Reviews For My Shrunken Chance
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Reviewer: Bashou Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2021 8:44 PM Title: A Deep Dive

Yesss !!! Exactly the outcome i wanted , a microscopic Jesse finally heading into Alexis' shoes where he belongs ^^^ 

I presume when he will touch the insole, he might be so small that he's gonna struggle to not drown into the endless ocean-like wet insoles awesome !! 

He still has a chance though because if Sam is clever enough, she may want to look into Alexis's boots and at that point, she may bring Tabatha in to seek Jesse. If that is not the case , Jesse will likely to be in BIG trouble. 

If I may ask , Do you know what are Alexis's boots look like ? Are they knee-high or ankle-high boots ? 

Honestly, i didn't expect you to come back so soon , amazing story anyway , i hope you're gonna keep a pace of less than a month if you can even though you don't have much free time.



Author's Response:

I tried my best with getting this one out as soon as I could and I succeded! In the next chapter (whenever that is) I want to have two storylines going on at the same time that will converge near the end. Jesse's struggles to get found as well as Cloe's intentions to toy with the tiny Tabatha who is searching for Jesse in all the wrong places. 

As for Alexis' boots, think of them like Doc Martin style boots that are high heeled, black and ankle high boots. Either way, Jesse won't have any fun hanging around them. Or should I say in them?

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