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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2023 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just read up to the point of Adam's voring (I'll finish the rest later). Great story, erotic and fun. Some very fun and creative dialogue and I love the alternating POV between Adam and Kate. I like the shrink patch idea as well.

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 19 2020 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Omg!/!!
That would have to be the best story I've read on this site for a long long time indeed!
Your writing stile is creative... and absolutely captivating to say the least.
As a totally blind reader myself... I'm often hard to please in stories which spend little time describing the essence and nuance of every moment, as you did so well.
Care to put my number in Kat's phone if you should see it in her gym bag someday?
Loved this offering very much.
Glad I found it here. :)
Even reading on my refreshable braille display... was a good flowing story.
Just one point if I may?
Perhaps a few less … Characters in some places may be something to think about.
Although I do understand why you used them none the less.
I do the same thing when I'm writing too. :)
Good job!

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