[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
Great story. Maybe for a spin-off/sequel you could have Goddess Saki eons later after remaking and ruling the Universe. There Saki could reanimate Earth and string Erica along to think she succeeded in her plans. Now ready to expand beyond Earth, only to later be in for a big surprise.
Look forward to reading more of your work regardless if you do a squeal or not. Thanks
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for your review!
That's an interesting idea and I'll keep it in mind. I don't typically think of doing sequels, but we can see what the future holds!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
Friend of mine forwarded this to me and said this was the most Books story he'd read in terms of taste, moreso than the stuff I myself write so was enough to pique my curiosity. I can safely say he was correct, this is indeed very much in line with my tastes.
I'm quite impressed with the creative use of nanomachines as well as it honestly being less of a size story and more a power fantasy with size inside of it. The size is an aspect of the powers sure but its not so much the ultimate ability. That in itself is quite lewd in the context that this other being is on another level of evolution from the beings around them. Not a lot of things I read capture that which is quite nice. You've also jump started me into writing something in an attempt to capture a similar feeling, haven't had another story do that so that alone I think is great.
Heartily recommend to those reading reviews if you enjoy the above as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading my story and sharing your thoughts!
I've read a few of your stories: all great!
Your kind words are very appreciated, and yes, I was definitely going for a power focus. Size is kind of a very obvious form of it, but I tried to have Saki explore more aspects than just her bigness. I'm happy that seemed to work out!
Very pleased to hear you will be writing something with a similar feel. Thanks again!
Date: September 08 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
I loved this story. The twist in the first chapter had me hooked throughout, and the ascendence to Godhood is so well done. I love that she still kept her personality throughout
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your comment! I am delighted to hear the twist is well received, and that her personality seemed consistent. I'm especially pleased you enjoyed the first chapter, as I thought a slower buildup to the size content than in my other works might cause some to lose interest. So, thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2020 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
A really really really sadistic and destruction filled size story, it litterally has most of my unknown fetishes here. It's also really entertaining if you just want to go read a size fetish story without outlandishly plot, this one is really straightforward. And I adore it for that
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment! I wanted to make sure all the nanite-related things were understood, so I stayed away from anything too complicated plot wise.