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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2020 7:00 AM Title: One Last Dance

Whoa! That morning scene was incredible! I did not expect that from Anna at all. This was soemthing Sarah would do, I mean wow, that was hot. I guess Anna maybe learned that from Sarah or soemthing, like damn, lucky Matt.

Hmm, is this like the 3rd speech in a row now? I get that they are trying to start this giantess/tiny union campaign, but these announcements sometimes make me facepalm. Lol. I mean, Anna using her boobs as a threat doesn't really seem like a threat when Matt is giving a thumbs up as if it's an advertisement for giant boobs, haha. Now I'm expecting a lot of shenanigans happening so little guys will line up to be toyed with by Anna.

What a tease! We just get a glimpse of Sarah at the end, and I'm wondering what happened to that little guy in her panties a few chapters back? You mentioned that he was still there, but I can't tell if this is the sam guy we see in this chapter. For some reason, this guy seems new as if the police just paired Sarah up with this guy. It's great to see more of Sarah despite her disappearance. 

Also, will there be scenes with Officer Rebecca? I mean, you sold me on that character with just a few sentences. I'm curious to see what she does with Josh. That dynamic should be fun. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Well, Anna and Sarah had been influencing each other since they met, so it's not susprising that they have a few similarities.

Wow, I didn't even notice I wrote that many speech scenes. I guess that's the nature of politics. Also, in this world, I think most guys are not as eager to be toyed by giant girls.

Yes, the little guy is there, and yes, that is a new guy. Everything should make sense, someday.

Although she's a minor character, I'm glad Rebecca has intrigued you. Maybe she will appear in the future?

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