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Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2020 12:30 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

Well its been interesting to read. Maybe if togas and sandles get old, Robyn can introduce Cleo to more typs of clowths. Wedge or wedge platform boots (sicne they are way easier to walk in apparently than stilettos), maybe with the wedge out of silvery metal or perfeft white marble, normal peopke make them as if it was war a 30 meter person, get all or perfectly smooth and such, then just use it to make it indestructable and size changing. Maybe build a city inside.

Also indroducing her to skin tight or cat suits, or even some scifi kinds and see what peaks her interest. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback DcZ!

I have setup your idea at the end of the most recent chapter, While I cant promise wedges at the moment, a wardrobe change is now on the cards!

Many thanks

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2020 4:56 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

Interesting how Cleo's tampering with Robyn's toys made them deperate for their next fix like addicts. If Robyn ever questions the nature of her reality, Cleo can show how pathetic she makes toys vs how Robyn is still normal, just horny.The toy's stamina, strength and speed improvements were intentional changes by Cleo right?



Author's Response:

Heya Panzer,

I just uploaded a chapter with some more of Cleo messing with human bodies, hopefully answers your question without me being so blunt as to just tell you! :)

Thanks for the feedback

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2020 10:41 PM Title: Cleo's Girlfriend

Okay! Lots of interesting things here!

Robyn is torn between her family and Cleo. Also intriguing how she tells her sister that the more she associates herself with cleo the more she’ll betray her people... it’s like cleo is Lowkey corrupting her.

ALSO I knew cleos juices would give humans superpowers! I’m surprised robyn hasn’t drank that goddess juice yet. The power sex would’ve been amazing.

Slowly Robyn is losing her humanity and giving in to divinity with cleo...

Author's Response:

Hello again!

Cleo is due to meet Robyn's family in either the next chapter or the one after depending on how long one takes.

I wanted to explain the power a little more so the current chapter skims through that.

Thanks again for the feedback!

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2020 8:20 PM Title: Cleo's Vacation

Yeah, take that Crab Shack! No restaurant deserves to be crushed more.

Speaking of Crab Shack, Robyn should introduce Cleo to late night taco bell runs and stoner comedies.... with tiny people. And once Cleo's friends come, Robyn can introduce them to 'clubbing'... at skyscraper sizes. Or visiting the beach... Or 'shopping' for dresses and heels, or 'going to college' and killing the professor for giving 'bad grades'. I think scenes like that would be fun and remind the reader that even though they're adults and goddess and demi-goddess, they're still young college aged people and have a 'fun/wild' side.

1 nitpick: Cleo's comfortable size should probably be 400 feet, so people are an inch by comparison. Otherwise, they're a bit big for eating whole at 4 inches comparatively.

So, 400 ft tall(1 inch humans) to 4 miles tall(0.5 mm humans) to island crushing (I'm gonna say 40 miles, idk)

How does Robyn make herself grow? It was exhausting for Leah to grow to their size in the previous chapter. Is it like a thread Robyn can pull on subconciously to request power from Cleo or did Cleo give her an internal power source that just tops up from Cleo as needed. Or is Robyn now a human plant with Cleo as the sun? I think Cleo would be smart and go with the first option as it leaves Cleo in control.



Author's Response:

Hi Panzer,

You're totally right about the scale and I actually went back through and adjusted that, its now 400 default throughout.

I'm totally down for more college-girl scenarios! something I'll give some thought to.

I actually through together a quick chapter to address this concern with Robyn.

 

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Sunshine1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2020 8:07 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

This has got to be one of the better stories I've read, and certainly my top favorite that is being updated as we speak!

It seems Robyn has eaten three humans already, it would be fun if she found joy in it - if only swallowing whole. And maybe we'll get some male action in here too someway? Oooh, and more boob-play. Mmmm..

I love it, I wish I was one of these goddesses. Keep it up!

-Sunshine



Author's Response:

Wonderful to have your review! I have to say I enjoyed reading the story you put out!

 

Robyn's aversion to eating humans will be a running plot im sure! :)

Giant Male is divisive on this site & I am reluctant to include it without having declared it up front and letting people know it was part of it.  There will be plenty of men being abused tho.

Boob play is certainly something I can do alot more of!

If there is anything else you would like to see then drop me another review!

The latest story is a short attempt to clear up Robyn's character.

 

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2020 5:47 PM Title: Cleo's Vacation

Wow that scene was hot as hell. Excellent work!

It’s also interesting to see that despite the fact that Cleo considers Robyn her lover, she still addresses her as “slave”.

Robyn seriously would chose Cleo over her own human race. Talk about huge betrayal. But then again maybe deep down she’s doing this because she’s scared and chooses life and submission to Cleo over rejection and death.

Would be interesting to see Robyn reaction if Cleo were to torment or... eat robyns family... ;)
Will Robyn break or will she be like meh it’s okay. Perfect situation of who do you choose a goddess or your own blood.

Great chapter! Looking forward for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

I put together a short Robyn chapter to address some character issues raised. Give her thoughts on the situation. Hope it helps!

The "Slave" "Servant" comments were roleplay, Robyn actually thinks during the chapter how erotic it feels to be called servant now she feels safe with her as a partner.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: kilobug Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 10:45 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

This is an awesome story. Hope to see some giga sizes!



Author's Response:

Many thanks for the words of support, I threw in a small plash of Giga for you.

 

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 8:35 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

That's an interesting way to handle that. And you tied up the loose end of the guys from the first chapter.

Its interesting that the gods are not uniform in power level. There seems to be a wide gulf between Cleo and Leah. I'm assuming the gods are like mortals with powers, so maybe Cleo drawing so much power would be shocking to the higher ups of her race and they would exhibit jealousy or greed. Maybe by the end of the story even her own race are like mortals to her and those friends she elevates with her.

Is the well in a pocket dimension or something? A scene of someone foolish (not knowing or understanding that the power is tied to Cleo) trying to take some power for themselves only to end up self-inflicting a horrible death would be cool. And Cleo getting to judge and mock that person as they scream and melt adding their powers to the well. Maybe they could be an ex or an enemy from home.

So close to a rampage / sex on city scene! You tease us.



Author's Response:

Hey again Panzer,

Cleo is certainly a special case, she was basically forced into taking the position because of her natural talent. Shes growing into the role though!

The well is in a sealed chamber deep in the earth, Leah create it with no points of entry so only Divines could enter.

Enjoy the rampage sex, If the story progresses I imagine i'll be able to get more from other perspectives going forward.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 5:20 PM Title: Cleo's Crisis

Heya JustForTribute!

Glad to see you update the story again! It’s interesting that so much power can overwhelm Cleo. Surely Robyn can see that she isn’t a true god but she’s a person too with family and friends who just so happens to have abilities that people like us would consider god like. A true god would be all powerful with no weakness.

I wonder if robyn drinking from that pool that Cleo spewed from her nether regions is the key to make robyn a goddess as well. Maybe the cleos coding binds with robyns human lifeform.

Also Interesting how she tried to go cannibal but found it gross and disgusting, some giantess would’ve loved it but it’s nice to see robyn so far isn’t like them.

So right now while in the temple they are giant sized? Like 100ft where as the humans are like an inch tall to them correct? Or are they normal female sized but shrunk humans so they are 1 inch to them.? Just wanted to double check.

Maybe Cleo and Robyn can learn about each other’s ways of life while they are being worshiped in the temple. Good old giant footrubs while Cleo tells robyn more about her race and Robyn does the same, so the lore can fit in with the story.

Great chapter as always! Can’t wait for the next!

Author's Response:

I'm going to nearly perfect, limited by a few factors but the main one being her own mind.

 

Glad you appreciate Robyn's dislike of vore for herself, even if shes fine with it for Cleo.

 

Temples are all scaled around Cleo being 100ft tall, they will never be experienced by humans as Cleo and Robyn see them.

I'll see about more intimate worship soon, the most recent chapter went totally the other way.

 

Thanks for the feedback!

JFT

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 1:10 PM Title: Cleo's Oversight

Seems like Cleo has a little trouble convincing the population to submit.

I like how naive she is and how little value she gives to human life. But on the other hand, this makes people more scared of her and they obey out of scaredness instead of submitting.

Thank you for writing so many chapters and reading these reviews!



Author's Response:

Cleo is certainly torn between her desire to live life and structure it.

Cleo's ultimatum went a long way to getting people on board but she's not happy with the result!

 

I hope you enjoy the latest chapter! It's pure fetish from thier perspective!

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2020 10:49 PM Title: Cleo's Ultimatum

I think Robyn has officially been larger than Cleo due to her size when she collected Jessica. Cleo needs to correct that.

Cleo seems distracted with horniness. Maybe she should use some of that worship power to create new bodies for her to multitask from. Spread the load of the worship over multiple bodies.That would really scare Robyn.

Needs some sex with giant Cleo and Robyn out in the world with varying scale people as toys. Sex in/on/over a city/state/country. Using people/crowds/skyscapers/world geography.Definitely a slow move up the size chain so its not like, Cleo's been the size of a mountain now what.

I liked the scene with Cleo pretending to be mortal to get coffee. Maybe she and Robyn can disguise themselves and Robyn can teach her about mortal life. She could have a curious/ guilty pleasure side that enjoys it from time to time. Maybe a side lover or 2.

Cleo and Robyn are girlfriends now in word, but Robyn is definitely still a pet/toy. Maybe that can evolve more over time? Maybe Cleo's friends/family can be a catalyst to Cleo determining how she really feels.

Interested in what happens when Cleo meets Robyn's family and vice versa.

I looked back at Handmaids Tales, cause I think you did a great job with the creativity and descriptions, especially in chapters 1, 3 and 5.




Author's Response:

Thanks again Panzer,

 

I felt i should address the power thing although I'm not a big fan of clones so this Cleo's Crisis is my answer to that.

 

The last chapter was a bit world-building so the next one will be where some action should happen!

Interesting you goto Handmaids Tales! That's my least popular POGU series, Barely had any interest in it.

 

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2020 7:54 PM Title: Cleo's Ultimatum

Wow you are fast! Another excellent chapter! It’s interesting seeing robyn sort of conflicted like does she really like her or does she fear her and suffer from Stockholm syndrome. Also nice to see she’s resistant from going cannibal, even though she will likely give in eventually.

Cleo and Robyn should both grow big and destroy another town... perhaps one that doesn’t believe in cleos divinity ;) sex in the city. the whole world watches Robyn, a fellow human help a destructive goddess, even her parents are shocked.

Author's Response:

Heya! Thanks again for the feedback.

 

I took a chapter to do some world building and try and flesh out the whole power thing.

I think the sex in the city idea shouldnt be too far away now!

 

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2020 10:16 AM Title: Cleo's Oversight

It’s great to see Robyn still does care about her family and Deep down, despite being madly in love with Cleo, she still fears her. she still has a piece of her humanity left.

I’m curious how tall are Robyn and Cleo in this chapter? ;) since they are constantly changing sizes I figured it’s always good to mention it. I’m always interested in the size comparison for better visualization of the story.

It’s also very interesting seeing cleo so merciful and patient lately, she’s a goddess and could get that coffee as she pleases, yet she waits in line like the rest.

I’m really liking this relationship between Robyn and Cleo. She’s going to continue breaking her rules and I feel like Robyn will definitely be a goddess once Cleo fully trusts Robyn. Shes going to need to make her stronger and durable if she’s going to make love to her ;)

Cleo could slowly start making her subjects treat Robyn like a goddess and observe her behavior in a way to solidify her trust. Typical Greek style, she’s in bed while some people feed her others massage/lick/kiss her breasts, feet. Maybe even make Robyn eat her first human.... all to end in a powerful kiss and lovemaking scene as she almost fully leaves her humanity and embraces her one true goddess. It looks like you are setting Robyn down this dark path so why not make it interesting ;)

Anyways as usual great chapter!!! Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hello again,

While in the temple, you can assume they are keeping humans around an inch in comparison.

New chapter develops the mian story alot more and gives the world a Goddess to worship. Going forward she can justify her actions.

 

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 7:36 PM Title: Cleo’s Turmoil

One suggestion I had was hoping Cleo won’t be super super giant because I feel like you lose interaction between the giantess that are too big and the people. It actually has happened a lot with many giantess stories and for me at least it kinda makes the story dull as all they do is stomp and destroy. I like how you constantly change her heights every chapter!

After all she doesnt really want to harm the people she wants them to worship her so making her too too big would make it pointless for her to accomplish that desire.

Anyways, love your story! Can’t wait to read more :)

Author's Response:

As you pointed out, Cleo is as however big she feels like being, This allows her to do whatever she needs to do and I am not limiting her if she decides a country has to go. Although she will likley not be fixed at a larger size.

Many thanks for your feedback! inspired writing yet another chapter in short order!

Kind regards

JFT

 

 

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 7:25 PM Title: Cleo’s Turmoil

Damn that was sad seeing how easy Robyn sort of turned on her family and boyfriend just for Cleo. A part of me feels like if her family ostracizes her too much robyn would go dark maybe asking Cleo to end them... I mean Cleo already wants to do that Lowkey!

I truly feel like once their relationship fully solidifies Robyn will become a goddess like her. So far there’s no limit to her power so it would make sense to turn her lover into an immortal all powerful being.

Great chapter! Also loved the two giantess playing chess with normal sized people as the pieces haha.

Author's Response:

Heya,

Its a fetish story at the end of the day, I can't spend chapters on family drama, so I intentionally have characters make realisations swiftly.

However in the most recent chapter I did revisit the family stuff in response to this feedback! :)

Cleo & Robyn have an intersting power dynamic I wish to explore more before advancing Robyn's abilities.

 

cheers

JFT

Reviewer: titantonic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 4:35 PM Title: Cleo's Worship

Makes me wish I was Robyn. Nice chapter!



Author's Response:

New Chapter is all about Robyn, Thanks for the feedback! Inspired a late night writing session!

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 1:26 PM Title: Cleo's Collection

Hi! I’m new and I gotta say I love your story so far! Cleo surely is being corrupted with this power and so is Robyn. If Cleo is so worried about dating Robyn why not turn Robyn into a goddess as well? ;) I mean once they get to know each other more and such. no need to rush but yeah if Cleo has the power to do anything! Surely she can do this for Robyn once she’s proven herself of course. Maybe Cleo can have some servants in her palace do many duties like fan her, massage/lick her feet if she’s kinky and feed her and Robyn food ;)

Overall I like how it’s going! But hopefully her parents won’t come visit until after Cleo and Robyn had their fun ;) keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Cleo was schooled in divine rulership, giving others power is something she is genuinley afraid of, however she has already bent her own rules for Robyn.

 

I took a chapter to develop Cleo/Robyn a little before pushing into the real kink with them coming soon!

Having Robyn tempered Cleo in the last Chapter, but it ended with Robyn encouraging her back to power play.

Many thanks for taking the time to leave feedback!

 

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2020 6:48 PM Title: Cleo's Mission

Good to read you again. Lots of things that I've imagined happening here:

Robyn could use her new power and size to get some revenge on people she doesn't like.

Cleo could get pissed off for some reason and rampage through a city.

Cleo could over time get closer/romantic with Robyn despite wanting to keep it master and servant.

Cleo could learn about human history and realize they're capable of launching stuff into space. She could demand they colonize the moon and mars. More civilizations -> more people -> more power.

Cleo could experiment with different sizes and be able to grow larger the more people worship.

Her friends/family could come to visit later.

She could gift random humans size and power and take it away when the consequences are coming.



Author's Response:

Nice to see you again Panzer,

I think you've basically covered everything, I'm sure I'll hit alot of these anyway as the story unfolds! :) I already have a few of them mapped out.

Reviewer: tinykev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2020 10:28 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

That chapter was so arousing!! Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: tinykev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2020 9:09 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

Awesome giantess!!! Maybe have her put a bunch of tiny people on her body to explore as she lays down, on her back and/or stomach.



Author's Response:

New Chapter, Inspired by this short review, Thanks TinyKev

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