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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2021 10:21 PM Title: A Dance with Taylor

I hate dancing so much. If I was him I would run. All those other things, the shrinking, the massive feet all normal. Some threats here and there, all normal. But dancing no. This goes to far.

Thank you for writing this unusually long chapter for us and see you next time!



Author's Response:

Didn't you see what happened when he tried to run?  There's no escape for him or anyone in this.  There's only dancing.

And thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2021 4:54 AM Title: A Dance with Taylor

Another great chapter :D. The way Taylor tried dancing with him was sexy. The little.guy should have jumped up on her ass when he had the chance ;). I think Taylor has a crush on the little guy shes just playing hard to get.



Author's Response:

He should have, but it was just out of reach. ;) Are you sure it's Taylor who has a crush on him?  Rebecca seems a lot more into him.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2021 3:40 AM Title: A Dance with Taylor

Great story so far, love the interaction between him and the girls, how close he was to getting crushed and eaten was great.  kinda makes you feel sorry for the little guy which is rare for story's on here, look forward to more :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  If it helps you feel better about him, he could've avoided this thing by just going to their volleyball game to start.

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