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Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 10:12 PM Title: Robyn's Sister

A woman who's not excited for her youngest sister's birthday? What blasphemy has befallen Robyn? She's probably started questioning who and what she is now that she's been ascended. Maybe someone wise and eternal and had been ascended herself an eternity ago can give her some words of wisdom.

Robyn revealing her divinity to the world is a perfect time for.....

A coming out party!!! A time honored tradition. Robyn can invite Sam and Janna. And Cleo can finally invite her friends and mother (can't forget her) and the people of Earth can shit their pants when they realize that there's an entire civilization of goddesses.

They can invite some olympian men as entertainment. The men of course have no idea what they're in for. Party games to their detriment.

Red carpets and limousines, glamorous dresses and sky-high heels. Cindy and other priestesses can flitter around as waitresses with human horderves and alcohol.

Cameras and reporters can show it like the oscars. Commenting on the strategic and creative use of humans as accessories.

And they can fuck up a town or 2 that's still in the not worshipping category.



Author's Response:

Hi Panzer,

Sorry its been slow latly and ive thrown out a filler chapter as i process my thoughts and find time. I love the idea! its certainly something i thinking on. I may want to do a setup chapter for something like that.

Human accessories is a theme i love, This will be coming more prominent im certain!

Thanks for your patience

JFT

 

 

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 6:36 PM Title: Robyn's Sister

Well this did give some clarification so thank you for that :) good to see robyn still loves her sisters.

So the sisters are demi goddesses/priestesses right? Like what robyn used to be to cleo before she ascended?

Also by food you meant all 4 girls are gonna eat people from Jamestown? Weren’t the sisters grossed out with eating mortals? Or maybe I misread that...

As for revealing robyns divinity.. maybe cleo can perform some sort of ceremony thats being broadcast all throughout the remaining world to introduce her. Then visit popular cities on earth physically so the people can worship them.

Also interesting how we stopped with cleos titles and now going with Robyns this and Robyns that.. it’s just as Cleo feared.. Robyn is powerful and taking control.. dun dun dun...

Also interesting how robyn now has an attitude with cleo, before robyn would be Lowkey nervous and watch what she would say to cleo. But now that she’s a goddess she doesn’t need to hold back and can talk back to cleo and be angry at her etc.

Also whatever happened to the piss water that Cleos body exerted, it actually gave some mortals power right? What would happen in robyn drank it? ;) or better yet... her sisters hehe.

Author's Response:

I meant they were eatin food, the town was a birthday present.

Robyn is certainly feeling more equal now and i plan to explore that more.

The Piss water is Cleo's reserve power :D Robyn has her own now aswell, still havnt done anything with it yet.

I am also still considering some requests on Robyn's coming out.

Sorry the reply is slow, life is busy and writing inspiration has been low.

Kind Regards

JFT

Reviewer: Sunshine1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 10:29 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

I... wow. Holy shit. <3 <3



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it! <3 Feel free to suggest other themes!

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 10:16 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

So much to unpack here. Robyn seems to be having a bit of an identity crisis without knowing. She's dissociating mortal Robyn from goddess Robyn. She doesn't see her parents as her parents anymore and doesn't see Janna and Sam as her sisters. I'd hate to break it to her, but that means she should think of Cassandra as her mother and Cleo as her sister. Absolutely kill her libido.

Also, I guess Janna doesn't like her parents either since the first thing she does is shove them in a box. What's with people hating their parents?

Cleo's going to be pissed when she finds out Sam can't post because Robyn shrunk her and not her art supplies and camera.

Robyn's being hypocritical, judgemental, and something else I can't think of a word for but she's being it. 'Cleo make my sisters priestesses. Oh no, Sam's abusing and killing humans. Better unmake her a priestess instead of talking to her and setting boundaries on her behavior.' Meanwhile she uses them as sex toys, has murdered/ assisted in murdering millions (RIP Middle Earth) and now takes pleasure in eating them. She essentially gave her sisters power and knowing what she does, she has some nerve to judge. Cleo should talk some sense into her. Can't jump in and punish someone for something you haven't told them not to do. Set boundaries then punish for broken boundaries. She's obviously going to be a bad parent with that sort of parenting strategy.

Hope Cleo and Robyn aren't too mean when they next see Leah. Sure she narced to Cass, but Cleo would have died if Leah hadn't come to the rescue. And she did them a huge favor by letting Cass be angry and let that anger drop off over a few weeks. Otherwise, no question, Robyn would have been snuffed out like a candle in a hurricane. So really, she saved both of them at least once each and is entirely the reason Robyn is a goddess. She should get a hero's welcome, and first dibs on the mortals in Cleo's fridge, minimum as a thank you. And she should make this her theme song (You're Welcome -Disney's Moana) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79DijItQXMM



Author's Response:

So I took a chapter to clear up the sister thing, address the accusations of hypocracy and give Cleo a playful scene.

I'll go into the Leah issue soon dont worry! There are a few Olympians I need to find time for!

My response is short as Ive just written a chapter to address your sisters concerns xD

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 6:07 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

Oh i know humanity Is fucked so long as Cleo and Robyn exist LOL. I was just mainly worried about Robyns sisters. Based on what I understood it was like robyn didn’t care about them anymore

“I no longer want them, a reminder of a life no longer mine,” she said casually, “I’m no longer human Janna, we are sisters in memory only, although I do still feel love for you,” she offered as Janna felt a small part of her heart break. Robyn plucked a fleeing woman from the floor and tossed it into her mouth as she smiled towards Cleo. “

Sounded like robyn doesn’t see them as sisters anymore and just some slaves like the rest of humanity. Hope that’s not the case..

Author's Response:

Based on your concern for her sisters, I clearled that up a little in the new chapter.

Hope this helps a little.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 4:11 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

its crazy how i keep on trying to think of a way for humanity to escape there suffering or somehow fight back but its all just hopeless..(unless this was a JRPG XD) i would most likely just kill myself if i were in these humans shoes.



Author's Response:

I think you have a good chance of survival in this world aslong as you live in a blue zone! :)

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 3:45 PM Title: Robyn’s Divinity

Holy fuck... Robyn has already been corrupted by power... not only does she eat humans now when she considered it gross before, but she legit just broke her connection with her sisters... what the hell?! I mean the rest of humanity I can understand but her own sisters?!

The rest of the story will be a scary one. Interesting chapter..

Im guess there will be more power play between the two goddesses, destroying more cities. Maybe Robyn will release her parents and force them and her sisters to worship her. Robyn will be more controlling which kind of scares Cleo, Robyn is no longer tied to cleo so she can’t strip her of her power. I’m guessing the direction you are going with Robyn now is she’s lost all her morals and will now be a bitchy goddess so might as well be cruel. Maybe she forces her family to clean her feet or suffer the consequences.

OOOH or maybe cleo and Robyn can get back at that Olympian girl that snitched on cleos mom.. forgot what her name was.

Cleo should gather a world meeting to announce the presence of a co goddess and the world watched as they grow huge and make love.

Finally... Will Robyn cross the line and eat her own family...? Maybe the parents of sisters do something disrespectful which gets her mad.

Author's Response:

Okay where to start, The speed that she turned to vore was in response to review request on here,It may of taken longer if i hadnt had the request but it was coming.

She gave her parents to Janna and she obviously still cares for her sisters or visit would of gone much worse for them.

Cleo will be looking to have words with Leah for sure aswell as other Olympians! :)

Robyn and Cleo are now equal to announcing her to world sounds Logical! ill think on this.

If anyone is cheering for humanity in this story they need to stop xD

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 3:42 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

lordie...crucified humans??? this is horrible. are kids subjegated to the same stuff? ughh. great chappy. funny how i have to watch something positive everytime i finish with one of your chapters now XD. i pray(lol) this wont ever happen irl. or else we are all screwed. 



Author's Response:

I feel the opposite, I welcome our beautiful sadistic overlords! :D

Aslong as you feel something im glad, even if its pending dread.

Thanks for the words, keeps me writing!

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 1:05 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

OH i forgot to ask. do your characters have any real life or fictional look alikes? interested in how they look.



Author's Response:

Characters are written deliberatly vague, everyone has thier own view of perfection and im not going to tell people what that should be, I offer defining characteristics so your mind can identify your perfect fit.

Kr - JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 12:56 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

oh ok. i was just confused about her intentions

 

about the new chapter though it was good like  all of your chapters. I wanted to see cleos mother for a while. the way goddesses treat humans is terrible. i really hate them. humans are screwed no matter what they do. i like that sort of darkness and despair this story has when you get pass the kinky and sexy stuff. that humans are just destined to suffer. kinda sad when you think about it too much. looking forward to they next chappy



Author's Response:

New Chapter shows just how little human life means to the girls with power, To clarify in the new chatper(Robyn's Divinity), Robyn is outraged at her sister, not feeling sorry for the humans. She doesnt like her youngest sister being so public.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 10:54 PM Title: Cleo’s Mother

Humans just love putting themselves in a position to get eaten. Asking for an embassy inside Cleo's home. The nerve.

I think its funny that Robyn has been shrinking down and running across the street for a toilet for however long. A month or more? Guess she actually might not be needing it if she can now magic away her unseemly needs like Cleo.

TV needs to be OLED. Only the best for a goddess.

Funny that Robyn still has to remind Cleo to feed her pets. Cleo should just make them their own mini apartment with clear walls and an auto restocking pantry/fridge. Or maybe Robyn takes over feeding duty with her new powers.

Blended humans. Something tells me Cleo is going to have a long way to go before she makes a passable meal with no divine intervention.

Love the goddess room. Can't wait for some Olympians Cleo doesn't like to come through so she and Robyn can intimidate them.

I wonder what Cindy gets up to when not attending to Cleo. Also, does she get her own room in the apartment or some mortal apartment building with an incredibly terrified landlord? Is she even allowed to sleep? Or join Cleo and Robyn in watching tv? etc.

Seems like Cleo satisfies Robyn more than the otherway around.

Ah, Mother Cassandra. The only being that makes Cleo look like a mortal by comparison. And a liar too. 'I changed nothing...' Ha. Though I don't see what Cassandra could use Robyn for that she couldn't do infinitely better herself. Unless its to spy on Cleo or something. Helicopter parenting Goddess style.

Sarah cameo? ;)

Samantha's gonna freak and Janna's gonna.... be Janna I guess.




Author's Response:

Heya Panzer,

I get the impression you're the only one who knew Cassandra ^^ The Angel line was a bit on the nose maybe! :)

Cleo will be trying to use the kitchen properly in future chapters for sure!

I will be bringing some olympians over soon, just had to finish tying up the setup & ascensions!

Cassandra is probably going to helicopter parent for a while, shes been living the low-power life for a long time. Sarah cameo would tie it a bit too close to POGU but maybe who knows! depends if people want it.

Sam & Janna are making an appearance in teh new chapter!

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: Sunshine1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 7:51 PM Title: Cleo’s Mother

Oh my-- this is hot. And opens a few new possibilities.. Mmm.. Maybe Robyn no longer find humans to taste bad? Opens up for some amazing powerplay scenes with her sisters. Meeting them but nonchalantly nibbling on others. Oh my.. Am I daydreaming? :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're enjoying it! I took your sugestions and ran with them for the new Chapter, Robyn's Divinity! feel free to throw more ideas & desires my way! :D

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 6:57 PM Title: Cleo’s Mother

NOW robyn is a goddess! Oh my, I’m just as excited as Cleo.. hehe. However... it sounds like robyn just made a devils bargain. She would be most comparable to a genie, all the power in the world but Cassandra is her restricting lamp.

Interesting chapter! Now Cleo and Robyn can truly be together!

Author's Response:

Thanks for thre review! Robyn's divinity is going out soon and from then im open to scenarios! :D

Cassandra's mian aim is to use Robyn as a way to get official invites to the world for whoever she wants without needing to flex power, Shes been living a low-power life for a long time.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2020 12:27 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

the response to your response to my response(lol). no i fully know what to expect. its just that cleos intentions are really confusing. like she dosent want humans to be farm animals but she stuff them in a jar in a freezer? its not a problem with the genre of the story but more of a problem with the character. like..it feels that the tiana chapter was made to try and paint cleo as a better person and it works for  second until you remember this is the person that killed millions of men,women and children and forced a princeses to destroy her own country and kill her dad mentally breaking her. it just makes her crying in that chapter questionable. this could apply to robyn too. At some moments she is scared about what cleo is doing to humans but was literally the one who was controlling the princess killing all of those men,women,and children.



Author's Response:

I guess I was trying to show perspective. Cleo is trying to rule as a Divine authority, and views tributes, sacrafices & her daily needs as a perk of her chosen method. Tiana was ruling as a Farmer, breeding humans into dosile creatures with no spirit at all. Cleo's issue ith Tiana's method is that to her it feels like a massive waste of human potential.

Shes not pretending to be a nice ruler, she just wanted to show humanity that even with her lusty genocide, shes stil thier better choice.

Robyn is living day to day as if it was her last, she does whatever Cleo wants and tries to enjoy it the most she can. Her perspective on humanity is warped by her proximity to Cleo and the realty of being 400ft tall. Being forced to walk through racks of broken people your own size watching that horror , knowing it could easily be you should circumstances change is going to break someone like Robyn.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2020 8:45 AM Title: Cleo’s Update

Hehe it’s so good to see cleo finally turn robyn into a goddess. It was only a matter of time! Now we will see if robyn will be corrupted by this power or not despite the fact that robyn told her to not to let it get to her head. Robyn certainly have a change in attitude with her new god status.

I agree with panzer from the last chapter in terms of size difference, Cleo and Robyn should be the biggest of course since they are THE goddesses. Cindy should be slightly shorter than them. And then work their way down with the Demi priestesses and then the mortals being only as big as Cleo and Robyns toes.

Should have some sound effects too when a mortal is in the presence of the goddesses. Love the use of capital letters! Maybe when Robyn walks it would feel like an earthquake to the mortals.

Can’t wait for the upcoming goddesses-sex! Maybe one city will get the New Zealand treatment after all 96% of the world worship her.. maybe this city (of your choice) is part of that 4% that resist. Cleo and Robyn embrace their godhood and have sex in the city scissor position. maybe using skyscrapers as giant dildos hehe.

Just some ideas lol. Great chapter! Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Cleo only half-heartdly made Robyn into a Goddess. This was corrected in the newest Chapter.

 

The biggest issue with Size for Cleo is that she doesnt care so much, She knows she is the powerful one, having somone larger than you kneel and grovel before you is just as empowering if not more so than having people who are smaller. In the story context, aslong as the huge people are beautiful women I dont see the problem :) I'll keep it in mind though that its popular to keep Cleo the biggest.

 

Sound descriptions are a good idea! will think about that next time I do a more lewd chapter.

 

I think im done with world building after Cleo's Mother so I can now focus on Cleo and Robyn exploring thier desires.  If you're desperate for some building fucking, Chapter 4 of Handmaids tales has a Dildo Skyscraper, Ive also written it somewhere else aswell but i cant remember where. Not saying it won't happen here too! just offering an alternative.

 

Kind Regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2020 4:56 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity

to respond to your response. i see. thhey arent all getting screwed over but alot still are  going by cleos diet and sexual urges. i just dont understand why she would be afraid of tianas world but then jamming humans in a jar and putting them in a freezer to cook or blend them. or use them for sexual plesure(all seeming to be innocence who worshipped her). i get that this story is about that stuff but it makes it confusing.



Author's Response:

Just so I understand you, You are looking for a Goddess fetish story without any of the mentioned powerplay? So an extreme gentle Goddess story?

~JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2020 10:04 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

i dont really see the point of cleo crying and being scared of what tiana does to her humans if what she does to her humans is arguably worse then what tiana does. intreresting chapter 



Author's Response:

The difference is that 99% of humanity are left to live thier lives of thier own free will. Shes not reducing the whole population down to mindless farm animals.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2020 8:14 PM Title: Cleo’s Mercy

Nit-pick again. 400 ft.

Don't like the idea of priestesses larger than Cleo and Robyn. Hope the size she gave them is their hard max with an even lower hard max for mortals that priestesses enlarge. Demi-priestesses?

Maybe a size heirarchy:
Cleo, Robyn and Cindy, 400 to whatever Cleo feels like
Priestesses, hard max 400
Demi-Priestesses, 50
Mortals, Squishably normal to micro.

Cleo's getting ready for trouble. Would any trouble besides her mother even happen? She's the only one angry about anything so far. I'd think the council would be happy with setup complete and Cleo 're-educated' and forget that Cleo even exists other than the energy she provides to power their world.

Are there going to be any light hearted chapters with her friends/family before people start trying to start something? Will Cleo get her friends on her side? Cleo and Robyn never did get to actually do the shopping.

Thinking upon what happens to Olympians that piss Cleo off or otherwise try to start something. Will Cleo offer the vanquished a position as worshipper, servant, sex slave, lobster, one way trip back to Olympia or death? I don't think she'd want to kill a fellow Olympian, she'd never be able to go home and her family wouldn't look at her the same way. Much higher stakes than killng mortals since mortals are her property. What happens if an Olympian worships Cleo? Is their worship energy worth X mortals?

Cleo should have the humans start building an interstellar empire for her. Much more worship energy. Cleo and Robyn the size of a star using a planet of unbelievers as a toy.



Author's Response:

Heya Panzer,

Thanks for the catching that size issue, I have corrected it. I have just thrown together a quick "update" chapter but now I am happy with the situation, I can return to "light hearted" chapters.

I am expecting some Olympian guests, We will revisit Robyn's sisters and Shopping is still in my mind.

Cleo doesnt care so much for the sizes of others, shes not insecure in her power, although you are right and in my update chapter, i locked other priestesses to 100ft while in Cleo's home.

The only issue with "Interstellar" is that earth isnt there and Olympia are not so technological as magical so its a long term project with Cleo having limited inscentive right now.

Kind Regards

JFT

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2020 4:13 PM Title: Cleo’s Mercy

Cleo shuould etudy why her method works so imencly better than the rest if her kinds, once shes dissuaded the counsel from messing with her more long term.

And yeah, their normal method is way worse than petri dish world or making insoles out of cities, or either used in clothing.

Robyn should also still show her more sicfi and fanticy movies, books, shows, and art, may give them both more ideas. And also since the world is now cooperating, getting more skills, say dancing for example, and ideas by skimming the internet (Cleo dosn't seem to have been fully introduced to it, that is shamfull and needs to be rectified).

Also, with so many prestrces, beyond rewarding them for good service the obvious way, perhaps allow them to customize themselves to a degree, wings may be practical and tell other people who they are, but making the body and clothes they want (the digree corresponding to how well they have been boing obviously) may yield more loyal and dedicated ones, and make masses fear or respect or other the various priestesses. And some basic competition shouldent be too bad. (You can guess the degree and kind of alterstions but thats up to you)  

The storys been good, Robyn should show Cleo the innumerable examples of how other relationships have developed and work out how they want to take their's, but its your story, take what I'v said as you will. Otherwise, let us readers see wherer you go next. 



I also read the Charlotte stories when they were coming out, pretty decent. 



Author's Response:

Hiya DcZ,

I took a quick chapter to moderize Cleo for you. She going to be dressing with more variety going forwards. I also like your idea of making the wings status symbols among the priestesses, this is something I am exploring.

Cleo also recognised Robyn as closer to an equal in thie small update.

Glad you enjoyed Charlotte's stories, they were my first.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2020 3:53 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity

welp its nice and all she wont treat them like tiana does. but there kinda still getting killed anyway by an arguably more degenarative manner. kinda defeats the point. another good chappy as always 

 



Author's Response:

All things in perspective. Next chapter is another quick maintenance one before we drop into some more playful content again.

Thanks again for the feedback

JFT

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