Date: August 13 2021 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 29: A Little Fight for Survival
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As a sucker for good endings, I agree that this is a better direction to take the story, at least with how these characters were set up from the beginning. There are other instances where stuff like your original ending could've fit, but as you saw yourself, people didn't feel Nick deserved that, lol.
In any case, still looking forward to the next chapter. As for Babysitter Trouble, I know you already have a giantess Shannon alt ending planned but, have you considered one where she keeps Chris as she originally planned? I'll admit I just want to see more of her big butt and farts, but , hey, it was worth a shot lol.
On an unrelated note, I made a Discord server, it's a place to chill and talk, but also to have some writing discussion (centered around my own works but it's far from being the dominant topic), a bunch of fellow writers from writing.com and giantessworld have joined there. I'd be honored if you joined but no pressure, the link won't expire: https://discord.gg/5VzDmnux7q
Author's Response:
Yes, on the whole, I DO think this ending feels like a better fit; I just hope that my readers don’t give me the third degree on how similar it is to the ending of my last novel.
As far as Babysitter Trouble goes, I think the alternate ending is going to be the last alternate chapter I’m going to do for it, but don’t worry, there’ll still be lots of good stuff for everyone.
I’ll certainly have to check out your discord server soon, but for now, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2021 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29: A Little Fight for Survival
Wow...I can't believe she shrank too! Looks like Cassie's story is going to end like Shannon's from Babysitter Trouble. (Well at least until the alternate ending with giantess Shannon is released) Love the plot twist, and I can't wait to read more! Hope Cassie likes being a toy!
Author's Response:
Well, I hadn’t initially intended for the story to turn out the way it did, nor for it to turn out exactly like the end of “Babysitter Trouble”, but so many readers disliked my original ending (and in all honesty, for good reason) and wanted Cassie to get some kind of comeuppance, and I really wasn’t sure how to do it. In the end, the story kept pushing me in this direction: it needed some kind of excitement towards the end; otherwise, it would’ve seemed anticlimactic. I also know that some of the ending chapters displayed a major change in Cassie’s character, but in all reality, she was already showing herself to be insensitive towards Nick’s condition, and with how crazy he was making her, it isn’t exactly a huge leap for her to end up cracking under the pressure.
All in all, I’m sure the perfect ending is out there somewhere, but given all the hard work and extra energy I’ve put into this story, I think the ending I’ve written suits the direction I took the story.