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Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2020 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

I really liked it.  Would like to see John's POV but this is nice.  I wonder if the virus changed Allison or this was always part of her peronality?  Interesting to see how John will react expecially now that Allison REALLY cares about what he thinks and how he feels now.  The only thing I can find wrong are discriptions like Allison's height, hair color bust size.  It is hard to visualize all the characters not just Allison but other than that, the story is amazing.  Whish you would continue it soon but I get it if you need a break.  Please let me know what you think.



Author's Response:

yeah, i was conflicted about putting in too much description about what they look like. My thought was that if I kept it vague, people could imagine what they want. In future stories Ill add more detail. 

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