[Report This]Date: September 03 2020 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Experience
Just read all 27 chapters.
Wow, what a story. I think my favorite duo is the Gemma/Lucy combo. Lucy is easily my favorite character. Her confidence is oozing sexy and I love how she has many tiny toys to play with.
Love how her panty pet was Tom. I actually laughed so hard when Gemma saw Tom for the first time, I was practically choking with glee.
The people with super powers kinda feel like infamous celebrities. Like it seems that most people know about them, but don’t gloss over them like usual celebrities.
Interring to see how Lucy treats her fans like slaves. Also interesting that people she likes, becomes her lovers such as Gemma. It’s kinda cool to see Gemma blossom into a more dominant character. She was so shy and naive in the beginning, but lately, she has been in control for a while, much to the dismay of the tinies around her.
I really like the beginning of William’s story. The whole “dude has nothing, but ends up with a rich girl” is one of my favorite themes, and it’s cool to see your twist to it.
I really liked how desperate he was and how he even has to sacrifice his camera just to pay rent. I was kinda hoping for a humbling moment from the girls so they could appreciate their wealth as they hear William’s struggles. However, they kinda shrug it off and welcome him to richness which I guess means they don’t want to even think about being poor.
For the contract thing, I’m not even sure if it’s needed. I feel like the fear of exposing a person with powers would just have the powered person hunt and destroy them later on. I think the contract is more of a scare tactic since there seems to be no punishment from someone breaking that contract. It’s the trust of the super powered person that you gotta be aware of.
Cindy is a really fun girl. She is kinda like the teasing girlfriend that is like your female friend at first that messes with you, but you’re not sure she’s flirting but eventually you get together and it works out since you don’t have to guess if they are flirting or not. Also, she likes video games, so that’s a bonus.
Jessica in the beginning was really interesting. She kinda gives William an orientation of living rich and was the one that introduced him to her powers as well as her sister. She even changed that one guy into socks which was cool, but we never got to see more of that.
Is Tom one of Lucy’s cousins? I’m not sure if I read that right. Also, is he still in that cage as Gemma’s earring? Would love to see him back against Lucy’s pussy again, but that’s ok. Haha.
I gotta agree with Gemma on that bank scene. 50+ innocent people taken is way too much. It was hot to see them used as toys, but still, Gemma even made the point that it was simply bad timing for those other people.
(Also, do people have cell phones in this universe? Because I feel like at least 1 person in that group of 50+ people could have made a vid and uploaded it before Lucy walked to touch all 50 of them. Lol).
Anyway, I think those are the main points that I’ve wanted to mention throughout this story.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! Especially all 27 in such a small time, it means alot to me!
Glad you enjoyed your little cameo and you should expect him to appear again soon, he is a core part of Lucy's 'costume'.
And it depends on how popular they are, some heroes are better or more well known then others.
Lucy is a pure bloodied dominatrix, she loves being in control and dominating people. However she is the worst kind of dominatrix and uses people against there will, they are 'effectively' her slaves. She takes a liking to Gemma as she sees this darkness inside her that is like her own and is 'grooming' her in a way to be as nasty as she is.
I enjoyed writing Will as this hopeless, poor individual. Especially since he runs into Jessica, the complete opposite.
The girls don't really understand how 'poor' he was and I felt 'cliche' to write anything around that. But I do add hints of them going 'wow, this is so normal for us but rare for you' from time to time.
The contracts are more a government/safety thing. Heroes started breaking rules, but the government needs to make them happy as the poeple love them. So they made these contracts that give heroes almost immunity as long as they follow strict guidelines. It allows me to go as rough as I need without people going 'wait! Thats illegal'. As for punishment for breaking a contract, nobody has broken one in a bad way or publicly, so there has not been a 'punishment' yet, but there is one if somebody does break the rules and will appear at one point in the future. Having Heroes hunt people is why they exist, technically in situations, they can. Thats what the bank situation was, just in a twisted way because nobody was given the chance to actually not talk.
I love writing Cindy, she is this ball of energy who takes the world like a game, while still having a serious side and secret side.
Jessica was a character I wish I could have done more with, but I found both her powers were limiting in terms of constant creative stories (for me at least) and there was this kinda of dark side where she could not be quite sadistic as Lucy, but finding a reason to transform people became hard. But there will be times in the future she uses her powers still. Its just slowed down to allow any ideas to be fleshed out.
No, Tom in a latest chapter. He is Lucy's personal panty pet, like her boot and bra companions. That dialouge was Gemma mis-remembering what Bondes cousin was called. He is currently being worn as an earring by Gemma, as seen in the next upcoming chapter! (While Tom is currently in Lucy's panties). Because Lucy was not in costume alot and messing with Gemma, Tom has unseen for some chapters. But he is back!
The bank scene was a bit twisted and a bit far, but I wanted to show how far Lucy had turned and have a moral dilemma for Gemma. I am curious however what people thought of that scene, glad to see some input. I won't make another one anytime soon (or ever), it was more just to show her insane dark side.
And yes they do, when the alarm does off in the bank, it blocks all transmissions. This does impact people inside but is more to stop the robbers from communicating (it also blocks radios). The exception is Lucy who had access to the banks network due to being a hero. Its why I choose a bank, so I could have convoluted ways to avoid the people being discovered and they could get away with the shrinking of them.
And thanks again for reading! I always love your reviews and I hope to see more in the future as chapters are released. Also feel free to ask as many questions as you can, I do enjoy answering them and they fill in gaps I fail to address in the chapters or could not fit in.
Thanks and hope to hear from you soon!