Date: November 16 2020 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Little Strained
Yikes! I hope tiny Nick is small enough that, when Cassie's huge foot hits the ground, he finds himself safe in the space between her toes! Otherwise I'm not sure he will make it! I can't wait to read more, and I'm still looking forward to the Babysitter Trouble giantess chapter! Great work as always!
Author's Response:
Well, I’m glad you’re still reading and enjoying the story, and I think you’ll like what becomes of Nick in the next chapter.
I still haven’t finished the outline for the alternate ending of Babysitter Trouble yet, but it’s one of several small projects I’d like to complete before starting on any of the bigger projects I have lined up.
Date: November 15 2020 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Little Strained
Still really enjoying this story! The fact that Cassie brought up Nick being small while they were having sex makes it seem like she does actually enjoy him being tiny and might be having some second thoughts about banning him from doing it. Maybe she's conflicted between her lust for using him as a toy versus her desire to keep him safe. This internal conflict might be why she was acting that way towards Nick for the first half of the chapter.
Then again, I also can't help but wonder if she's plotting something with how sudden of a shift she had in her personality towards the end of the chapter. Maybe she's been reading Nick's book in her free time?
Looks like we're about to find out how durable Nick is if the end of the chapter is any indication. I can't help but wonder if Cassie will believe that Nick didn't shrink himself on purpose and how she'll react to him being shrunk again.
Can't wait to see how things play out from here to the rest of the story and whether or not we'll see a happy ending.
Author's Response:
Cassie does still love Nick, conditionality anyway, and she does still care about him, but the stress of having to worry about accidentally squashing him by something as simple as walking around their apartment obviously has her on edge....and she’s quickly approaching the breaking point.
Date: November 14 2020 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Little Strained
*sighs*
Cassie's cluelessness is really tiring now. How she doesn't think to check on Nick, after everything that's happened. Even if she 'thought' she might have heard something, after everything she should have taken more precaution and thought "Nope, gonna check just in case"
And her moments with Nick in this chapter (when they're having sex) was a bit of a relief, but as you yourself said, her feelings for Nick seem to be subjbective as long as he's following what she wants. As long as Nick is doing things the way she wants, everything is fine.
But if not, she's a moody intollerant bitch who treats him like a bug, or sub-human, "no no Nick, don't explain yourself, don't tell me your genuine fear and the fact you can't fucking control the shrinking, I don't want to hear it cause I'm not happy with you" - Cassie
Why not put up some camera's or some sort of system to allert her when he shrinks, you would think after almost dying multiple times that Nick would say "Yep, I need to put some cameras up" or some sort of alarm system.
*sighs* with all that being said, I am looking forward to the next chapter, you write the tiny scenes so hot, and I love Cassie's body and interacting with her feet and massive form (though at the same time, Cassie's aloofness and ignorance, and bitchy attitude pisses me off)
It's conflicting XD
Author's Response:
Well, if nothing else, I’ve certainly invoked an emotional response from you concerning the characters. You empathize with Nick, and you regret Cassie, which is what I was going for, so I guess I’ve done a good job writing this story. She’s ignorant of her own faults, and ignorant of Nick’s situation when he’s shrunk, which you picked up on, so congrats.
In any case, thanks for your input.