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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 6:10 PM Title: The Tests

When Natalie speaks you're often forgetting speech marks, and here:

She then proceded, to my protests

I think the wording is awkward. Perhaps you should say "ignoring my protests".

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