Reviewer: Jessica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2020 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 18: Apex

Hi there! So first off, this story was absolutely fantastic and I really enjoyed reading it. I am not normally one for growth stories, so this type of thing was well outside of my strike zone. That said, I still had a wonderful time and enjoyed reading every word. I am a hopeless romantic and so seeing the dynamics between Aoi and Yoshimi were absolutely lovely, and really the heart of the story for me. I found myself very compelled in them and their trials, and to see where the story would take them.

In terms of content, I definitely thought there was a nice smattering of a little bit of everything. Some of the slime aspects were definitely a bit to get used to, but I don't think that's a bad thing. It was a unique experience. Thank you again so much for writing it!

-Jess

Author's Response:

Hello Jess thanks for reading my story and sharing your thoughts!

I'm happy you enjoyed the romance content. It was very fun to write! It's some of my most loved content as well.

When I first started writing this, couples stuff wasn't planned actually. Very early on, though, I realized it'd both make sense and have the potential to be fun. I'm happy it seems to have worked out!