Date: September 01 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: A Little Lazy Day Weekend
And now we’ve come full circle to chapter 1!
I love that Cassie and Nick are both able to enjoy normal-sized fun with each other, and you write it really well!
Cassie once again shows herself to be a MASTER of teasing!
Finally, I really liked how you were able to create a sense of danger without the couple’s interaction resulting in injury or death.
(And I almost wish those final moments had been a little more drawn out! I ADORE when I giantess bathes her little man!)
Author's Response:
I’m glad could include some normal-sized interactions in this story. I’ve always thought about dabbling at writing a romance novel, but wasn’t sure I could get the scenarios and character temperaments right, so thanks for the feedback.
This chapter was meant to be a learning experience for both characters, but mostly Nick. I wanted him to realize just how dangerous being small can be, and for you to get a glimpse of Cassie’s nature of forgetting herself around him.
I thought about extending the sink/bathing scene, but the chapter was already running kinda long.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2: A Little Lazy Day Weekend
I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the personality you've created for Cassie. She makes me think of what my wife would probably be like in a situation like this...gentle but prone to getting carried away and careless if she's in the right mood and turned on enough. Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Well, I wanted to Cassie to have a sweet, yet playful nature, while still remaining realistic; in actuality, she’s based on two real people. I know sometimes people like the playful giantess type, but I also wanted to detail what can happen when they accidentally become a little too playful—So, sort of a mix between the aware and unaware scenarios.
Thanks for the review! Keep checking back for more updates.