long, I kept pumping ideas. 

And glad we have similar intrestes in the themes we enjoy. And I know you enjoy some themes more then others, this new story is split between different characters, so many themes get used without runining other character stories or alienating people (hopefully) 

And Ms Eve is still on my todo list, the next chapter is 25% done. I make it a habit not to rush chapters anymore as I get burnout much faster. 

And glad your enjoying the story. Chapter 2 explains the STAR system, but basically it allows me flexibility in writing the tinies. Since higher star students are more prestige while 0 star are common folk who are bad at classes and get shrunk all the time. Also allows students to spend more S Points for more reasons.

I have added a teacher in Chapter 2, BUT, one that you enjoy is a teacher I plan to write, a sort of 'homage' to Ms Eve. 

Glad you enjoyed it and hope you enjoy the latest chapter and all the future ones!

Thanks again for all the reviews! They are great and keep me writing!

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Welcome to Class

Great story love the concept Look forward to see where you take it lots of great ways for this to go



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Glad you enjoyed the first chapter! I hope you enjoy the newest one and the rest of the story!

Thanks again for the review!

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