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Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2023 12:36 PM Title: Forward

This story is amazing. Your writing really seems to cater to my interests. I love the balance of aware and unaware interaction. Cassie's personality going from caring to indifferent to cruel had me on a roller-coaster. I had to resist reading all the chapters in minutes. My only criticism is how quickly he gave into Jenny. The revenge chapters at the end were superb, the humilation in the toilet was perfect. You have easily become a favorite author. I appreciate you being active. Keep it up

Author's Response:

Well, I really try to work to ensure my stories are of the highest quality possible. I had a lot of comments about Cassie’s personality over the course of posting chapters, and had to make some changes towards the end. Jenny ended up being a late inclusion, but if I had it to do over again, I would’ve introduced her back towards the beginning of the story. I think that would’ve made the chemistry between her and Nick feel like it developed more naturally.

Overall, while I had some faults and bumps along the way, I’m happy with how the finished product turned out, so I’m glad you liked it.

Thanks for the kind words!

Reviewer: TinyBoxMew Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2021 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 30: A Little Epilogue

Wow this story has been a roller coaster. I'm glad Cassie got what she deserved in the end. What a fitting conclusion haha. 



Author's Response:

Yes, it’s been a long and bumpy ride, but we finally made to the end. I’m glad you like this new ending: not exactly what I had in mind initially, but a fitting ending nonetheless....if I do say so myself.

Reviewer: Gokuto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 30: A Little Epilogue

I really hope this keep on going. I really like it!



Author's Response:

Well, unless I get some huge pushes for alternate chapters, I feel like this story is pretty much complete. However, I have two other completed works posted, and have several more projects of various sizes in the works, so check out my other offerings and check back for new stories.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2021 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 29: A Little Fight for Survival

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As a sucker for good endings, I agree that this is a better direction to take the story, at least with how these characters were set up from the beginning. There are other instances where stuff like your original ending could've fit, but as you saw yourself, people didn't feel Nick deserved that, lol.

In any case, still looking forward to the next chapter. As for Babysitter Trouble, I know you already have a giantess Shannon alt ending planned but, have you considered one where she keeps Chris as she originally planned? I'll admit I just want to see more of her big butt and farts, but , hey, it was worth a shot lol.

On an unrelated note, I made a Discord server, it's a place to chill and talk, but also to have some writing discussion (centered around my own works but it's far from being the dominant topic), a bunch of fellow writers from writing.com and giantessworld have joined there. I'd be honored if you joined but no pressure, the link won't expire: https://discord.gg/5VzDmnux7q



Author's Response:

Yes, on the whole, I DO think this ending feels like a better fit; I just hope that my readers don’t give me the third degree on how similar it is to the ending of my last novel.

As far as Babysitter Trouble goes, I think the alternate ending is going to be the last alternate chapter I’m going to do for it, but don’t worry, there’ll still be lots of good stuff for everyone.

I’ll certainly have to check out your discord server soon, but for now, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2021 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29: A Little Fight for Survival

Wow...I can't believe she shrank too! Looks like Cassie's story is going to end like Shannon's from Babysitter Trouble. (Well at least until the alternate ending with giantess Shannon is released) Love the plot twist, and I can't wait to read more! Hope Cassie likes being a toy!



Author's Response:

Well, I hadn’t initially intended for the story to turn out the way it did, nor for it to turn out exactly like the end of “Babysitter Trouble”, but so many readers disliked my original ending (and in all honesty, for good reason) and wanted Cassie to get some kind of comeuppance, and I really wasn’t sure how to do it. In the end, the story kept pushing me in this direction: it needed some kind of excitement towards the end; otherwise, it would’ve seemed anticlimactic. I also know that some of the ending chapters displayed a major change in Cassie’s character, but in all reality, she was already showing herself to be insensitive towards Nick’s condition, and with how crazy he was making her, it isn’t exactly a huge leap for her to end up cracking under the pressure.

All in all, I’m sure the perfect ending is out there somewhere, but given all the hard work and extra energy I’ve put into this story, I think the ending I’ve written suits the direction I took the story.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2021 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Little Game Of Hide...

Great story. I wonder who will find Nick first.



Author's Response:

Well, wonder no more, because the next chapter is here!

Also, congratulations on being my 100th review!

Reviewer: Crocodile Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Little Betrayal

Hello Shrinker82;

I responded in detail to your review of "Excepts from John's Life" Chapter 3, here recently having just looked at those reviews again.  It's been a while since I've looked at that story so please forgive.

I know how dubious the Contact option is here so elected to use this method of reachhing you instead.

 

Your fellow writing collegue...

Crocodile



Author's Response:

Yes, sometimes we don’t exactly revisit our old stories as much as we should. Usually, it’s just: “Ah, I’m finally done with this story; now, on to the next.” I usually try to revisit my stories page whenever I visit this site to see the read count and if anyone’s posted a new review.

Obviously, there are some chapters in “Exerpts from John’s Life” that I liked better than others, and a few things I wished you’d expanded upon, but overall, one of my many favorites on this site. Besides, I usually just read the chapters that I like in my favorites and leave it at that.

Thanks for sharing your work, and for getting in touch.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2021 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Little Betrayal

Amazing once more! I was a little worried that this was going to be Nick's demise, but I went to check if the story was marked as completed, and since it wasn't I sighed in relief. I didn't expect Cassie to flip out like that, but in context, we should've seen it coming.

On an unrelated question, have you ever had the time to check out my story at writing.com? My style's not quite the same, but if you enjoy characters like Cassie or Shannon I think I can offer some good stuff in there. 



Author's Response:

I know, I wasn’t expecting to end his chapter where I did initially, but it was the only good stopping point for a while. There’re still at least 2 or 3 chapters left, so I’ve still got more work to do. I do hope you liked the details about Cassie’s ass, some of that came directly from your suggestions.

As far as Cassie’s character, I hadn’t initially planned on her character turning out the way it did: she’s starting to turn into another version of Shannon, and that’s not really what I was going for. I was trying to show how manipulative and devious she can be in planning Nick’s demise, while revealing she was really in it for herself, using Nick for sex; I think the problem was I made her character act too sweet in the last chapter, so that’s my fault.

I have bookmarked your writing.com story, but I haven’t had a chance to read it yet.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 23 2021 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Little Betrayal

I don't get her. The ups and downs, she doesn't make any sense to me. At first I thought his shrinking was a ruse to kill him, but then there was the last chapter where they fuck and it almost seemed like they were falling for each other again, only for her to flip back to wanting him dead. I just don't see people acting like Cassie, especially when his cheating on her occurred after she tried to murder him the first time.



Author's Response:

     So, my biggest stumbling block with this story is that the ending of this story is different from what I had initially outlined. In retrospect, I agree the story needed to have a far different ending, and had I known that, I would’ve taken the time to truly plan out the story better. I do have a new ending planned and thought out, but I needed certain plot points to happen in order to get there.

 

     As far as Cassie’s character is concerned, I hadn’t initially planned on her character turning out the way it did: she’s starting to turn into another version of Shannon, from “Babysitter Trouble”, and that’s really not how I envisioned her.

     Initially, I wanted to portray Cassie as a somewhat good person overall, but that we discover throughout the story that her marriage to Nick is based on what’s known as “conditional love”: Basically, she loves Nick when things between them and their overall lives are good, but when things get bad or tough, she tends to show disrespect and disdain for him. What I was trying to show, in this latest chapter, is how manipulative and devious she can be, revealing that she was just using Nick for sex before she disposes of him; I also wanted to provide a little bit of fan service as well, but I think the problem was I made her character act a bit too sweet and believable, so that’s my fault.

     In this new direction I was taking the ending, I was trying to portray her as someone who was normal at first, but driven to madness with the evolution of Nick’s powers. Obviously, worrying that every step she takes in her own apartment could squash her tiny husband is certainly a frightening experience and takes an unthinkable emotional toll, and it was only a matter of time before she snapped.

 

     As for Nick, I wanted him to be someone who is blinded by his love for Cassie, but more blinded by his sexual fantasies, and desperate to fulfill them. Despite everything she’s done to him, he still has feelings for her, and needed a wake-up call to come to his senses. You see a little of that in chapter 22 when Nick sheds his meekness and finally stands up to Cassie for the first time. But then Cassie reveals all the emotional struggles she’s going through, and Nick feels sorry for her and guilty about it and reverts back to his old, meek self.

 

     What I’m trying to set up now is an ending where every character gets an ending that they deserve—good or bad. All in all, I’ve obviously made some mistakes along the way, so it will probably be a while before I do a story like this again. I’m still going to write, but try my hand at different shrinking tropes. 

     Please forgive any mistakes I’ve made at the end of this story, but know that I do appreciate your honest reviews and constructive criticism. I do hope you enjoy the ending when it comes.

 

     Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 26: A Little Betrayal

You seriously didn't just kill Nick off AGAIN, did you? Cmon, give the guy a happy ending, for pete's sake!



Author's Response:

Oh, don’t worry. The story’s not over yet. We still have a couple more chapters to go.

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2021 4:39 AM Title: Forward

Nick, you're a dumbass. 

Also, I see Cassie took a play from the Shannon playbook. 



Author's Response:

Well, as I said in an earlier review response, Nick does tend to be very gullible, but Cassie is also very persuasive, and knows she can use her body to get Nick to do whatever she wants him to.

Also, yes, my giant plus-sized woman tend to become rather domineering as my stories progress. I don’t necessarily mean for them to turn out that way, they just sorta evolve into it.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2021 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 25: A Little Afternoon Delight

Sorry if that was a lot lol, I was just honest with the stuff I wanted. Also, thanks! I actually knew of Babysitter trouble, and knew about you for it before this one was even written, loved the butt content and Shannon throughout. And yes, I really enjoyed the Cassie workout chapters.

Nice to know you're a fellow assman. I don't have a whole lot of my work here on Giantessworld, because I'm mostly working on an interactive story at writing.com, but I think you might enjoy it. The stories posted here all have links to it iirc.

Lastly, definitely looking forward to your future projects and even more so if you plan on having more ass content.



Author's Response:

Oh, not at all. The more my readers give me to work with, the more I can appease them. I’m glad you’ve read and enjoyed my other stories, and believe me there will be many more to come. I can also guarantee that while you’ll see mostly feet and insertion scenarios in my stories, you’ll most definitely see some ass content if I can fit it (which, I normally can in some respect).

Thanks for reading, and for the reviews and support!

Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2021 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Little Afternoon Delight

Yeah I guess things staying a surprise is for the best. And, taking you up on your word, the kind of things I would like to see with Cassie's ass would be:

- (nonlethal) getting trapped or squished under and between her cheeks.

- her asking or demanding him to tickle her crack or asshole to make it feel good.

- farts, aware or unaware.

- booty climbing/walking on them.

- the shrinking getting out of hand and him getting really small (like 2mm tall) so Cassie's butt is more like a pair of planets to him in size, plus the stuff above. But I feel that could lead to a bad ending, so maybe it could serve as the basis for an alt one.



Author's Response:

     Well, yes, that certainly is a lot to ask for, but I’ll certainly try to appease you where I can. I’m guessing, based on your reviews, you probably enjoyed the end of Chapter 9 and Chapter 10, when Cassie did her workout with Nick stuck in her ass.

     In all honesty, while I do like feet, I’m also an ass man. Some of my favorite fantasies involve crawling up a woman’s juicy, bare ass—aware and unaware—and bouncing up and down like I’m on a trampoline. I’ve definitely envisioned scenarios for my stories involving the main character crawling up a young woman’s ass, and jumping up and down, desperately vying for her attention. Then, he accidentally slips and falls into her crack and gets stuck in her asshole. I haven’t been able to explore this scenario too much in my current stories, but they’re definitely in my bag of tricks for future stories.

     If you’ve got some time, I invite you to check out one of my other stories, Babysitter Trouble. There’s a lot of ass encounters in it that I think you’ll enjoy. If you don’t want to read the whole thing skip over to Chapters 24-25 for some things I think you’ll enjoy.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2021 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Little Afternoon Delight

Amazing chapter! I was losing hope we wouldn't get any more of Cassie's juicy booty. Looking forward to more of it



Author's Response:

     Well, I didn’t want to spoil anything for you; I figured you’d like it better if it were a surprise. Nonetheless, I’m glad you liked it, and I think you’ll like the start of the next chapter, too, but that’s all I’ll tell you for now...

...😏However, if there are any details about Cassie’s ass that you might like to read about in the next chapter, you could submit another review and let me know. 😉🤫

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2021 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Little Afternoon Delight

Great chapter! Hope Nick makes it out ok! Rather not have him die again.



Author's Response:

Well, at the very least, THIS time around, I’M REALLY scrutinizing my next chapter to make sure things make sense and as the events unfold, they head in a direction that feels appropriate. Obviously, this chapter was an appeasement to the erotica fans, but I also felt that it really sets up the end of the story (an ending I hope everyone likes).

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2021 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Little Afternoon Delight

Something tells me Cassie's not going to want to let him go...



Author's Response:

Well, her latest experience has certainly given her some second thoughts... 

Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2021 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 24: A Little Talk

Really enjoyed this story so far. It's just a bit selfish of me to say this, but I'd like to see some more butt content from Cassie before Nick moves on, if he survives, I think, lol



Author's Response:

Well, obviously I don’t want to spoil anything for you or the other readers, but Cassie’s butt is something that Nick loves to ogle when he’s normal sized....and loves to explore when he’s tiny. The next chapter, A Little Afternoon Delight, is going to follow Nick and Cassie through one last sexual escapade, so it’s certainly possible people will find something that they like.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2021 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 24: A Little Talk

God you're a putz nick. Don't you remember what she said she'd do to you if you shrunk again? Wonder who's on his life insurance policy and will?



Author's Response:

LOL! Yes, Nick tends to be very gullible, but in his defense, Cassie can be very persuasive.

     I had to think long and hard before going down this road, but for the story to end in a way I think my readers will be satisfied with, I needed one last encounter with Cassie being a giantess. I’m guessing, with this chapter, people will have an inkling as to what’s going to happen, but I’m still hoping to keep everyone on their toes. 

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2021 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little Aftermath

Hey! As it has been some time, I wanted to check in to see if you were still planning to.update this with new chapters. Also hoping you're still making progress on the extra chapters for Babysitter Trouble.  Great work!



Author's Response:

Hey there,

Yes, I know it’s been a bit, but I AM working on the last few chapters. I’ve just been busy lately and progress has been slow. I was hoping to have the next chapter posted sometime next week.

As far as Babysitter Trouble goes, the only work I’ve really been able to do on it is outline/scenario work; it’ll probably be more of the same until the rest of “With Great Power...” is completed. I’m still kicking around some ideas, but once my current story is done, I promise, it’ll be my primary focus.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2021 6:51 PM Title: Forward

Really loved the gentle footplay with Jenny in the dream! Glad he's finally coming to an understanding of what is causing the unintended shrinking,  and I really hope he ultimately chooses Jenny! Can't wait to see how it ends!



Author's Response:

I’m glad you liked it. I realized I wanted to address the reasons behind Nick’s shrinking spurts and his coming to terms with everything that’s happened, while still having something to satisfy the erotica fans. I actually had to do some extensive research to figure out exactly how and why Nick was having his shrinking spells, and the results will be in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading, and for the 5-star review!

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