Date: August 29 2020 10:34 PM Title: Derek and Emily 1
You are doing like , the game Detroit : become human .
But could you return to the main characters from time to time.
Author's Response:
How so? In that I'm presenting a dystopian world with a great inequality, and switching between characters to advance the narrative? (Though you could also compare that to Maniac Mansion: Day of the Tentacle...)
But anyway, my current plan is to do a brief bit with every character before returning to write second chapters with any of them.
Date: August 25 2020 5:05 PM Title: Derek and Emily 1
Great start!! Can't wait for more 🤗👏
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it, thanks! More coming soon
Date: August 24 2020 3:05 PM Title: Derek and Emily 1
It's beautiful 😢😢😢😭😭😭
Author's Response:
Yo, thanks 
[Report This]Date: August 24 2020 6:32 AM Title: Derek and Emily 1
Why must you hurt me this way?
Author's Response:
I couldn't show Derek breaking safety regulations and leave him unscathed, could I?
BTW, check out your story's reviews, I'm gonna give some suggestions.