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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

I stopped reading your ogre story at a certain point (you could say it was working as intended), so this ending was as welcome as it was unexpected :D



Author's Response: Yeah, the ogre one is pretty different. Still, thanks for reading and dropping a review here!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

I loved the conclusion to this story 

 

I like that he returned to normal but there relationship remained, she deserves to be happy 

 

Please tell me you're considering a sequel following Hiro!!



Author's Response: Sorry, no plans for a sequel at this juncture. I am glad you liked it though. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2020 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Another fantastic chapter! Derek is lucky to be able to spend so much time in Leanne's ass!



Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! Glad you're still liking it.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2020 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

All I can say is, "Wow!".

One of then best stories, ever...

 



Author's Response: Aw thanks! One chapter left to go

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

Another terrific chapter! The way you describe Derek interacting with her giant pussy is fantastic!!!



Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like the last two as much as the first four.

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2020 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome! I wish I was Derek! Looking forward to your next installment. 



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Cuchulain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2020 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Maybe my favorite story to date after making a man out of him. My kind of GTS. After first chapter Inwas like where can this go and it kept getting better. Making videos was genius. 



Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Really glad you're liking it.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2020 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Best chapter yet. Loving the dildo part. Fingers crossed by chapter 5 she has her technique down enough to use his entire body as her Billdo.



Author's Response: Thanks! I don't want to give away any spoilers, though. You'll see chapter 5 next week. ;)

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2020 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

I just thought if Derek got a little smaller he could climb and cuddle between her pussy hairs or slide between her soft bacon folds.



Author's Response: Okay. Taking a nap in a carpet of soft pubic hair is kind of hot, I'll admit.

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2020 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

Another nice chapter. But maybe Derek could shrink to another 3 inches and stay that way forever?



Author's Response: That's something I don’t really understand, I'm afraid. Six inches, well that's a human dildo. Three inches... what kind of fun could the giantess have with that?

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2020 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter! I love how Derek is working out in her ass!! Love how domestic and comfortable these two are with each other now. Great work!



Author's Response: Thanks! If I was a tiny, that's probably where I'd be too, lol.

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2020 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome descriptions! Looking forward to seeing the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2020 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love all the workout scenarios, very creative and sexy. I'd say my favorite was when she told him to hold still after the boxing rounds and sat down impaling herself with him, as well as when she put him on the pillow - really how dominant she got that time. I'm hoping this'll escalate in that direction to where it becomes so one-sided she gets in the habit of just ramming him in and out of herself, or standing him upright and hopping up and down on him like a cheap dildo.



Author's Response: Thanks. I wouldn’t hold your breath on Leanne treating Derek too one-sidedly, sorry. This is kind of a love story.

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2020 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hope my review didn't upset you.



Author's Response: Of course not! I just missed it, sorry about that. I cover a lot of bases in this story, there'll be more butt stuff. Promise.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Another fantastic entry! I was initially disappointed by the seemingly small amount of planned chapters, however, the stellar quality of your work and the sheer amount of content per chapter more than makes up for it. As always, I'm very excited to see what comes next, especially now that Derek and Leanne are officially a couple. Keep it coming man!



Author's Response: Aw thanks! Glad you're liking it.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

At times it's weird that he isn't annoyed by basically anything; that being said, wow!



Author's Response: Well, there might be some extraneous factors influencing him there. Magic.

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Love some BBW love! Hoping for more fun in her butt!



Author's Response: Thanks. 😊

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think the two go very well together, i hope little Derek can cuddle her soft stomach a lot.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

Another amazing update. Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2020 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic first chapter! I love the chemistry between the two protagonists. I'm excited to see their relationship develop. I'm also definitely hoping that this story isn't a short one, because I need way more of this story in my life. Keep up the great work, man!



Author's Response: It's 6 parts, about 6k words per part. Not a novel, but not an unfinished short, either. Thanks for the kind words.

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