Reviews For The Experiment
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 6:18 PM Title: Natalie's Second Identity

The sudden change in her personality was unexpected and I didn't think it would happen. It seems out of character after what has gone on in the previous chapters.

Reviewer: Right Wing Attack Dog Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2008 7:03 PM Title: Natalie's Second Identity

interesting. hope you continue this.

Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2008 9:58 PM Title: Natalie's Second Identity

You have all the time you need in the world. Use Microsoft Word to write the story, save when you're finished and come back to it later to extend it. That way, you can make a chapter longer. Time can't always be an excuse. People won't mind if it takes a week for a new chapter to form. We can wait (Well I can. Dwarf Fortress!) 

Keep up the good work and remember, those making bad reviews are trying to help you (or they're disturbed) and those are making good reviews are also trying to help you (or they're disturbed)

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