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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2020 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Little Bedroom Trouble

Still thinking Cassie is being way too bitchy to Nick 

 

But am excited to see what happens in the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Well, the stress of the situation is getting to her, and it may be only a matter of time before she cracks...

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2020 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Little Bedroom Trouble

1/4 is actually a bit too large for my fantasies especially if it is unaware. if youre 1/4 I kinda cant see it would work being unaware, especially if the girls opens her arse and looks into a mirror. thats why for me it is really important to think about these scales, and just bring out a meassurement scale and look at how large 1/4 for example are and then think if that would work or not, and in my oppinion 1/4 is way too large for a good unware plot. it becomes logic from sizes around 1/16 or smaller. I saw you mentioned the word yoga in this chapter, I have to say I dont enjoy work out plots, especially not yoga or treatmill plots at all, that is way too cliche for my taste. so I mostly wont enjoy the next chapter sadly I think. but I still seceretly hope for maybe I will.



Author's Response:

Well, I appreciate your input on the unaware scenarios. It’s definitely some food for thought. 

 I know that certain parts of the story aren’t for everyone, but I try to give everyone a little bit of something.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Little Bedroom Trouble

really enjoyed the last part of this chapter. how small did he become? I would love if he actually maybs shrinks even more to way smaller than ant size just becoming kinda a dust particle in her ass.



Author's Response:

Right now, Nick is about 1/4 inch tall, and that’s probably all the smaller he’ll get right now, but that doesn’t mean you won’t enjoy what comes next. Just wait until Cassie starts her workout!

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