Date: December 30 2021 3:07 PM Title: A Game with Taylor
Okay, so I think this story is decent enough, but where is it going? Is it just slight variations of this till the end or is there gonna be a mix up. Because I feel like, even though all of these chapters have been pretty decent, they feel like slight variations of the same concept. The uncaring/slightly cruel shtick gets kind of stale after a while. Like are the volleyball players still mad that he missed their game? I just wished there would be a shift in the dynamic, or that it was building to something.
Author's Response:
"Where is it going?" What a comment to make on the penultimate chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2021 10:43 AM Title: A Game with Taylor
Oh my god it’s a story by you!
It’s so nice. Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Yes, I finally found a bit of time to write! I'm using it to wrap up a big open end so I can get started on something else.
Date: December 30 2021 2:13 AM Title: A Game with Taylor
I think maybe it's a glitch but half the page is blank
Author's Response:
Thanks for the info! Don't know what happened with the upload, but it's fixed now.