Date: October 29 2020 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 12: A Little Laundry
Great story. I love how Nick has a hard time controling his shrinking. Cassie reaction is pretty understandable from her point. Nick just keeps shrinking and she thinks that if she gets rid of the book that will fix the problem. it will be interesting to see if he gets bigger again. if he does, will he ever explain to her that he is doing subconsciously? will he shrink again and have to hide. does he have to hide on her body or clothes to find a way to get back. does she find him and squish him? I hope it is with her boobs or pussy, even if it is unaware. Or does she accept that he can't control it. does she let him live with her or on her? Does she make his life horrible for being that small until he can bring his shrinking under control.
There are so many options. it will be great to see what you write.
Author's Response:
Yes, there are a lot of great options. I’ve pretty much worked out where I want the story to go from here, but you’ve certainly offered some good suggestions.
Date: October 29 2020 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 12: A Little Laundry
Nick, just leave this bitch!!
Seriosuly Cassie has lost all sympathy for me .
Will she ever get help?! Like she needs therapy, they both do.
She's not listening to his side of the story, and is moving into territories of abuse (she's knowingly forcing him to do what she wants, and abusing him physically if he doesn't)
Is this couple supposed to have a happy ending, or not??
I kind of want Cassie to have a huge epiphany moment of how she's treated him, and actually believe's Nick's story, just to see the emotional strain and toll it'll put on this bitch.
Sorry if I seem like I'm bitter, but her character (as it stands now) is fucking horrible to Nick.
Author's Response:
It’s perfectly fine that you’re not a fan of Cassie, and it’s true that she doesn’t listen to Nick. She’s ignorant of his situation, even when she knows he’s small. The strain on their marriage is definitely reaching the breaking point, and it’ll take more than councilling to keep them together.
To be honest with you, your dislike of Cassie is kind of the point. She is supposed to be demonstrating conditional love, and that it’s really not healthy in a marriage. I’m actually really glad that you picked up on it, and feel sympathy for Nick for having to put up with it.