Date: October 21 2020 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Little More Exercise
Another awesome chapter! I've really enjoyed the sweaty workout theme, to me it just takes the unaware side of things to a new level and adds a new layer of tortue to Nick's ordeal. Can't wait to see where things go from here now that it seems like Cassie is going to be expecting Nick to come home.
I'll echo what another user said and say that I'm also looking forward to seeing you explore how Nick's shrinking is putting a strain on their relationship. I mean regardless of whether or not Nick is in control of his shrinking at this point, Cassie made it clear that she was done with it, so it'll be interesting to see how she reacts to Nick being tiny again, especially if he has trouble returning to normal (or can't).
Author's Response:
As always, I’m glad you enjoyed it. As I said in a previous response to a review, there is definitely a strain on Nick and Cassie’s relationship, and you’ll see just how much of a strain in the next chapter....that is, assuming Nick survives.
Date: October 20 2020 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Little More Exercise
Some very hot content here, I love giantess's working out and getting nice and sweaty.
You'd think Cassie would be have more sense at this point to not dismiss every 'bug'
She consider "Oh wait, it could be Nick, he might have accidentally shrunk again, Hmm Maybe I should check and not do something I'll later regret"
Seriously at this point I think they should either break up, or get some professional help or councelling.
Author's Response:
I was hoping people would like the workout scene. I wasn’t expecting it to go so long, but there were so many things I wanted Nick to go through, that it literally would’ve been a HUGE chapter, so I split it up to make it more digestible.
It’s true that Cassie should be more careful, especially after promising Nick she’d always look for him, but it’s the fact that she is pretty ignorant in that respect that reflects her personality. It seems her love for Nick is proving to be conditional on him obeying her and staying big; but, as his wife, she should love him unconditionally, especially when he gets himself into trouble and needs it the most. He’s trying to keep his promise, but ends up breaking it when he accidentally shrinks himself, and she breaks her promise by not staying aware of him when he’s absent, and these are the times that we see that Cassie’s love and sympathy for him tend to disappear, in her ignorance and her apathy when she finds him. Don’t get me wrong, she’s not cruel, she just can’t seem to love Nick when he’s small.
You’re not wrong in thinking that Nick’s shrinking is definitely putting some strain on their marriage, and you’ll see just how that manifests in the chapters ahead.
Date: October 20 2020 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Little More Exercise
I'm generally less a fan of unaware, but your writing is excellent as always! The workout scene was great...maybe bath time? Would be fun for him!
Also still looking forward to the final chapter of Babysitter Trouble. Not sure if you've been able to do the outline, but I can't wait!
Keep on writing as you are one of the best!
Author's Response:
I know the “unaware” trope isn’t for everyone, but it’s my absolute favorite genre, so expect to see it at least a small amount in MOST, if not ALL of my stories. That doesn’t mean, however, that it’ll be he main focus every time, as I have several stories lined up where that isn’t the case.
If I didn’t say so before, I, unfortunately, won’t be able to add a bath scene to this story (as much as I want to), partly due to the fact that the rest of the story has basically been planned out, but mainly because I’ve already had two shower scenes. BUT, per your suggestion, I DO have two bath scenes thought out for two of my other stories: one gentle and aware, and the other unaware, then discovered, so thanks for that.
As far as Babysitter Trouble, I have worked on the outline of and on for the past few months, but I’ve been mainly focusing on THIS story for the time being. I do, however, have some small one-off stories that I’d like to get finished and posted before I start another large project, and the giantess chapter of Babysitter Trouble is one of them. It’s going to be one BIG chapter, though, so there’s a lot of work that I need to put into it.
Thanks for your support and continued readership!